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Reviewer: Clsflames Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2017 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 25 | Guess who??

Great I really love this story! I hope you update soon!!

Reviewer: jazii Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2016 01:39 am Title: Chapter 25 | Guess who??

Update soon girl please, i miss this story and i wasn't to see it to the end! I know you got something for us... :)

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2016 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 25 | Guess who??

Dear "Peace Shanice",
I just finished reading chapter 25 and I am really impressed by the way you are developing the story so far. I really like how you are describing Mike and Kadyden. Your story is funny, really hilarious. I love how Michael and Kayden are acting towards each other. It sounds like a real passionate and healthy relationship. Please keep up your excellent work. Please don't make it the typical up and down kind of a relationship. Most MJ fictions have a lot of cheating and trusting issues in it. For once, Inwould love to hear/ read someone creating a beautiful story about a happy healthy and strong relationship where Michael and his girlfriend stick together like glue and no one is able to brake them apart. Please make this wonderful story a positive one with a happy ending. No Dorien or what is the other guys name ? M.... something trying to rape or cheating. Please update soon😊

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2016 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 25 | Guess who??

You're baaaack. Yaaaaay! I'm glad that momma K said that she liked Kayden. But we all knew that she would lol. Anyway I cackled at Kayden telling Michael not to mess up her braids lol those little freaks 😂😂😂. Can't wait to see what happens next. Hope you can update soon! 😘😘😘



Author's Response:

Yes girl. I swear I've been extra busy and barely have time to write, plus writers block lol but Im trying.

Kayden's lil nasty self and Michael is with her on it too.

Reviewer: mollymomo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2016 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 24 | Uh Uhn Rudeness

please keep going!!!



Author's Response:

I promise it's not over. I've just been busy and writers block has me stuck on all my stories right now. But I'll try to add something with in the best few days 



Author's Response:

I promise it's not over. I've just been busy and writers block has me stuck on all my stories right now. But I'll try to add something with in the best few days 

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2015 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 24 | Uh Uhn Rudeness

First of all, I'm so upset that I'm not receiving emails from the site to let me know that you've updated days ago :( But I'm here! And I'm happy that you updated! 

Michael was such a troll for setting Kayden up like that lol he knew that he wasn't right. I kind of figured that he had something to do with that by the way that he just left her hanging and decided to show up just in the knick of time. Kayden handled the situation very well though so kudos to her! 

I love how Dee-Dee was the ringleader in the whole ordeal given the obstacles that she had to endure with Josepph. It was only right that she expressed her overprotectiveness (<--if that's even a word lol) for Michael because she's basically seen it all.

And I think that it was quite romantic for Michael to show Kayden around the house especially in the memory room. He's so cute.

As for this page...I don't even know who that could be. I feel like it may be either her parents or her ex maybe? Idk but I can't wait to find out! Update soon! 

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2015 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1 | Unmasked

Woah - you are alive! Glad to see you back

Reviewer: kopsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2015 06:46 am Title: Chapter 24 | Uh Uhn Rudeness

It has been soo long, but I am glad ur back! I love this story. I can't believe Michael setting her up like that, poor Kayden. Oh no, could the page be from Dorian?



Author's Response:

I know !!! I'm so sorry I was gone for so long. The funny thing is that I based this chapter off meeting my bf's aunt. She interrogated me in a way that makes Dee-Dee look like a saint lol

Reviewer: jazii Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2015 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 24 | Uh Uhn Rudeness

Finally!!! Give us more soon girl!

Reviewer: MJJaddict Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2014 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 23 | Dangerous Flower

Omg. For Kayden's sake I really hope no crazy shit pops off in the kitchen...but I know something is bound to happen lol.

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2014 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 23 | Dangerous Flower

Yaaaaaay for the updaaaaate 🙌🙌 This was really cute. I felt a little sorry for Michael for having to deal with Kade and her mood swings lol poor thing. And awwww at her meeting the family even if it was a spare of the moment type of thing. Seems as though everything is going well so far. I hope that it stays that way. Michael better keep an eye out for Jermaine. I'm interested to read Katherine's, the sisters' (if they're even there) and wives' reactions to meeting Kade. Oh and her interaction with Brandi and Yashi was so cute 😊😊 Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

You know it took me FOREVER to finish this chapter.

Lmaoo yes, Kayden is putting Mike through so much shit.

I really need to hurry up and get started on this next chapter because it is so funny what happens when Kade meed the rest of the fam, and the sisters are there lol.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2014 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 23 | Dangerous Flower

Damn. I really missed your writing - I forget how good it is. I'm seriously sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

OMG I need to start writing the next chapter cuz ehat happens next is some shit lol 

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 20, 2014 08:48 am Title: Chapter 22 | By Any Means Necessasry

Yaaaaay for an update!! 🙌🙌 Uh ohhhh at Kayden slacking on her internship search. I wonder if she's gonna take Michael's offer. I can understand where she's coming from with the hesitation of agreeing to be his photographer though. That'll be so much drama to deal with on top of paranoia from people thinking that she only got the job because she and Michael are a couple. I can't wait to see what she decides though.

And I HOLLERED while imagining Mike scrunching his face after smelling her breath! He ain't even right for that lol. The situation with Kayden and her mom is messed up though. That has to be the hardest thing not being able to talk to your mom *sigh* Anywaaaaaaay, I enjoyed the chapter!!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2014 11:18 am Title: Chapter 22 | By Any Means Necessasry

You're back! Yasssss!

I reread the story b/c I'd forgotten a lot of it and a bunch of scenarios jumped into my mind that I'm now pondering/anticiating:

-Dorian's return

-When Kade will become public knowledge

-What's going to happen when MJ gets a different photographer? Will it be a girl?

-Who will Kade be a photographer for? Girl, if it is Prince, I will laugh hysterically. That would be epic.

-(and now) what's the deal with her mom? IF/when Kade becomes public knowledge, will her mother suddenly appear?

I love this story and I'm so glad to see you back!

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2014 10:15 am Title: Chapter 22 | By Any Means Necessasry

I have a problem. I'm reading so many fanfictions that I forget some of them (The ones that aren't updated as often) Soo... I read half of this and I really don't remember what it's about. All I remember is the name and the fact that I like it. So... I just wanted to tell you that I haven't given up on it, but I'm not sure I have the time to read it all over again. I'll probably do it when I have more time. <3

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