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Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2015 02:24 am Title: Discomfort

Welcome back and happy new year.  Will you be updating soon for 2000 watts?  I've re read it like 5 times is one of my favorites.  I think Michael & Mickey are the such a great couple and their different personalities and up bringing is very interesting dynamic.  

Looking forward to an update soon for that story; take care and hope your new year is filled with inspiration, new wonderful ideas and all your wishes come true.  God Bless 💗💗💗💗c6; Lummi 😊



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words, but regrettably, I won't be updating 2000 Watts. At the moment, I just don't feel the motivation to continue writing that story as I do with Starlight. Perhaps sometime in the future, I might get back to it, but right now I'm really not into it. I know that disappoints you and others who are fans of that story, and it really bothers me to disappoint you guys, but I don't want to try and force it and deliver something I'm not happy with. 

All I can hope for is that you might give Starlight a try and enjoy this. I know it's not even remotely the same kind of story, but hey, like I said, I can hope.

Thank you for the love, and thanks for the review! :D <3

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2015 09:25 am Title: Discomfort

So I'm kind of confused are Ari and Michael in love I thought it was just a fling with them? Clayton being friendly towards Madison and her friend was one of my favorite parts it's nice to see someone being mature for once and breaking the ice I had a feeling that he was the nices one out of the rest of his siblings so that was really cool to see. That damn Ari irks my damn nerves so bad she really needs to chill I hope Madison knocks her the hell out just one time please. I love Benny he's really cool and the fact that he doesn't seem to care for Michael's and Ari's "relationship" *cringes* makes me like him even more. Madison my girl all the way, and Michael needs to get his shit together I mean I don't know if it's just me but do I test that he seems to try and make Madison jealous whenever he's with Ari or what? I could be wrong but he does that everytime and I'm like dude really? Great chapter thank you so much for the update Can't wait for the next one. Btw can you show pictures of the characters in the next chapter? d84;

Author's Response:

Haha, I know, it may seem like it, right but no Michael and Arianna are not in love. They just have a very strong bond with each other. It's something a long a no strings attached relationship, mixed with a brother-sister bond. I can't really explain it without it sounded incredbly weird, haha. And yes, Clayton seems like a good guy. Pretty down-to-earth and genuine. Hahaha, I'm very aware of your feelings toward Ari, lool. Benjamin is a cutie. I like him, he truly is the baby in the group, hahaha. 

About showing pictures of the characters:

I know who Madison is. 

I also know what Arianna looks like.

We all know what Michael looks like, lool.

But as for Benjamin and Clayton, I searched and searched for hours to find who could fit the people in my mind. I even called up one of my best friends to ask for help -- and still, nothing. 

I'm still looking so that I can get a visual image for you guys, but I want it to feel right. 

Thank you, as always, for the love and support and thank you for the review! :D <3

Reviewer: AschmucksSchmuck Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2014 01:41 am Title: Partnerships

Well who knew Madison had it in her?! She always acts so bad ass until Michael gives her an order. She needs to get her life together ASAP! But it seems like I've become a die hard Arianna fan due to this chapter. So thanks for that! 

Great chapter (even though it took you 7 years) it was worth the wait. Can't wait to see what happens next! #TeamMirianna 

P.S. Your friend Esther sounds awesome :) 



Author's Response:

Lmaaaooo, well I think you just might be on your own in the Arianna fandom. Haha, thank you! And thanks for waiting another 7 years for the newest update. Thanks for the review! :D <3

 

P.S. My friend Esther is kinda awesome. ;)

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2014 05:44 pm Title: Partnerships

Aww you are so very welcome babygirl and thank you for the shout out and for updating I come on here ever now in then just to see if you came back you have no ideal how much I love this story I guess you can say I'm kind of obsesse with it Lol. Now as for this chapter Lord where do I start? First I got to say that I am so proud of Madison for standing up to Michael and telling him off that was my favorite part and even though she stood up to Ari to I kinda felt she let them both intimidate her cause she ran off and she's so much stronger than that. As of this point I don't really care to much for Ari and I'm gone need for her to fall all the way back off Maddy I knew there would be some jealousy on her part so that's no surprise there. Michael had me pissed on certain parts like when he threaten to let Ari at her then turned around and got mad at Ari for suggesting to give her a "taste" like what the fuck dude you like her just admite it already. I couldn't wait for them to get together to but at this point I think Maddy should continue to keep her guard up and not by any means give into Michael at all right now no matter how cute and sexy he is even when it gets to the point where he starts developing feelings for her. If I were her I would play hard to get I still believe that even if the do hook up that once she finds out about him and Ari she's going to be livid and I will have my popcorn ready when she does. I also hope you plan to keep West around I like him and it would be nice to see him take an interest in Maddy to maybe ask her out or something he already seems to like her and I would LOVE to see Michael's reaction to that. Btw have you seen or watch this TV show called The Originals? There's these two characters on there my favorites actually, Klaus and Camie they remind me so much of Michael and Madison checked them out if you haven't seen it. Thanks for updating so happy to see you back, can't wait for more. d84;d84;d84;�d84;

Author's Response:

Thank you for your ongoing support and feedback. It truly means a lot. And no, I haven`t seen The Originals, but I wanted to start watching. I have, however watched The Vampir Diaries and I absolutely adoreee Klaus, so that means a lot. I`ll have to check it out! Thanks for the review! :D <3

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2014 10:42 pm Title: Tension Building

So that's why Michael was so upset about the car I kinda figure it had something to do with his parents.Well it seems like these two really can't stand eachother now hopefully it won't last long cause I can't wait to see these two get together they would be an interesting couple. Love it as usual please keep them coming sweetie btw can you show images of the characters just to get a visual of what they look like? Thanks. :-)

Reviewer: lottajackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2014 02:03 pm Title: Changes

I love the way you write! I just read this story and I love this too :)<3 I hope you update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! You are too kind! Thanks for the review! :D <3

Reviewer: izziebe123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2014 05:09 pm Title: Tension Building

i loooove this story! and i can't wait for the 2000 watts update! 

