Date: Dec 30, 2018 12:26 pm Title: Stormy Weather
I just had this thought like, what if carolina's granny and katherine met!? Like yoooo they'd start fighting and cursing each other out lol. Granny would win for suree.
Date: Sep 12, 2018 08:40 am Title: Playdate
Hi reading your story and I love it so far. Can’t wait to see what happens next!!!
Date: Jun 05, 2016 04:40 pm Title: Then Turn Around and Make Up
I enjoy reading and re-reading your story! Please continue writing more chapters! I can't wait to read more. Then start writing some new stories! :-)
Date: Jun 05, 2016 04:23 pm Title: Stormy Weather
You are doing a very good job!
Date: Jun 01, 2016 08:27 pm Title: Bliss of Solitude
Unbelieveable!
Date: Apr 29, 2016 07:07 pm Title: Welcome to the Neighborhood
Hey girlie :-}}} i reallyyyyy love ur story. I wish u would upload like everyday lol ... And i loveeeeeee how u got Mike Mike tlkin hood, i would give just about anything to hear him like dat in real life
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2016 04:50 pm Title: Then Turn Around and Make Up
Good for Carolina standing up for herself. If the roles were reversed Michael would have been totally pissed and he needed to realize that.
Date: Apr 29, 2016 01:49 pm Title: Friends with a Freak
Honestly, I was really getting into the story, but when you moved the recording of Thriller to 2013 it was just too much running away from reality. I understand stories using modern technology, as long as they stick to actual dates... I'm sorry, I just can' t go on with this story...
Author's Response:
lol it's okay at least you tried
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2016 01:11 pm Title: The Dinner
Great beginning! Carolina seems like an interesting character.
Date: Nov 22, 2015 08:55 am Title: Stormy Weather
Enjoyed reading your story. Please continue writing more chapters. And, consider writing more stories.:)
Author's Response:
Thank youuuuuuuuu I left this story for dead basically and had shit on my laptop and said well let me upload
Date: Aug 08, 2015 01:37 pm Title: Stormy Weather
I'm glad she decided to get away from him for a while and go off on her own. I'm actually happy she didn't stay with a friend. Sometimes it's good to just have alone time. Besides, everybody doesn't need to know when she and Michael are fighting. Keep people out your business. Anyway, Michael is wrong. Period. He handled that situation poorly and I know he will pay dearly for that mistake and he should. If Brooke giraffe ass is just a friend, why hide it? That's so unnecessary and asking for drama. In this instance, Carolina isn't overreacting and the fact that he tried to counter it with her kicking it with her friends and the dudes they had at their house is ignorant. Not comparable at ALL. I'm actually hoping she does go visit her grandmother WITHOUT him. Michael is so damn stubborn and childish, I'm wondering will he even apologize. His ass has to acknowledge that he is wrong. Period. He needs a taste of his own damn medicine.
Author's Response:
Yeah it's the first story I've ever written so I'm trying really hard with character development and how a real woman would react to these imaginary situations but thanks so much for reading
Date: Aug 03, 2015 10:21 am Title: I Just Don't Want to Stop
Yasssssss tear into his ass Carolina!! He acts a damn fool if she has male friends or whatever, but he can parade around with Brooke's bony flat ass? BYE. I hope Carolina lights his ass up. Maybe have her own lunch dates with some male friends, see how his narrow ass likes that. Katherine ain't shit but I'm glad Carolina is holding her guns. She not gon just punk that girl like that and expect for her to cower. Nah son. And Michael need his ass kicked too.
Author's Response:
It's just a story but have you ever noticed how quickly men will change up if something like that happens. Like they can talk to all the women they want and you're trippin if you speak out but they always make sure every other man is at least 50 ft away from you at all times and oooh don't let you have a male best friend. it's crazy
[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2015 08:20 am Title: I Just Don't Want to Stop
Carolina had better give him a swift kick in the ass (or balls) when they get home. I'm sure all they did do was have lunch but the fact he hid it from her is shady. If she's really just a friend this shouldn't be the first Carolina is hearing about it. Although Caro can get pretty tempermental so maybe he kind of feared her reaction? In real life I never sensed ANY chemistry between Mike and Brooke, I dont think anything romantic ever actually happend between them. So when i read about Brooke in a fan fiction I always extend that thinking to her character whether it is true or not. Brooke just doesn't make a very convincing "other woman" to me. I hope in this case my thinking is correct!
Michael better realize that Carolina has already put up with enough bullshit from men to last a lifetime, she's exceeded her quota so she better lay down the law that she isn't going to put up with ANY bullshit from him.
He needs a taste of his own medicine....maybe Carolina should get an attractive male friend and go on secret lunch dates with him. I'm sure if that were the case Mike would get the point real quick.
Katherine is so wrong for bringing that up though. She's obviously trying to drive a wedge between them and is being a manipulative bitch. I love the fact that she is evil in this story. And that Carolina has no qualms telling her off in front of everyone. Lol.
Author's Response:
You know I definitely agree about Brooke Shields as the other woman I thought about giving Michael some assistant that Carolina never really trusted or using a video girl but I think the only one that really works would be Tatiana Thumbtzen but she shouldn't even be around yet (although it would've been fun to write her in as a "friend" Michael always had) and then Diana Ross but I decided she'd be too old so I said let me go with Brooke. She'd make a good opposing character for Carolina because she seems like she could be pretty mean and she is conventionally attractive so you wouldn't really trust her around your boyfriend even if they are just friends thank you so much for reading though I love thoughtful reviews like this