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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2013 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 24

Yes dammit. Let Jill be happy. I don't care about Michael or Alexander. Jill deserves happiness and I hope she gets it by a man who is worthy. Even if it isn't Godfrey, it for DAMN SURE ain't Michael's trifling ass either. He can stay jealous for a fuckin eternity that Jill is with someone else. He needs to. It's exactly what he deserves. 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat! LOOOL! I guess you're still on the Michael hate bus lol. But the story is far from over... ;) Sorry for the late update! But the new chapter is finally here:)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2013 11:32 am Title: Chapter 23

Jill's parents must already know that Michael is Kaya's dad, Jill isn't stupid I'm sure she wouldn't invite him if they didn't know. I know I sure as hell couldn't pop out a kid without telling my parents who the daddy is, they would endlessly interrogate me until I broke down and told the truth. I hope Jill told them the WHOLE story about how he lied to her, he deserves to feel awkward and embarrassed about his actions because they were beyond wrong. KARMA-TIME. 

Can you tell that I still hate Michael in this story? You've got your work cut out for you Annie in convincing me that he should be with Jill if that is in fact where you're taking the story.

Can't wait for Jill to rub Godfrey in his face. 



Author's Response:

Hey Camille :D I know you still hate Michael lol! I know it'll be hard to make yo change your mind. Let's see if I succeed lol! Thank you for the review and the rate

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2013 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 23

Lawwwwdddd.... This is why Jill invited Michael's ass prematurely. She should've either not invited his ass on this visit, or she should've told her parents what the deal was first so they wouldn't be shocked. Smh. Anyway, I can't wait for all the shade to be thrown at this dinner. I hope Godfrey and Jill will be the most loving mushy couple ever and rub it Michael's lonely ass face. And yes, I still don't like him or want him with Jill. He's still a lying cheating coward. But I can appreciate he's a good daddy to Kaya. 



Author's Response:

"Anyway, I can't wait for all the shade to be thrown at this dinner." LMAOOO!!! Let's see what happen. The next chapter is here ;)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2013 08:55 am Title: Chapter 22

Jill needs to stop feeling guilty about everything, especially about Michael's bullshit 'marriage.' She's too soft. The only questionable thing Jill did was not tell Michael about Kaya but after what he did to her it's understandable. Michael understands that he has no grounds on which to be mad at her. Jill needs to focus on Godfrey and Kaya and pay Michael little to no heed. She's wasted enough energy on that man. 

I sure hope Lisa's Elvis-faced androgynous cold-hearted bitch ass is out of the story permanently but I know she'll be back. Just like herpes. 



Author's Response:

Hello Camille :D Indeed, Jill doesn't need to feel guilty. Lisa and Michael would have had a divorce anyway.

Unfortunately, Lisa is going to be back lol! I won't say more :)! Thank you for the review and the rate :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2013 08:44 am Title: Chapter 21

HALLE-FUCKING-LUJAH!

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Ding-Dong the Witch is dead!

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Author's Response:

azsdfghjkailm *dead*

Reviewer: melissmjj1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2013 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 22

think about my idea of Lisa being pregnant ;) 



Author's Response:

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I have other ideas that will involve Lisa ;)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2013 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh brother. I don't think Jill will have to choose between Godfrey and Michael. She's not with Michael, she's with Godfrey. Furthermore, I don't think Godfrey will be that petty. Yes Michael is Kaya's dad but he's not her man. Just the man who impregnated her. But I don't think she should've invited him to that dinner yet.. Idk. As long as Godfrey will be there by her side, I guess it should be ok. I'm just hoping her and Godfrey are acting the cute and adorable couple in front of her family. Just the way Michael's lying fronting ass was with Elvis face. Karma is a bitch and I want Michael to experience it head on!!! Godfrey must be right by Jill's side at this dinner. Jill's family should only know of Michael as Kaya's dad. That's all he is anyway. He doesn't deserve Jill. Definitely not now anyway. I'm glad she's happy wit Godfrey. Michael better know his role at this damn dinner. Lastly Jill needs to stop being so damn soft! Like she's guilt tripping herself over shit that's NOT her damn fault! Knock it off Jill! Michael is suffering and going through a divorce. So what? He's a grown man. Let him deal with his issues on his own. 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat! I hope Jill won't have to choose between them too. They should all be able to get along for Kaya's good. The reason why Jill invited Michel is because she thinks she can have a big family with Alexander, Godfrey and Michael lol. It's a mess but we can't blame her for trying! Let's see how this dinner goes :) Thank you for the review ;)

