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Reviewer: BeChristine990 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2017 08:19 pm Title: EI? EI? Oh....

Awwww this was a really interesting concept, I hope it gets continued one day :)

Reviewer: thepeacefulhippie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2013 09:21 pm Title: EI? EI? Oh....

This is a very interesting story..I like it :)

Reviewer: CriminalySmooth Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2013 02:49 pm Title: Starting Out Small

I like the story . But it would be easier to understand and better to imagine if you used the real names of the characters . Because I'm having a hard time remembering who is who . And I like to see the story in my head . I can't see it without the real names .



Author's Response:

Aww, you can't remember their names? :O Well, I can't change it to their real names at the moment, so I can tell you who's who for future reference: 

Ace (Lisa Lopes)

Soraya (Eva Mendes)

Damien (Ludacris) 

Nate (Michael Jackson) 

Brian (Paul Walker)

Aaron (Tyrese Gibson) 

Leticia (Michelle Rodriguez)

Dom (Vin Diesel)

Cairo (Aaliyah Haughton)

 

-Aaralyn 

 

Reviewer: imightbee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2013 03:55 pm Title: EI? EI? Oh....

Woah! I like this..I hope you write another chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thank you my lovely! ^.^ I hope to write another chapter soon! :D

Reviewer: Michaela J Jackson Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2013 10:09 pm Title: EI? EI? Oh....

Very good! I'll be waiting patiently for an update!



Author's Response:

Thanks sweetie! <33

Reviewer: princessmisfit Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2013 09:11 pm Title: EI? EI? Oh....

Lol I was wondering what emotional intelligence was too, but then Damien explains it and I was like "Yep..thanks dude. Need more like ya!" Lmfaoo! But anyway, girl, this story is incredimazable, and I hope you write another chapter soon Chica! 

 

**Melanie**



Author's Response:

Rotfl! Girl shut the front door! Lmao! Yes! I'm glad Damien helped ya figure it out! Incredimazable? I've never heard that word lol...sounds nice xD thanks girl! 

Reviewer: princessmisfit Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2013 09:09 pm Title: Starting Out Small

I really like this so far! ^.^ 



Author's Response:

Thanks very much! <333

Reviewer: Rihanna_Sanchez_Jackson Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2013 09:06 pm Title: EI? EI? Oh....

This is a cool story! Hoping for an update!



Author's Response:

Thanks darling! I hope to update soon! <33

Reviewer: Dezi_Raee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2013 08:06 pm Title: EI? EI? Oh....

This is a brilliant chapter! I love it! This is really good, keep up with the awesome writing! :D and omg, Hold On, We're Going Home is my favorite song at the moment lol..it's so weird too because I'm listening to it right now 



Author's Response:

Thanks Dez, (lol I keep calling you that xD) I'm glad you like it! 

And yes, 'Hold On We're Going Home' is my jam! You're listening to it lol xD amazing!

Reviewer: PoohbearlovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2013 07:17 pm Title: EI? EI? Oh....

You like 'Hold On, We're Going Home' by Drake too? XD

I love that song!

Anyways, I love this chapter! This story is good so far! :D

Keep it up! :) xxx



Author's Response:

Girl yes! That song is beyond awesome! <33 I love it! Thank you, I'm really glad y'all like it! It makes my heart happy! 

Reviewer: KurtCobainsMisfit Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2013 06:50 pm Title: EI? EI? Oh....

This..story..is..so damn good! I'm happy you did an update! Now I can ask you for another one! Please! 



Author's Response:

Thanks ^.*! And lol yes, I'll try to update soon! I promise! :D

Reviewer: pinkyinthebrain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2013 05:25 pm Title: EI? EI? Oh....

This story is perfect, the characters are perfect..and lawd this story is too funny. 

Lol like what the hell is emotional intelligence?! I can't right now dude lmao 



Author's Response:

Omg lol thanks you! xD Emotional Intelligence--lol it's the power *dies laughing*

Reviewer: XoxoRachaelJacksonXoxo Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2013 05:12 pm Title: EI? EI? Oh....

Lmfao your notes kill me! XD and guuuurrrrlllll:

"EI stands for emotional intelligence, Ace. It means he's using whatever gets your emotions going the most against you. He knows you'll never say know to helping Selena." Damien replied. Leave it up to this fool to give you full definitions of shit like Emotional Intelligence. 

                            And 

I stood up and held my hand out to him. "Come on, we have to get back to the guys or else they'll think we're out here doing some freaky shit." 

 

He laughed and stood up. "You know I wouldn't mind if we were." 

 

Literally gave me life! Yasssss girl! Yassss! Lmao! You better update soon!



Author's Response:

Lol I'm glad I made you laugh xD thanks for reviewing Rachael ^.^

Reviewer: XoxoRachaelJacksonXoxo Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2013 05:07 pm Title: Starting Out Small

To say that I love this would be an understatement, this is really cool! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Dezi_Raee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2013 09:49 pm Title: Starting Out Small

This is so good! I hope you keep writing! <33



Author's Response:

Thanks Dez (lovely name btw, is it short for Desiree?) I'm gonna keep writing, just for you darling! <333 

 

~ Aaralyn ~

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