Date: Jan 24, 2014 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow. :) I hope that Chance will use the opportunity in meeting Michael to show him all the letters she'd written to him but never sent. And I hope that Chance does not die from lung cancer, either, and that she does her best to get well and finally get the courage to quit smoking, too.
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and beautifully phenomenal writing! :)
Date: Jul 17, 2012 02:57 am Title: Chapter 6
SO many emotions, I can't take itt! D:
First off; I love how Diane was like "I'm fine, thank you. I just can't believe that Michael Jackson just hit my car." haha :3 I would actually be happy if he hit my car. Any other person I would curse them down lmfao :P
Ahhh Diane also knows!! I'm glad they admitted they love each other... Maybe they do have a chance of becoming a family again.
Oh Gosh; I sure hope Chance lives! :( You almost have me crying here!
I LOVE how Michael was there to hold her... She really needed that. I love how in real life Michael used to take time out to visit hospitals and actually put it down in his schedual. Such a big heart; it actually hurts me inside. He cared so much yet went through so much sh*t -_-
PLEASE update this and your other stories soon??? :3
I hope you do because they are amazing and all so different; I need them back in the 'most recent' ! ;D
Much LOVE! , <3
Date: Jul 17, 2012 02:51 am Title: Chapter 5
The characters are *Chris Browns voice* BEAUTIFUL peopleee ^_^
Omg she figured out that it was her dad!!! So dramatic, I'm not suprised she acted like that though. He left them for Pete's sake, I wouldnt know what else to do in that situation either!!
OMG, Michael's there!
I love this so much!!! You're incredible , <3
Date: Jul 17, 2012 02:47 am Title: Chapter 4
:D Michael is now introduced; I'm thinking I know which hospital he will be heading for ^__^
But omg Chance has lung cancer!!!?!?! :'( I hope she recovers; I'm just happy she is conscious!
I can't believe Chance turned to cigarettes by such a young age; it makes me so sad to think that it was all she could rely on :( I love the character already!
As if there isnt enough drama; THE DOCTOR IS HER FATHER! omgg.
You're AMAZING girl; I love your writing style, there's something about it which makes me eager to read on! (A lot of storied don't get me going like this but I love this so much XD)
Can't wait to read more ;D , <3
Date: Jul 17, 2012 02:39 am Title: Chapter 3
ASDFGHJKL OMG. Well DAMN Emma; you know how to keep us hanging!!
Okay first of all; I understand what Richard means but Diane is right, he should be thinking of others. I can't believe he left so easily though and Chance saw the whole thing :((
I SURE HOPE SHE IS OK! Ah I am so glad the next chapter is already there for me to read!
Awesome chapter ^_^
Much love! <33
Date: Jul 17, 2012 02:36 am Title: Chapter 2
AHHHHHH damnitt!! It was a dream -_- That happens to me way too often ahaha.
Omg, I can't believe she talked to her mother that way but I guess she was angered!! Both Chance and Diane are hurt; I hope they sort this out soon... Ahhh I wonder what'll happen! XD
Date: Jan 01, 2012 11:08 am Title: Chapter 1
I have to ask this now, because I like this story from the first chapter... so, are you still writing on it ?
Date: Jun 07, 2011 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aww! So sad! I feel bad for Chance and Diane. I hope everything goes well. I loved it! :D
Date: Feb 27, 2011 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was great :)