Date: May 17, 2014 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
I stumbled across this story and it's very intriguing I would really like for it to continue :)
Date: Mar 30, 2014 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
JollyRoger, you just made a beautiful day into a beautiful awesome day! :-))):-D:-D:-D Super sexy chapter, just so much sexiness. ^_^ I love it. You did an amazing job with this chapter. It's just, wow!!! Passion and love all typed up on a page, its amazing! Great job!
Date: Oct 21, 2013 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
I need a cold shower. Done
Ha ha ha ha.... you're so cute...! Ha ha ha.... Thank you for the review darling. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Oct 17, 2013 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hahaha XD That gif is from Miranda, it's a British sitcom. :3
Aww thanks for replying back to my reviews. :3 Its always so great to read your replies. You really are so very sweet and welcoming. ^_^
Can't wait for the update honey. :) Much love , <33
Author's Response: Tee hee hee... thank you Sabrina... *blush* I am stil working on the chapter. Kinda short on time. And for some strange reason, I had a hunch that woman was British! Lol! Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Oct 16, 2013 08:21 am Title: Chapter 2
lkjhgfsshjkldhg now that was HOT.
I actually had to read this twice because it was so freaking good... And lord knows that I am rarely into reading sex or love making on this site because it's all so very bland and same old but the way you put it down... FUCK. I love the intimacy and Michael's so sexy, and I love how you've carefully thought of their relationship. XD And you already know I adore the way you write. ;3
Bravo girl, I can't wait for more. You're one of my favourite writers up on here. XD
I need to get myself together haha. :))
Ha ha ha ha ha.... Oh my gosh Sabrina! Your gif got me cracking up here!!! I mean, I read through your review once, and I kept staring at that lady's expression, and I kept wondering... oh my gosh... is this what I really did...? Flattering really... and oh my gosh... so hilarious! You being such an awesome author here yourself, this review from you means a lot to me. Thank you girl, thank you, thank you very much! I myself have read through NC 17 rated one shots and short stories here and I don't know... they sounded pretty crude to me... not all but most... so I thought, hey, why not do this my way? I don't want to write sex, I want to write lovemaking. Must admit, I really enjoy it, ha ha ha... picturing Michael in all those nasty delicious ways!!! He would blush like crazy if he ever read this comment...! Anyways... thank you thank you once again for your review... Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
Date: Oct 14, 2013 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, wow, and bow-chicka-wow-wow. And when I say 'Wow', I mean 'WWOOWW'. Your stories NEVER put a blank stare to my face. It's either a goofy grin or I get tensed up, (in a good way, hehe). Continue!
Author's Response: MEARCE!!!!! OH MY GOSH YOU READ THIS!!!!! HA HA HA HA.... And I'm so glad you like it! Thank you so much for the review! I'd be updating this soon! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours! Mwaaaah........
Date: Oct 14, 2013 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
*coughs* That was *coughs* pretty....... hot XD
Guurl... don't know if you tryin' to kill me or something! lmao. Mhahauah.
I'm speechless. What can I say.
Some of the things you make Michael say could alone drive me to the edge lmaoooooo he's so sexy huaskoshduwihsnjak *GAME OVER OF THE BRAIN*
(^ look what you've done to me, I don't even make sense anymore haha)
Date: Oct 14, 2013 11:27 am Title: Chapter 2
This chapter is fantastic, super sensual and still romantic as can be! Not to mention, sexy as heck. I mean, dang! I'm gonna need some cold water after this! XDXD Darn it!! Mike needs to be teased!! If I were the MG, he'd be seriouly teased right now. Excellent job deary! :-))))))))