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Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2012 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 2: Where's Chester Going?

Cute ! ♥

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2012 09:10 pm Title: Characters

Oh My Gosh ! My Name is Katie ! When I Was Reading The Summary I Just Immediatly Said "Heeey..I'm Katieee !" I Just Laughed . This Story Will Be Wonderful. I'm Beginning To Read This Story I'm Sure I'm Gonna Enjoy It !

~ ThrillerEraSlave / xThrillerErax Productions

Reviewer: Angel_Eyes Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2011 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 6: Beginning of a Friendship?

Heyyy, I love this... it's just like moonwalker and MJ was hot in SC :) Hurry up with the next part babes can't wait to read it

Reviewer: Angel_Eyes Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2011 05:32 am Title: Characters

OMG new reader alert.... do I smell attraction between them??? Well on her side I definately do. Who can blame her LOL... can't wait for the next update hun

Reviewer: MJs Baby Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2011 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 5: The Escape

Whoo I like this, update soon

Reviewer: Moonwalker Drey Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2011 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Task

No!! Chandelle can't kill Michael!! He would never hurt a fly! :) I love the story so far, very nice describing! Please uptade soon!



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Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2011 09:18 am Title: Chapter 3: Busted

Haha, this is just like the full version of Smooth Criminal from Moonwalker
I like it! ;p
Please continue



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Haha, thanks :)

Reviewer: HIS Darling Dear Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2011 02:28 am Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

:0

. . . and then what happens?! On to chapter 2!



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Lol :)

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2011 12:22 am Title: Chapter 3: Busted

Lol its just like the movie :) good job capturing all the moments. Cnt wait to read the next part

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Thank you :)

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2011 12:19 am Title: Chapter 2: Where's Chester Going?

I like it a lot :) good job

Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2011 12:18 am Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Action packee! I love itt :)) onto the next

Author's Response:

Haha, thank you!

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2011 12:16 am Title: Characters

Cnt wait to start reading :)

Author's Response:

Thanks =)

Reviewer: colormepretty Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2011 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 3: Busted

:D keep writing!



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I will =D

Reviewer: Ginger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2011 07:47 pm Title: Characters

I LOVE it so far! Michael is hot as a smooth criminal. 'The Bad Guy'. Lol, update soon :D



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Thank you :)

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2011 10:09 am Title: Characters

Wow, now that was intense right from the beginning .lol

I love to imagine Mike as a 'smooth criminal', hehe

Lookin forward to read more ;)



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Thanks =D

Reviewer: colormepretty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2011 12:53 am Title: Characters

the title was instantly catchin my attention...now the story....well....it....was....AMAZING!

KEEP WRITING :)



Author's Response:

Haha, thank you :)

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