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Reviewer: captaineo73 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2011 03:28 pm Title: Jealous Eyes

hey good luck with the house move! i totally love your story, i remember reading the first couple of chapters you wrote sometime ago, i always hoped i'd get to read more of it! keisha is so sweet and her and michael seem well suited but i hope she realises that chris is not the guy for her before something happens between them. michael, show her how you feel and get over being so shy! can't wait for you to update again soon, hope it all goes smoothly! juls xoxox

Reviewer: Alina Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2011 02:23 am Title: Jealous Eyes

it's ok if you won't update...no problem....do your stuff first....I really enjoyed your story,it's interesting and I hope both of them know what they are doing......because they're doing WRONG,very WRONG!....LOVE YOU!

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2011 12:47 am Title: Jealous Eyes

Awwww, darn you Tatiana, darn you Chris! Man, they need to get some time to talk again. :/ I enjoyed this jealousy, honestly. Lol, it was cute and interesting. :D Mike has fallen hard so soon, wonder if he'll get the girl. ;) Keisha could always cancel the cinema night. Lol, that'd hurt his ego. :P I'm with Mike there, I too don't want Keisha getting involved with a man like that and I don't want her involved with anyone but Michael. Lolz, maybe I'm biased or maybe I just know Michael is a wonderful man (with his own set of flaws of course, no one's perfect) Or maybe I just know Keisha won't really enjoy being with Chris over Michael. Who knows. All I do know is that I really enjoyed that chapter and I can't wait for your next update! Keep up the great work! I can't wait till your internet returns. :D

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2011 12:15 am Title: Jealous Eyes

Lol i love this :)! Its sad that they are both making eachother jealous lol

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2011 07:13 pm Title: Childhood

I was curious about her childhood and why she was in America. :D Thank you for explaining! I felt this chapter was really sweet. Oh Michael! Always the flirt! Lol He cracks me up. I'm sure he will get that kiss one day. ;) I can't wait for that to happen. I enjoyed this chapter so much and I was happy to see an update. I like the way you're writing this and the different unfolding events. :D Keep up the great work! I look forward to your next update! :D

Reviewer: iloveyoumj Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2011 09:27 pm Title: Childhood

great chapter please continue love

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2011 07:15 pm Title: Childhood

Love itt :)! Amazing as always lol i love the playful nature they have it just melts my heart. Cnt wait for more

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2011 06:39 pm Title: Childhood

I got to read about my Michael and Keisha! Yes! This chapter was so cute! I love flirty Mike! Haha I love this dear heart <3

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2011 03:32 am Title: Neverland

ZOMG!!!!!!!!! I loved that!!!! Finally Keisha knows Michael is single!! Yay! :D I sense things happening in the near future...>.> Michael cheats so much! XD Typical Michael move right there!!! Him and that ride. 30 minutes!? Holy shit Mike! O.O I'm with Keisha on that one, I'd never get on that ride...EVER....XD That ride scares the crap out of me. Lol. I loved this, I was so excited to see this update and with PICTURES!!! :D Nat cracks me up too, I love her! This was a really cute chapter! I can't wait for more!! I'm so excited for it!!! :D Keep up the amazing work!!! :D

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2011 12:11 am Title: Neverland

Awww i love the way they act towards one another its super cute :) cnt wait for more

Reviewer: wisdom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2011 01:15 am Title: Neverland

NEXT NEXT NEXT!!!! OMG!!!! PLEASEEEE!!!! lolz


L.o.v.e.



Author's Response:

I'm working on it! lol.
It should be up later on, or tomorrow.
Hopefully later...

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2011 03:21 pm Title: Neverland

XD Oh I missed Michael and Keisha! I had that Kool-Aid man smile when I saw your update. This story is cute dear heart <3



Author's Response:

"I had that Kool-Aid man smile when I saw your update. " < That made me laugh so much! Thank you, your comment means a lot. :) <3

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2011 12:08 am Title: Invitation

Ooo!!! I can't wait till this is updated! I love this! I wanna have dinner with Michael Jackson! Lol! I think that part will be really cute, I just hope that Keisha finds out soon that Michael isn't dating Tatiana, when they almost kissed last chapter I was on the edge of my seat! Damn it! I can't wait to read more! I loved Nat too! She's so funny! :D Keep up the great work, I can't wait till your next update!!

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2011 04:43 am Title: Invitation

Ooooooooooo update!!! I wanna read more!!! Do it quickly!

Author's Response:

I will try to, I just have loads of exams. It's just finding the time to type it up.

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2011 04:08 pm Title: Invitation

Aww they are just too cute :P!
Tatiana needs to back off shesh i just more and more annoyed with her when i read stories and shes always trying to ruin things lol. Cnt wait for the next part

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