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Reviewer: MJ_1234Eva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2020 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

How are you two doing? With everything going on, I hope you're both alright ❤

Reviewer: MJ_1234Eva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2015 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 2

PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY, IT'S LEAVING ME IN SO MUCH SUSPENCE I LOVE IT, IT'S SO DIFFRENT IN A GOD WAY, WHICH IS WHY I LOVE IT PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY PLEASE

Reviewer: MJ_1234Eva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2015 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 2

Pls update this story is Bae too. I LOVE it... I just reread it like 4 times.

Reviewer: Whatever_happens99 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2015 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 2

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE...I LOVE THIS STORY..ITS REALLY UNIQUE AND DIFFERENT IN A GOOD WAY



Author's Response: Im so glad you like the story. We really try to be unique.

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2014 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ooppss m bad forgot to rate.

Oh my mistake too i continued to read on and realised that their accents. were actually Jamaican.  :) :D

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2014 03:53 am Title: Chapter 1

OMG..i remember you guys mentioning Les Twins on your other fanfics and i just had to search them up and i must say i was very happy with the results..they are really good at what they do. I also fell i must say that i live in the caribbean so when i read the first dialogue in patwaa i immediately recognised it and went MADDDDD!!! I was caught off guard not expecting this but happy as hell anyway. I really feel like i can relate to them now.

By the way maybe i can help you with some of the dialogue translations if you need it. But their patwaa and slang is like more from a Trinidadian..barbadian.. and maybe even St.Lucian type which is undoubtedly distuingishable from my dialect sooo maybe it isn't such a good idea??? not too sure but you can ask if you still want too :) :) i'll try.

SO SORRY FOR MY RANTING

LOVE THE STORY AND UPDATE ALLl OF THEM IF POSSIBLE..even if i must wait, i will...thnx. <3

 



Author's Response:

Thank you soooo much and yea my patwa sucks soooo bad but I try I really do lol. Translations would be nice I use this translator thingy and it is so difficult lol. But now I'm ranting lol anyways Im so glad you were are enjoying the story and I will try to update 

Reviewer: TifftayluvsMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2014 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh yay! See I really did feel like I was the only one who crazy about them, (Sorry this is the beginning of a rant) I mean Michael was and is my first obsession....but since i've found Les Twins...girl i'm hooked.... Thier dance style blows my mind, they are also super handsome, I love their accent , and another quality I value of them is that they love little babies and children (much like Michael), they are so precious, and I really just want to eat them up. I know this may be #teamtoomuch but I got a shirt and hoodie in the mail today that said 'I love Les Twins'...and 'Criminalz Crew' on the back lol i've also been in search of Les Twins fanfic as well...ANYWAY thank you for responding and i'm glad to hear you will be picking this up in the future!P.s. I'm a huge fan of 'My Bully', 'The Heist', this story...and all of your other stories :)

Author's Response: Why thank you and I definitely feel the same. Oh and uh...if your looking for their fanfic...go to Tumble and type Les Twins fan fiction in the search....don't ask how I know but good stuff good stuff indeed lol

Reviewer: TifftayluvsMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2014 01:55 am Title: Chapter 1

Hey, hey, hey!So I know i'm late reviewing this and catching on but I just realized that you combined by two favorite loves here...Michael Jackson and Les Twins!!! I've read this a couple of months ago but I had no idea where the inspiration came from. Then I fell in love with Les Twins, read this story again and was like Woah! Yes! The neck scratching, body malfunctioning, hair pulling, death drops, oh and the part where they do the "girly" mannerisms, (I love when Les Twins do that in their dancing, so funny and cute, they are such characters) all of it reminded me of Les Twins! I love the twist you put on it though so it's not exactly like them. But needless to say I love this story because well I loooove Les Twins and I looooove Michael Jackson. I hope you continue this in the future.

Author's Response: I do too! I'm a little obsessed I mean clearly with Michael but those twins 💞 their perfect. We'll be updating soon thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BeforeYouJudgeMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2013 07:02 am Title: Chapter 2

I'm in love with this story and the twins. Update soon! :)



Author's Response: We will!

Reviewer: 1958AndBeyond Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2013 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ya'll never fail to amaze me. Pleaasee oh please keep going. This is different, verrry different from the other stories. I can see this story going far. I have hope, I know the other supporters do too. <3



Author's Response: Aw thank u so much

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2013 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 2

90 90 90 90 90 90 90 90 90 90 90 90 90 90.....and you made milo a finger licker also LMFAO. 



Author's Response: Lmfao you whore! That is not to be mentioned in public.

Reviewer: MJ4EVER1980 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2013 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

I LOVE UR STORY, MICHAEL JACKSON & LES TWINS THEME!!!



Author's Response: Lmao I really didnt want them to be similar. I really tried to avoid it. I still am trying to avoid it. There may be some similarities but I dont want to combine them. Michaelfan would have a fit

Reviewer: mimi j Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2013 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Is patwa Jamaican?? Great story btw! It's very different



Author's Response: Yes it is. Im glad you love it

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2013 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

I just love the banner. Mike looks so sexy tatted up. Okay now I gotta go read your story, lol



Author's Response:

Lol Yeeessssssss Girl....when I made it I stepped back and was like....DAMN lol Please do read and I hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: SmellyApplehead Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2013 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 2

*adds to favorites, literally* DIS is so good. And exciting, i can't even. I hope the next update would be soon, thanks!

Author's Response:

Oh wow! Really? WOOOOHOOO we got a fav goodness that made my heart flutter lol A new chapter will be up soon I hope. Michaelfan is up next so let's see what she has planned

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