Reviewer: prettyswagboss89 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2014 01:54 pm Title: The Name Game

Love it



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Thanks for the review! :D <3

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2014 08:59 am Title: The Name Game

I don't think that was right for Michael to treat her that way I mean he did damage her property as well but he does seem to care for her otherwise he wouldn't had tried to soothe her I thought that was sweet but he's still inorant and for him to tell her that he hated her was wrong and hurtful he doesn't even know her so he has no reason to. As for Madison I get that she was afraid but I kinda wish she stood up for herself instead of lettting him spook her. Great chapter I loved it and glad to see you back you have no idea how much I love this story can't wait to see what happens next. :-)

Author's Response:

Yes ma'am, Michael sure does have a temper on him. Hate is a very strong word, you're right, so I think he was trying to hurt her with that one. And yes, my friend actually agreed with you about Madison. When I was proofreading it to her, she said that Michaela should have stood up for herself some more. You don't just let someone do that to you, but hey, Michael is quite the intimidator though, right? Thanks so much for your feedback. Thanks for the review! :D <3

Reviewer: Hazel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2014 08:54 pm Title: The Name Game

Aw crap... now she's done it. I have to say, in the beginning I thought it was funny what she did. An 'eye fot an eye' right? But I guess Michael's car must be a sore spot for him? And here I thought they were starting to get along...

But why so much anger from Michael's part? I know he has a temper but he can't just hate someone so quick like that especially when he seemed to be enjoying their petty echange in the beginning...

Not only that, when he sensed that she was going to cry he was trying to calm her down in a caring (kinda, not really) way. For someone who hates a person, trying to soothe someone would be the last thing on their list.

Whatever the case is, things are going to be real awkward between them from here on out. Yikes.

But on the flip side, I can't wait for 2000 Watts! Please update sooner than soon. I really can't wait much longer. lmao!

 



Author's Response:

This chapter explains Michael's anger, I feel, to when she smashed his car. I think it supports his anger -- just a bit, lool. He did get a bit extreme. I thought he was enjoying their little back and forth too, but as you said, I guess his car is a sore spot. And for 2000 Watts, I'm not sure if you noticed, but I did update. :) I hope you enjoyed that, as well. Thank you so much for your constant feedback here, it's much appreciated. Thanks for the review! :D <3

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2014 08:57 pm Title: Family Matters

Can't wait for another update I've been reading it over and over lol. I really would like to know more about Michael's past like what really happen that day to his mother. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

I know! I'm so sorry! But I'm back lovebug! Let me know what you think of the new chapter! Thanks for the review! :D <3

Reviewer: chichi78 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2014 10:22 am Title: Family Matters

hey, I am one of your silent readers. I read only your and one more author stories on this site. I just want to thank you for your talent and wonderful style. 

I like your ideas and writing, i like how you think and how you express your mind in your stories. 

Please continue with this lovely story it promise to be great one. Of course I am in love with 2000 Watts as my first one from you and my favorite. 

Thanks one more time and keep going please. We will be here always to read, review and rate you as one of the best ones here.

cheers :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so, so much for saying this. This honestly made my day. I can't stop smiling, I don't even know what to say to you. I love you and thank you so much for sticking with me, despite my hiatuses. <333 Thanks for the review! :D <3

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2014 12:51 am Title: Family Matters

i loved this but who she is then



Author's Response:

Who is who? Ari? Arianna is Michael's "sibling" but his sexual partner also. 

Reviewer: Hazel Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2014 11:35 pm Title: Family Matters

I am loving these long chapters! For some stories, I get so disappointed because they're so good but so short!

And also since you've mention ways on how to improve, there isn't much to say since you're writing is great but I do like when the author describes their characters. I'm a visual person and I like to know how these characters look, what they're wearing, etc. But other than that, your story has a lot of the elements that can easily suck a reader in. Keep it up!

As for Mike and Ari, I really wonder about their relationship. Yes they're intimate with each other but is it just physical with them? Could their feelings possibly go past what they have now?

As for Madison.. well... let the games begin. Lmao I can't for these two have in store for each other.



Author's Response:

Yes, I love long chapters too and I love writing them. There's so much more detail and substance in the,. Thank you so much for your tip and you kind words! It means so much and now I know what to put in my next chapters. And as for Michael and Ari, it would seem that their feelings are mainly physical. But I guess we'll see in further chapters, hmm...Hehe, thanks so much for the review! :D <3

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2014 05:57 pm Title: Family Matters

These two are to cute I can't wait to see what Madison has in store for Michael. I also can't help but think that if these two become a couple that there might be some jealousy from Ari and what would Madison think when she finds out Ari and Michael have more than a brother and sister bond. Guess I'll have to wait and find out, great chapter sweetie.

Author's Response:

Oooh, I wonder how Ari would feel if Michael and Madison got together. I wonder if she'd get jealous? I mean, her and Michael really haven't put a title on themselves. right? Thanks so much! Thanks for the review! :D <3

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