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Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2014 09:30 am Title: Chapter 14

Great update. Looking forward to more. 

Reviewer: Hanna_MJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2014 08:18 am Title: Chapter 14

Hallelujah there is a god!!!! I love every word of this chapter! So sweet and yet so sensual! You're a genius!!! One of my favorite couples for sure! :D

Reviewer: Hanna_MJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2014 11:36 am Title: Chapter 13

Oh you master of cliffhangers, you'll be the death of me! How dare you stop there?! ;)) great chapter as always, my dear! xx

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2014 09:16 am Title: Chapter 13

OHHHH MYYY GOODDDDDDDDDDDD FREAK OUT. FREEAAAK OOUUUTTT!!!! MAJOR!!! HE TOUCHED HER AND SHE- GAHH!!
Needless to say... I'm happy, BEYONNNDDD HAPPY!!! My favorite coupleee awuaww!! Those guys are perfect.... Perfect for each other. Oh my god, I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! PUBLISH AGAIN SOON GIRL!!

Author's Response:

Easy now, girl, breathe in and out, don't hyperventilate :D

Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2014 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 11

Now get it in

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Date: May 28, 2014 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 9

Kiss and get it in alreay lol a86;

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Date: May 28, 2014 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 7

I see one people falling for each other.

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Date: May 28, 2014 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 6

Yea. He has the best voice ever!!! Drang him girl!!! The camping thing was a great idea. Get away from everything. 

Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2014 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 5

Lol of corse you not lazy Jackson. She does it to annoy you. 

Ps: You know when people like each other they do weird shit and tease you and things.

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2014 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 12

FEMALIEN OHMYGOD GIRL WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

you know... you never fail to make me cry... oh my good LAWD

This was amazing. AMAZING. BEYOND. WORDS. SHITTTTTTTTT I LOVED IT SO MUCH Lena is my favorite of ALLLLL Michaels fanfic girlfriends, honestly, she is incredible... and Michael is so sweet... I am fricken in love with this story, THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATEEEE <3 <3 <3

 

 one of my top favorite stories!!!

Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2014 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 4

Yes!!! They are a bunch of stuid, ignorant, childish, petty ass ass wholes!!! First off: who does or still does shit like that? Second off: What the fuck are? 9 or 10 years old? Grow the fuck up and get a life of your own and worry about yours, not all up in someone else's.

Ps: That's what's wrong with a lot of people today in this world. So worried about who's dating who? Who's in love with who? Who marring who? Who's engage to who? Who's who's? Like damn!!! It's their damn life. Let them do what they want. Let them be happy. How would you feel if it was you? (not literally you, people in general)

Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2014 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 3

I knew she liked Jackson. If I had to choose someone to dread the years with I would have choose him to ♥

Ps: Now that's what you call a true real friend. When I got fried from my job at Cold Stone, I cried and was kinda hurt. But my bm (bayb mama) and bff said dry up my tears. We not crying and having that. We were at her house in her room. We ordered 2 lg Pizzas, Wings, and got drunk. Then hrs. later (maybe 1 or 2hrs. later another job called me, gave me a interview Thursday, filled the paper work out, took it back Monday and did the orientation while I was there and got some of the pieces to my uniform. Been there 4 months now.) 

Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2014 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

Awwwhz :'( :'( :'( poor Michael. Dinan played him. Played him like a piano. Damn. That's fucked up. 

Ps: That's why you DON'T fuck with people who got some years on you. 2-3 maybe. Probably even 4 at that. But people that have at least 5+ years and more on you, you leave their asses alone!! They do nothing but use you and try and boss you around and then have someone all along and I know she had to have someone else all along because you just don't up and marry someone just like that!! You gotta been have fucking with them for a good minute.

Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2014 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 12

There so cute together. Lena seems so damaged. Update soon please!

Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2014 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awwwhz. Kute and Lena? That was really great of her to step in the way she did and stick up for Michael the way she did. She didn't have to but she did. 

Ps: You know what they say in life. Rather its your busniess or not, if you see someone getting verberally, mentally, or physically abused or bullied and you just stand/sit there without doing, saying nothing or telling on them or just walk away, then your just as wrost of a person and bully as the people and person doing the bulling or abuing.

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