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Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2017 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 3

Your talent is needeed in here. Did you notice what a beautiful story you upload? It was not just erotica. It had a plot, both characters were well developed. It was pure and sensual Magic.

Reviewer: lovinthethrill04 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2017 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 3

Hey is this story gonna get updated? Please let me know

Reviewer: Coco Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2014 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 3

That was hot!!!!! Michael is a sexy beast in bed!!!! Yummy!!!

Reviewer: Coco Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2014 05:49 am Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: GnRMJ Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2014 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 3

I stumbled across this story and it's very intriguing I would really like for it to continue :) 

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2014 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 3


JollyRoger, you just made a beautiful day into a beautiful awesome day! :-))):-D:-D:-D Super sexy chapter, just so much sexiness. ^_^ I love it. You did an amazing job with this chapter. It's just, wow!!! Passion and love all typed up on a page, its amazing! Great job!

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2014 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

If you don't mind I'm gonna use this as the basis for your personal story

Author's Response:

Oh my gosh! Seriously??? That hot stuff??? Wowza!!! Thank you so much! L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2014 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 2

Sooooo sexy 

Reviewer: MJJlovers3978 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 21, 2013 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 2


I need a cold shower. Done

Author's Response:

Ha ha ha ha.... you're so cute...! Ha ha ha.... Thank you for the review darling. Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: ProductOfLoveliness Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2013 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm totally loving this!! Very different than many other stories. Much more passionate and sexy :) Love it d84;d84;

Author's Response: Thank you sweetie... I'd update soon! Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2013 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 2

Hahaha XD That gif is from Miranda, it's a British sitcom. :3

Aww thanks for replying back to my reviews. :3 Its always so great to read your replies. You really are so very sweet and welcoming. ^_^

Can't wait for the update honey. :) Much love , <33

Author's Response: Tee hee hee... thank you Sabrina... *blush* I am stil working on the chapter. Kinda short on time. And for some strange reason, I had a hunch that woman was British! Lol! Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2013 08:21 am Title: Chapter 2


lkjhgfsshjkldhg now that was HOT.

I actually had to read this twice because it was so freaking good... And lord knows that I am rarely into reading sex or love making on this site because it's all so very bland and same old but the way you put it down... FUCK. I love the intimacy and Michael's so sexy, and I love how you've carefully thought of their relationship. XD And you already know I adore the way you write. ;3

Bravo girl, I can't wait for more. You're one of my favourite writers up on here. XD

I need to get myself together haha. :))

, <33

Author's Response:

Ha ha ha ha ha.... Oh my gosh Sabrina! Your gif got me cracking up here!!! I mean, I read through your review once, and I kept staring at that lady's expression, and I kept wondering... oh my gosh... is this what I really did...? Flattering really... and oh my gosh... so hilarious! You being such an awesome author here yourself, this review from you means a lot to me. Thank you girl, thank you, thank you very much! I myself have read through NC 17 rated one shots and short stories here and I don't know... they sounded pretty crude to me... not all but most... so I thought, hey, why not do this my way? I don't want to write sex, I want to write lovemaking. Must admit, I really enjoy it, ha ha ha... picturing Michael in all those nasty delicious ways!!! He would blush like crazy if he ever read this comment...! Anyways... thank you thank you once again for your review... Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!

Reviewer: MJSHOTZWELL22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2013 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow, wow, and bow-chicka-wow-wow. And when I say 'Wow', I mean 'WWOOWW'. Your stories NEVER put a blank stare to my face. It's either a goofy grin or I get tensed up, (in a good way, hehe). Continue! 

Author's Response: MEARCE!!!!! OH MY GOSH YOU READ THIS!!!!! HA HA HA HA.... And I'm so glad you like it! Thank you so much for the review! I'd be updating this soon! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours! Mwaaaah........

Reviewer: Megs Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2013 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

*coughs* That was *coughs* pretty....... hot XD


Guurl... don't know if you tryin' to kill me or something! lmao. Mhahauah.


I'm speechless. What can I say.

Some of the things you make Michael say could alone drive me to the edge lmaoooooo he's so sexy huaskoshduwihsnjak *GAME OVER OF THE BRAIN*


(^ look what you've done to me, I don't even make sense anymore haha)

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2013 11:27 am Title: Chapter 2


This chapter is fantastic, super sensual and still romantic as can be! Not to mention, sexy as heck. I mean, dang! I'm gonna need some cold water after this! XDXD Darn it!! Mike  needs to be teased!! If I were the MG, he'd be seriouly teased right now. Excellent job deary! :-))))))))

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