Date: Sep 14, 2015 07:32 pm Title: Prologue...
This is great!! I love this story a lot!! I'm a fan of this, I love the details in this a lot. Keep writing! I love it!!
Date: Jul 23, 2015 09:04 pm Title: Prologue...
Very awesome start so far... I like it... :)
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and beautifully lovely writing... :)
Thank you so much for your reviews, I am soooo so glad you like it!!!
There'll be an update soon!!!
Date: Jun 20, 2015 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this chapter, especially this part:
She did write to him. She was sure he’d probably never even see that letter, but she wanted to write it.
“Don’t be stupid!” her sister said. “They’ll probably throw it away before it even goes to him!”
“No they won’t” Iris insisted. Jane, her sister, kept spoiling her dreams, whatever those were.
“Fine, go make a fool of yourself” Jane said, but Iris wasn’t even listening. She’d already started writing…
Good for Iris that she knew what the truth was and she focused on that. :) And she had made up her mind to write to Michael even though her sister told her not to...
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and beautifully creative writing! :)
Date: Jun 20, 2015 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
Neat so far.... I like it. Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too. :)
(This is how I imagine Michael to look in this story, of course...)
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing! :)