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Reviewer: xclayresamanthax Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2016 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 28

Such a good story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon!

Reviewer: xclayresamanthax Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2016 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 19

What aholes! They try to rape Lena and Michael gets in trouble wtf?

Reviewer: xclayresamanthax Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2016 08:21 am Title: Chapter 9

The KISSED! Finally! About time.

Reviewer: xclayresamanthax Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2016 06:49 am Title: Chapter 5

She made him eat paper!! I love Lena! Love the chapter 😁

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2016 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 28

naaaawwwe!!!! ugh god I get so excited when I get the email for a new chapter of this story, I love it so much!



Author's Response:

You can show your love through a nomination in the MJ Fiction Awards on the home page :)

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2016 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

Diana irks my soul already and she hasn't said one word in this story. 

Poor Michael. 

Lena is so carefree, I love it. 

 

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2016 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

That's backwards but hey Michael's shy so I take that lol. 

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2016 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 28

I really LOVE this story of yours. Well, I think I read almost all your stories and I LOVE all of them. You're truly my favorite writter.

Your stories are well written, no matter they have simple or unique ideas, they're amazing.

Michael and Lena make a great couple. They're so cute together.

Thank you for your story. I am looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2016 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 28

The Deweys shouldn't treat Michael bad just he's black! I'm so happ that they are engaged now!! Even though it wasn't a proper proposal, I'm still happy!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2016 08:44 am Title: Chapter 27

FAVE STORY. GAHHHH ahahahaha

steamy scene at the beginning!! And super exciting end too, love this story so much!!

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2016 05:50 am Title: Chapter 27

That sex scene was hot!! I can't believe they stopped a store robber!! What an adventure so far!!

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2016 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 26

AAAAWWWWW I CANT BELIEVE GRAMMA GAVE EM HER MONEY OMG AMAZING CHAPTER EEEEEEEE!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Reviewer: Lorry Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2016 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 26

I was surprised her grandma had dated a black boy before marrying her husband. Feels like history is repeating it self all over again but at least this time there will a better ending for her and mj. A nice chapter now that they can finally chase their dreams 😊

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2016 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 26

Omg grandma was bad lol keep it coming l love this story

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2016 09:22 am Title: Chapter 26

Wow, I can't believe her grandma dated a black boy!! That is shocking! That was really sweet of her giving them all that money! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

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