Reviewer: MichaelJ23 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2013 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 21

All I can say is finally hes leaving Lisa, I've been waiting for this moment and walluh it happen, Hi-5 Michael Joseph Jackson for leaving that cold hearted bitch. Now I'm just waiting for him and Jill to get back together which will mean Michael needs to work hard to get her to fall in love with him. but I like Jill and Godfrey together, they seem cute and Jill deserves to be happy after the way Michael treated her and Godfrey better no turn into those possessive boyfriend. keep up the good work :)



Author's Response:

LMAO! Yes, about time! I think it's going to take a LONG time before Jill thinks of taking Michael back. You're right, she is happy with Godfrey and deserves it! Thank you for the review and the rate :)

Reviewer: melissmjj1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2013 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 21

ohh please! cmon, nothing make sense if Lisa is out from Michael's life... 

then what's next? Michael and Jill end up together??

naah, that's so cliche, it always happens!!

what if suddenly Lisa is pregnant with Michaels child and he has to see her again??

Make Michael and Lisa get back!! is more interesting with the bitch in the middle! 



Author's Response:

I have other ideas for the rest of the story and LMP doesn't have to be in the middle :) You'll see...

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2013 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 21

ABOUT FUCKING TIME! Michael should feel like the biggest fool on earth and I don't even feel sorry for him, and I damn sure don't feel sorry for that big chinned, ugly stank ass Elvis in a wig bitch! Good riddance! I'm glad Michael is divorcing her trifling ass, but I still don't want Jill with him. She seems to be happy with Godfrey. Michael made his bed so now his narrow ass must lay in it ALONE. I hope Godfrey will give Jill the relationship she deserves. She was never meant to be someone's mistress or side ho. I hate that she got pregnant by a married man but it is what it is. Kaya is here now and Jill is her mother. I surely hope Michael realizes how fucking stupid he was. He's not deserving of Jill so I hope he seethes with jealousy every time he sees her with Godfrey. That's what your dumb ass gets michael!!!! Good riddance to Elvis face though, I am glad for that. 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat :D Yeeesss, Lisa is gone haha! Michaell will feel worse when he'll realize how his life could have been if he had dumped Lisa when she cheated. I agree, Michael doesn't deserve Jill yet. And she is happy with Godfrey. He needs to respect that and try to be Kaya's father first! Thank you for the review, the new chater is here :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2013 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 20

Bout time Jill gets some dick. Maybe she will loosen up a bit and stop blaming herself for things that aren't her fault. And whatever to Michael. Not here for him in this story and will never be. Kaya is so cute and smart. 



Author's Response:

LMAOOOOOOOOOO!!! Indeed! It's kinda depressing that the time she got some it was the day she got pregnant... Kaya is a sweetheart :) New chapter up :)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2013 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 20

The scene with Michael and Kaya was cute. Well, at least Kaya was cute. I still hate Michael.

So Kaya knew Michael was her father all along......good luck to him explaining that one to her when she gets older. Ha Ha karma on his narrow ass.

I don't see how he can't be suspicious and pissed at Lisa for her secretive phone calls and avoiding his daughter. On top of ALL the other shit she's done. And the bitch doesn't even live with him! Why the fuck does he put up with this woman was he dropped on his head as a child and now suffering permanent brain damage? I'm seriously beginning to think he's mentally handicapped. It is such an insult to Jill that this is who he chose over her. It's like a slap in the face.....I won't be with you because I'd rather be with a complete piece of human garbage. Just....URGH! 

