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Reviewer: Gargamel1991 Signed star [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2022 05:53 am Title: Prologue: The Next Move

That’s a very chaotic writing, you got to work on that. It discourages to read more . I hope next chapters are improved

Reviewer: Gargamel1991 Signed star [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2022 04:53 am Title: Prologue: The Next Move

That’s a very chaotic writing, you got to work on that. It discourages to read more . I hope next chapters are improved

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2019 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 9:What Happens in Vegas

I feel so bad for this guy. I could have been him that January of 1994 in my own. He just needs a positive company and some love.

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2019 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 9:What Happens in Vegas

I feel so bad for this guy. I could have been him that January of 1994 in my own. He just needs a positive company and some love.

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2019 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 7:Drawn 2 You

Love this story. So much respect for MJ. And you're right, I've seen stories of Michael getting involves with minors. That's sick and this guy deserve to be treated as a human, not a predator.

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2019 10:11 am Title: Chapter 3:Uncovering The Truth

Recollection of the events are so accurate. Usually fans just write about jñJordie and not the affairs with Michael and June Chandler. I wish Michael was surrounded by a better team. This is redemption.

Reviewer: BenBell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2019 02:10 pm Title: 51 Epilogue: Shes The Kinda Girl You Wanna Marry

I loved this story! And this last chapter was beautiful !! It was so cute

Reviewer: Baebaelitty Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2017 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 42: Home From The Hospital for a Little TLC

Somebody's preggers

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Date: Jul 30, 2017 10:12 am Title: Chapter 13: Drama... The Jackson Family Honors

This show was nice

Reviewer: heavenlyangel62 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2016 08:09 am Title: Prologue: The Next Move

Great beginning! Can't wait to read the rest!

Author's Response:

Well welcome and all I can say is if you haven't read it your in for a treat because this story right here....

 

Strap yourself in your in for a bumpy ride 

Sex drama intrigue back stabbing currption love affairs

Get ready 

Reviewer: Sky_Allyi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2014 09:41 pm Title: 51 Epilogue: Shes The Kinda Girl You Wanna Marry

I Almost Can't Believe That Sofia Is Pregnant.

&& That Was Cake Was So Pretty.

This Was One Of The Best Stories That I Ever Read.

You Like My Second Favorite Author.

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I Watched Lisa's Interview I Thought You Said Why Michael Was Seeing SomeBody Else, If So Why Would He Be Calling Lisa?????



Author's Response:

I Know it's hard to Believe that Sofia is Pregant But I always Planned for it to be that way In the end she was to get pregant and Candice would be on her way Down the isle

I Know i searched for like a hour for a cack i felt was NONE tradtional 2 layer cake I didn't want the plan white or Just some roses stuck here or there THAT cake was the one when I saw it that was there cake

AWW thank Ski.... and if you end up fiending for another story to Check out PLEASE DO check out my sister account Canyoufeelit I have a tone of stories over  there I think you just might like 'Dance for you' about 2 Dancer from 2 difernt struggles end up at Michael Liesure and he wants to help them, Dance for you is a series it has 3 parts 4th pending the first story and half are on here as well as the first 3 Chapters of the 4th, the full second and Full thrid are on CrazyOverMJ and also a GREAT story called 'In A Diferent Time' about Michaels Kids how they go back in time to Change Michael fate because they already know what was going to happen

The lisa interview a Majority I felt WORKED for the story that she said about Micahsel, 

in realtion to Michael calling her... i could say, he felt bad for how he treated her last they spoke just because he didn't love her don't mean he didn't care... Or maybe that was something else... Or maybe you might have to wait for the Next installment to find out

Reviewer: Sky_Allyi Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2014 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 50:I Want You - (Pt) -3

I'm Happy Lisa Ain't Try Nothing.

&& The House In Miami Is Sooo Pretty.

&& The Way That Michael Purpoesed, Man That Made My Day Lol.

&& Them Rings They Both Look So Extravagant. They So Unique.

 



Author's Response:

yeah she was Never going to... But as the saying goe's Hell Hath No Fury Like a woman Scorned

 

yes but ir's popped up previously a few times now you get to see it completed 

Yeah, it had to be something special for her and i wanted the rings to be unique to show he was thinking about her when he got them your gonna love the finale Chapter great send off for a great story 

Reviewer: MJluvr12many Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2014 02:42 am Title: Chapter 50:I Want You - (Pt) -3

Aww, I wish MJ could've had a happy relationship like this in real life... :')

Author's Response:

don't we all But we Never know what he had behind closed doors He Dated Shana for 4 years under the Radar and then got Back with her and dated her for 7 so they were together for 11 years and no one knew

Reviewer: jruby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2014 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 49: I Want You (Pt) - 2

Your decision is very wise and mature way. I'm so proud and appreciated of your sincere heart. So the case is close from now on and we can rest in peace.

God bless you

Reviewer: Sky_Allyi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2014 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 49: I Want You (Pt) - 2

Man Its Kinda Crazy To Believe That Danny Would Sell Lisa Out Like That I Mean They Got Kids Together.

Lisa Is One Weak Lil Girl If She Would Actually Divorce Michael Over Some Dare. Like Who Does That. 

I Really Don't See She Mad Or Jealous She Brought This On Herself, If She Knew That Janice And Michael Was Together She Should Have Never Agreed To Marry Him. So She Ain't Got No Right To Be Mad. I Just Hope She Come To Senses Before She Do Something She Gone Regret.



Author's Response:

it would be insane to see that happen but it's all in Who you trust and you can't trust everyone but know she will remeber it 

yeah lisa is weak and she ACTUALLY DIS THAT SHIT to she said that OUT HER MOUTH that she divorced him on a dare

Lisa is mad because she one that never wants to be outdone no and she just wanted to see what it felt like to be HIS WIFE then once she was there she got caught up. Don't count Lisa out just yet... trust in your author.

more to come

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