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Reviewer: Jdream Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2023 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 85

Love your Story! Your way of writing their realtionship is just beautiful. Can't wait for the next charter, please Update soon.

Reviewer: Laydeekat Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2022 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is a really good story can't wait to read the rest.

Reviewer: NellieMarie Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2022 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 85

Ahh, I hope you update this story again at some point! It's so good! 

Reviewer: Anniaienharttt Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2021 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

This story is so amazing. Cherell was such a great character and her relationship with Michael was fabulously done. Everything felt so real.I’ll definitely be coming back to re-read this story again.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it ☺ 

Reviewer: kingskid17 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2021 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 3

New reader here! I love how you portray the all the characters and it makes it very easy to get lost in the story because of how realistic the interactions are. I am loving the chemistry between Michael and Cherell, it seems they have a lot in common and i feel that a true friendship has been born. Will definitely be reading more.

Reviewer: imanim1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2020 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 85

I’ve read this so many times. I love it so much. Please update!!!!!

Reviewer: Plainly_lovey Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2020 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wonderfully done

Author's Response:

Thank you 

Reviewer: mjj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2020 12:46 am Title: Chapter 1

I miss this story! Hope you update it soooooonnnnnn! 



Author's Response:

I miss writing this story, but I'm doing like a million stories at once and trying to get most of them published. I hope I can come back to it soon. 

I've been thinking about putting it on Wattpad with my other stuff, but I'm too embarrassed by my beginner writing skills early on in the story. Maybe I'll woman up one day 🤣.

Reviewer: AvengingEndgame19 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 15

I really was feeling a variety of emotions towards this chapter, it's ridiculous how Cherell ends up in the middle of drama when all she wanted was to spend time with Michael until family drama makes her vacation go sour. I get that the siblings have every right to be protective of Michael because of his fame and status, but that doesn't mean they get to quickly judge a person. Cherell is a kind-hearted, funny, and independent individual who wants nothing but the best for everyone she cares about, including Michael. If I was Cherell, I wouldn't take that rudeness from Latoya or Joseph because like it or not, they would've got checked trying to take out their frustrations on me. It's not Cherell's fault that they got trust issues and family problems. Period.

Author's Response:

Right! Joseph and Latoya need to get it together. Cherell could care less about Michael 's fame. That isn't what made her fall in love with him. Hopefully in time, the ppl who are skeptical of her will get to see the real her. Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback 😊. 

Reviewer: KarenR63 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2020 04:48 am Title: Chapter 1

I loved this story so much!

Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I'll also be getting published so be on thee lookout for me :)

Reviewer: bg4200 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2019 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Such a good story!! Loving it so far

Author's Response:

Thank you. Sorry I haven't updated. I've been focusing on the stories that I'm going to be getting published soon. Hopefully, i can eventually get back to this one. I just finished my most recent story on here "Set Me Free." I would love to get your feedback on it, if you decide to check it out.

Reviewer: imanim1 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2019 10:54 am Title: Chapter 85

This story is so amazing!! Love it!

Author's Response:

Thank you. This story is on a hiatus due to other projects I'm trying to get ready for publishing. If your looking for something else to read in the meantime, feel free to check out my most recent story "Set Me Free." I would love to know what you think about it. Thanks again for reading. God Bless!

Reviewer: smokeypurple Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 06, 2018 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

I really like this chapter.

Reviewer: SadChicken Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2018 09:02 am Title: Chapter 18

I must admit that it is a very good story. It always remains logical and realistic, bravo. I really felt like I was going into the story and being part of the characters in these last chapters. I look forward to reading more!

Reviewer: Icedragon54 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2018 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 3

This is so amazing! This is my first fanfiction and I love it so much. Michael is so in character and Cherell seems extremely likeable. She isn't too overbearing and neither is she too shy - just what Michael needed in real life! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for jumping in! I'm thrilled you're enjoying it. Yes, I wish Michael could have found someone like Cherell in real life too. Continue to enjoy the story and I hope to get more feedback from you as you progress in the story. 

Also, feel free to check out my most recent story Set Me Free. It's a little different but definitely intriguing. 

God Bless 

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