I know I've said this before but if I were Jill my pride alone would NEVER want to forgive him. I wouldn't even want to see his ass unless I absolutely had to for Kaya's sake.

I'm sorry Annie I just can't anymore. I'm taking a break from this story and I'll continue reading once Lisa is GONE. I can't stand one more chapter of Michael being married to her manipulative ass and not seeing through her bullshit. Not that I EVER want him with Jill he doesn't deserve her. But he really doesn't deserve Lisa NO ONE does.

I wouldn't be surprised at all if she put a hit out on Jill and Kaya like one of the other reviewers said.



Author's Response:

Kaya is a cutie! Yes, she knows about who her father is but like you said, it'll be hard to tell her the entire truth :/

Well, don't want to spoil but someone might leave in the next chapte...

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Reviewer: Sky_Allyi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2013 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 20

Man I Dont Trust Godfrey Or Lisa, They Both Sneaky. && From The Way Her Phone Call Went It Sounded Like She Had Just Ordered A Hit On Jill && Kaya.



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Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2013 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 19

Ok I get the fact that Michael lied to Jill and hurt her. He doesn't deserve to have Jill back in his life romantically but I don't think he deserved to miss three years of his daughter's life either. Jill was wrong to keep their child from Michael. I've been to family court enough times to know that he could sue for custody or visitation rights and Jill couldn't stop him if she wanted to. It makes no sense to me why the other reviewers feel that Michael should suffer because he lied to Jill. It's been three years for fuck sakes! Either Michael and Jill have it out with each other or they forgive each other for the sake Kaya. 

Michael is too blind when it comes to Lisa Marie and her antics, smh. Any other man would have threw the fact that she was ok with him being another woman back in her face. Then he would told that she would just have to deal it and walked out. As a matter of fact he should have told she was the one who fucked up their marriage in the first place and that she needs to get her shit together. At this point Lisa Marie is going too far with her plans to get rid of Jill. Michael needs to wise up and put Lisa in her place. My god he's like naive little kid in this story and its not making him look good. Grow some damn common sense already Michael.

I like how Jill had a little get together with her girls to talk about the situation but I also disagree with how they act like it was Michael's fault for not being their for Jill and Kaya. They can't him for not taking care of a child he didn't know he fathered or say he has to earn being called daddy. That's Jill's fault for keeping the truth from him. Of course their gonna stick up for Jill cause that's their girl but it don't make it right. Friends are great to have so you can talk things over with but at the same time none of them are in Jill's situation and don't know the full story either. Jill has yet to get the full story from Michael and until she does things are going to remain as  they are for now.



Author's Response:

Hello Vicki :)

I get your point. Michael is not the only one to blame in this story. He was wrong for sleeping with Jill, making her fall in love with him and left. But when she got pregnant, Jill should have done the right thing and call him and let him know. This is not his fault if he is not the father he should be. He never had the chance.

Michael is too soft with Lisa. I think he still believe she can change and this is why she gets away with her antics.

Thank you for the review and the rate :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2013 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 19

Kaya is so smart for her age! I'd be surprised if she doesn't remember seeing Lisa before. And the little girl in the pictures is beautiful. Whose kid is she in real life?

I have a sneaking suspicion that Lisa was talking to Godfrey on the phone ... I hope I'm wrong Jill has been through enough bullshit she deserves to meet a great guy and be happy. Well even if my guess is wrong, I just know that Lisa is up to no good. I can't wait for that bitch to get what she deserves which at this point is a swift kick off a 30-story building. 

I'm not even going to comment on Michael I'm done with him in this story. He can get hit by a bus at this point and I think I'd feel happy. 

 



Author's Response:

Hey Camille :) Yes, Kaya is a sharp little girl! Her real name is Nico Parker and she is Thandie Newton's daughter :) About who was on the phone with Lisa... I can't tell! You'll know in due time :D

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