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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2014 12:30 am Title: CHAPTER LIII - Action

And in comes Rael. Lol. I commend Aba for choosing to not hide. The sooner she deals with this, the better. I have a feeling there is some unfinished business between her and Rael too. She definitely is still attracted to him and vice versa. And she cares for him too. But beyond that, Evan needs to pay for what he did. Manipulating his son while he was drugged from getting a tooth pulled?! Having that boy lie on Michael! Trying to ruin this man's life. I seriously cannot wait until Ava starts reading these sorry son of a bitches with the TRUTH. She is gonna clear Mike's name and on top of that, I hope she is able to tell each and every last one of his employees to kiss her smooth FINE ASS! 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat :) Ava is very couragerous and Michael needs to understand all she does is for him. He needs to forgive her already! She still loves Rael very much and he loves her too. But with her feelings for Michael, is not that easy!

Sorry for the wait but the new chapter is finally here

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2014 06:09 am Title: CHAPTER LII - Bittersweet

I can't believe that you actually made me cry. I was sobbing half way into this chapter. Wow it was a bittersweet moment for sure. I do hope that they get to talk and become lovers again. But man Michael hit the ball out of the park with what he did for her. That is a man!!!! 



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I'm sorrryyyy! :( They need to talk

Reviewer: April Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2014 10:11 am Title: CHAPTER LII - Bittersweet

YESSS!!! OMG! EVERYONE HATES HER :( she was wrong but no one saw the bright side. I feel bad for ava. She has to be abandoned just because of the article. Omg this is so good girl lol. I would die inside if I knew the same would happen! PUBLISH THE NEXT CHAPTER AL REAAADDDYYYYY!



Author's Response:

They need to open their eyes and realize Ava did everything for Michael! thank you for the rate and the review :D

Reviewer: neece Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2014 10:45 pm Title: CHAPTER LII - Bittersweet

AAAAWWW!!!!! WWHHHHYYYY!!!!!! *cries* Michael open your eyes and see that Ava loves you dude. She wrote that article to defend you. It was really sweet of him to help her, I just wish he would get her back. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Michael is angry and it's clouding it's judgement :/ He needs time! The new chapter is online :D

Reviewer: Michaelsbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2014 07:09 pm Title: CHAPTER LII - Bittersweet

Omg omg continue



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new chapter online

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2014 06:53 pm Title: CHAPTER LII - Bittersweet

I'm always ready for the next chapter :)

I'm surprised by the twist this story has taken. I'd expected him to eventually page her or call her, not to hide her and forbid her to contact anyone.  I kinda like being surprised.  I imagine her family and friends will worry.



Author's Response:

Hey Redone :D That's great because the new chapter is online :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2014 04:46 pm Title: CHAPTER LII - Bittersweet

Somebody needs to slap some sense into Michael. Ava isn't responsible for what other people are doing. She wrote an article DEFENDING HIM. Fuck his employees. I bet none of them would come out and say anything in his honor or defense. This shit is so aggravating. But at least he gave her somewhere to stay til the shitstorm dies down some, if ever. Nice consolation prize I guess. SMH. I'm just annoyed with the whole ordeal. 



Author's Response:

LMAO! Camille says Janet should do it lol! Michael needs to realize Ava did it for him!

The new chapter is here :)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2014 10:27 am Title: CHAPTER LII - Bittersweet

Awwwww Michael rescued her, and called her Twinkle. And kissed her hand. 

I don't think that Ava lying low for a few weeks is a bad idea, she can't really stay at her house anyways.

Michael needs a wakeup call. Can Janet show up and slap some sense into him or something? He can't blame Ava for other people's actions. It isn't her fault that his other staff are lying or speaking to the press. Sure, she naively caused a media shitstorm but her heart is in the right place. And isn't that what he wants, someone to standby and defend him and love him no matter what? He has it and he is throwing it away without even realizing. His anger over her lies is clouding his judement, understandable but so sad. He needs some time to calm down but if he takes too long he will lose her. This chapter almost made me cry. 

And screw his staff. If they truly have his best interests at heart they will come around and understand why Ava did it. 

I hope that Ava takes a bit of time to regroup, and once everything dies down sets the record straight so she can move on with her life.



Author's Response:

Michael is definitely still in love with Ava, even after what she has done. LMAO! A appareance from Janet wouldn't be bad lol! Michael is so upset. It's easier to blame it on Ava and this is exactly what he is doing. Let's hope it doesn't stop Ava from coming back and fighting for him!

Thank you for the rate and the review love. The new chapter is here !! :D

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2014 08:11 am Title: CHAPTER LII - Bittersweet

YESSSSSSSSS!

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;-)

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2014 06:54 am Title: CHAPTER LII - Bittersweet

I'm ready!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Goood because the new chapter is online!!!!!!

Reviewer: Kara Jackson Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2014 05:08 am Title: CHAPTER LII - Bittersweet

GREAT STORY!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, the new chapter is here :D

Reviewer: Michael_Lover32 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2014 04:30 am Title: CHAPTER I - Ambition

Dammed those cliffhangers! I'm at the edge of my seat here! I GOTTA know what happens next! It ain't the end but it damn sure feels like it!



Author's Response:

No, it's not the end :)) the new chapter is here :D

Reviewer: Tigereyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2014 04:08 am Title: CHAPTER LII - Bittersweet

Godammit woman, I wish you'd stop making me cry! Jesus...my heart is in pieces here. They love each other so much yet can't get over this (huge) hurdle. I think if Ava does as MJ asks then it will be over for them. She needs to fight tooth and nail for him, demand he listen to her, make him hear her out and listen to what her heart is screaming to him. If only he can learn to trust her again, they just could go back to the way they were.

 

As for the staff - to hell with them. She doesn't have to win them over. only Michael. She didn't fall in love with them, she didn't go to bed with them. The only thing that matters here is Michael and what he thinks, wants and needs. True, to have the employees on her side would be nice, but at the end of the day we all know Michael was the boss and his word was final. If she can convince him to give in to his heart, then everything else should fall in place. And if it doesn't? To hell with them. Michael's the important one here.

 

And now the hours start ticking by again, until the next update...



Author's Response:

Oooh! Tiger, I'm sorry :'(! Ava knew it would end like this and now it's time to make Michael change his mind. She has two, they need to be together! I think Bill and Sean are upset because Michael is upset. You're right, if Michael forgives her, everything will be alright! Thank you for the review and the rate! The new chapter is here :D

Reviewer: AppleheadJax Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2014 12:16 am Title: CHAPTER LII - Bittersweet

I think this was the saddest part in the story. I cried D; It's so sweet of Michael to be doing what he is doing for her. I just wish he would try to see from Ava's eyes. They could fix this. They could. It's so sad. I wish everybody would pay attention to what Ava was trying to say instead of wanting gossip about this girl who happens to know too much about Michael to not know him personally. 

I wish Ava would have tried harder to make him listen to her. If it were me I would've been sobbing and begging him to just listen. She must be feeling so... Emotionally claustrophobic. 

Im more than ready to read the next chapter, though. <3

Shinie x



Author's Response:

Ohh ;( Unfortunately, it cannot be all pink and happy. And as soon as Ava agreed to do that, she knew it would happen. The good thing is that Michael protected her, like you said, it's sweet :) Now she has to try harder!

The next chapter is online babe :D :)! Thank you for the rate!

Reviewer: Michael_Lover32 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2014 11:24 am Title: CHAPTER I - Ambition

Jesus! Just when I thought her and Michael were going to fix things...I feel sorry for Ava although she did bring on herself...



Author's Response:

Yup, that was unexpected :/

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