Date: Sep 29, 2012 11:48 am Title: PART 1 - Lina; Chapter 1
hai Andrea. I wish u would finish the story or atleast update. I love to read it because, my name is Lina, haha!! Feel it so much. thank u.
Date: Apr 09, 2011 10:01 am Title: Chapter 10
Okay... That line... "You were as high as a kite!" Might that have anything to do with that picture I posted? X3
Otherwise... It was great:) very emotional. I love your writing, Andrea:D
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2011 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 10
Wow that was full of heated drama. Michael always seems to cause trouble for himself.He should sort his life out.
Date: Apr 04, 2011 09:04 am Title: Chapter 10
hey gurl, i managed to catch up on your story and i really love it! you're such a great talent! love your style! xoxoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks dear, thanks so much for taking the time to read my story and for telling me your opinion. You guys with your great reviews keep me going :)
Hugs!
Date: Apr 01, 2011 09:07 pm Title: PART 1 - Lina; Chapter 1
:O
Andrea... You are so dirty. XD I love it. Michael is just... Ooooooooh, man.
I love you. I really do.
Author's Response:
Hahahahaha...dirty???!!??? Who? Little ol' me??? :P Noooooo.... hahahahahaha :))
Yeah, as a matter of fact I've a dirty mind and with this Novel I intend to put it all in practice so stay tooned ...hahahha!!! :D
Love you too honey, more!!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2011 02:52 pm Title: PART 1 - Lina; Chapter 1
i'm loving this story so much. it's so realistic. it's amazing!!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so so much. That's exactly what I was going for, a more realistic and close to the truth story. And if you guys like it I can't be happier :)
Thanks for the 5 stars *giggles*
Hugs!
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2011 10:57 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh my Michael you promised Debbie things would be different this time. I really want him to be happy and Debbie may not be lisa but she does care for him and gave him a son. He should stick it out with her.
Author's Response:
Well yeah, Michael better be good this time but who knows? :D
Thanks so much for your every single review, they keep me going :) I never thought this story would be so well received. I wasn't sure if people will like this approach to Michael's character...but oh well, it seems that you guys liked this more natural and not so perfect Michael after all and I couldn't be happier.
Hugs and Kisses!
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2011 10:52 am Title: Chapter 8
I knew Michael would regret what happend with stacy when he woke the next day. Lets hope she stays quiet. I cant believe he made the first mofe and asked debbie to have another baby. I really hope he does change for her sake
Date: Mar 28, 2011 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 7
Andrea! Goodness! Kind, sweet, sensitive Andrea... This story is fantastic, and I am eagerly waiting for Lina to come work at Neverland, you know. But Michael... He is going through quite a time, eh? Drugs, Lisa, Depression, Debbie, his mother.... And now this Stacy is messing with him? He's having a great time now, but in the morning? I feel he will spiral down again.
But, speaking writing now, I know I've told you before, but I will tell you again:) You are amazing. And you speak english incredibly well, too. Your characters emotions are incredible, too. Michael's feelings, his emotions, how he deals with things, it all seems so real. Most other fics I've read... He seems kind of fake, a... A stereotypical Michael if you will. So this one is fantastic:) he has taken the transition from female OC's love interest, to real person. I love it, really! And I'm sorry for not reviewing earlier, too.^^;
Author's Response:
Ohhhh honey, dear sweet Hailey :D... I really wasn't expecting such a wonderful review to this story. I mean, yeah...u're right, a new and much more realistic Michael, that's what I was going for in this new story because I was also kind of tired of the always perfect Michael. U know, we had this talk before on dA. But I really really wasn't expecting people to take this "new" Michael so well. I thought that I would even get criticized for making him a little TOO real :P
Anyway, this story started as a scrap...a few lines scribbled down a virtual paper just to satisfy my own new vision about MJ but things evolved in my head and I woke up with a good few pages done. I wasn't intending to put it up anywhere but one day I said....what the heck? Let's see what people say. And people were great. I haven't got many reviews but the few I got are positive and they made me so happy. Especially yours *giggles*....
So thx for the big smile u put up my face this morning...u know how much I care about ur opinion *hugs u till u lose ur breath*
Love ya'!
P.S.: I didn't forget you owe me some new chapters of LAFS :D
Date: Mar 28, 2011 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 7
Andrea! Goodness! Kind, sweet, sensitive Andrea... This story is fantastic, and I am eagerly waiting for Lina to come work at Neverland, you know. But Michael... He is going through quite a time, eh? Drugs, Lisa, Depression, Debbie, his mother.... And now this Stacy is messing with him? He's having a great time now, but in the morning? I feel he will spiral down again.
But, speaking writing now, I know I've told you before, but I will tell you again:) You are amazing. And you speak english incredibly well, too. Your characters emotions are incredible, too. Michael's feelings, his emotions, how he deals with things, it all seems so real. Most other fics I've read... He seems kind of fake, a... A stereotypical Michael if you will. So this one is fantastic:) he has taken the transition from female OC's love interest, to real person. I love it, really! And I'm sorry for not reviewing earlier, too.^^;
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2011 11:35 am Title: Chapter 7
Wow Michael is really bold here. I guess he is trying to let lose and forget his problems but I beleive that after he is finished with Stacy his problems will have only just begun.
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2011 11:09 am Title: Chapter 6
Gee what a chapter. Michael sure has been through the mill with Lisa. I feel sorry for him.He wants love and also to feel safe and secure and he doesn't ge that. I dont get why Janet is begging him to talk to Lisa. She should be more worried about her own brother instead. I love the man to man talk he had with prince. It was lovely.
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2011 06:53 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh my this sure was an interesting chapter. I was wondering who is this woman that is sleeping with Michael and was shocked to find out it was Lisa. Michaels marriage to debbie may not be a happy or proper one but he should respect her and not be sleeping with other women
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2011 06:47 am Title: Chapter 4
You really captured what I believe to be how Michael felt when he told his mother about Debbie being pregnant. I know Michael adores his mother and doesn't want to disappoint her but he shouldn't have married just to please her.
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2011 11:36 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh I love his entrance theme to the history tour and Debbie is pregnant. Thats wonderful and aww its so sweet of Michael to write a song for his baby.
Author's Response:
Thank you darling....again and again for all the wonderful reviews :D
God bless you!