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Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2016 07:58 am Title: Chapter 5

Very descriptive

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2016 07:55 am Title: Chapter 4

Good job!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2016 07:54 am Title: Chapter 3

Nice way to put it.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2016 07:51 am Title: Chapter 2

Good start!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2016 07:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Good start...

Reviewer: QueenofPop98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2013 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 5

Update soon! You should try making the chapters a little longer too, I like this story so far! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks hun, I'll work on it!

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2013 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm gon beat you, I swear. 



Author's Response:

What'd I do? Dang.

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2013 12:05 am Title: Chapter 3

They should name the baby Whitley. Just saying. 



Author's Response:

Lol, I'll take that into consideration. 

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2013 03:28 am Title: Chapter 3

awwww i want to know his reaction please next part



Author's Response:

It will be posted when I get off work :)

Reviewer: cabagepatch1023 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2013 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 2

this was reallly gooodd girl:DdD



Author's Response:

You think so? Thanks :)) Chapter 3 is up!

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2013 02:25 am Title: Chapter 1

I hope Michael made breakfast in his underwear



Author's Response:

No, hooker.

Reviewer: kingofpoplover4ever10 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2013 11:37 am Title: Chapter 1

yes definitely continue!

Author's Response:

Thanks, I will :)

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2013 09:03 am Title: Chapter 1

I like it! Chapter was too short though. However, if you're willing to keep going, I'm in. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm going to continue cause I have more than one part to this story :)

Reviewer: Dri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2013 08:18 am Title: Chapter 1

It's good but the chapter is too short...


btw...She has my name...Adriana!

Author's Response:

Sorry! My computer is a bitch so I had to post as much as I could before the page locked me out.

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