Date: Nov 22, 2017 05:25 pm Title: GIU 20
I'm soooo mad at Michael. He knows damn good and well he hurt Peyton and he's just gonna choose to ignore it. Him and that bitch ass Candace aren't gonna last, Peyton's gonna find someone else, and Michael's gonna know exactly how she feels. I'm just so fucking mad at Michael. What an ass. Please continue soon!!!
Date: Oct 13, 2017 12:05 am Title: Chapter 19
Girl you killing me lol went Peyton going to be 18 next month because it driving me crazy l need some action poor Michael the boy is going out of his mind but l love the way write this story it keep me on my toes l can't wait for the next chapter
Date: Sep 24, 2017 04:03 am Title: Chapter 18
Peyton working in class with Michael reminds me of a funny incident I had when I was in school. I had an intense crush on this light skin curly head boy. We grew up together through elementary, middle school, and high school.
Anyway when we were in sixed grade we had our English class together and one day the teacher had assigned us a project that required us working in groups of two. The teacher randomly chose who we'd be working with. I got lucky and was assigned to work with my crush.
I sat across from my crush, heart racing so fast, nervous, and excited at the same damn time. I sat just gazing up at his cute face lost in a trance. Too shocked and happy that I was sitting so close to him. I couldn't concentrate on anything else but him. Apparently I stared too long because the next thing I heard was the teacher telling us to get started on our projects.
Embarrssment washed over me as I realized the teacher had just explained our assignment but I hadn't heard a word she had said. I was too busy focusing on my crush sitting right in front of me I had literally zoned out.
I watched as he began writing something down on our worksheet. He was so focused, and I was literally lost. I glanced around the room and saw everyone was into their work except for me, I was the only one not doing anything. So I sighed, sucked up my nervousness and asked him the question I should've already known the answer too.
"Robert What are we supposed to be doing?"
He quickly looked up at me and replied.
"She just explained it, you didn't hear her?"
I shook my head No as I said "Nope" nonchantly.
He smirked at me with this amused facial expression and then explained to me the assignment, and then we got to work. The End
I absolutely love the relationship between Peyton and Michael their flirty banter, and roast jokes are so funny and cute. This story brings me back to a time when I was a teen.
Date: Sep 22, 2017 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
YESSS!!! Thank god! Can you also update In Their Masquerade ? Pleaseeeeee!!! You left such a huge cliffhanger I think you should add am additional chapter lol. Hope to see that update really soon, like tonight !?! Furthermore, thanks for this update!
Date: Aug 18, 2017 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 17
Michael and Peyton are driving me crazy lol. I'm a little sad about their predicament too but I respect Michael for waiting, not many would have. But great chapter, I'm loving it π
Right, especially back then lol. Thanks for reading! π
Date: Aug 10, 2017 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 16
ayyooooo you really gonna make mike date candance???? oh my goooooodd nooooooo, that's gonna break peypeys heart lord. i'm not ready for that chapter man. ima cry right with her. as always, amazing chapter.
πππππ if that happens, let us all cry together
Date: Aug 09, 2017 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 16
I can't tell you how irritated I was with Michael at the end of this. Because he's being a dumbass and he's gonna push Peyton away, then she's gonna find someone else just when he wants her back. Then HE'S gonna have to wait and it's all gonna be a big mess. All in all, Michael needs to ditch Candace. Because he'll just be using her as a little plaything until "the time is right" with him and Peyton, then he'll dump her. And even tho that bitch needs to go, she doesn't deserve to go through that. I swear if Michael starts dating Candace I'm gonna be soooo pissed off. And then I'll say I want Peyton to move on just to see Michael guilty, but I'll still really want them to be together. Good God I'm making too much drama for myself. Anywhore, I hope I'm wrong and that Candace bitch ass hits the road while Michael and Peyton get together. Fuck. That rant tho. Lmao please continue soon!!!
Lmfaaaaaoooo I'm sorry! πππ yeah there's gonna be quite a bit of frustration in this story but...π€·πΎβοΈ Things will get better...hopefully π
Anyway i appreciate the lengthy review and thanks for reading! β€οΈ There will definitely be more! π
Date: Jul 25, 2017 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 15
sooooo i hope mike was kidding when he said he was bringing a girl along to the movies. omfg is it tatum? BROOKE??? yoooo, it's brooke π . either way i'm pumped to see what's gonna go down!!!
Lmfao ππππ. Thanks for reading! π
Date: Jul 18, 2017 10:35 am Title: Chapter 14
awwwwwww!!!! this is what i live for!! pey needs to hit that big 1 8 like right now lol they are the cutest. i can't wait for the next chapter
Lmfao she really does π© Thanks so much for reading! β€οΈ