Date: Mar 30, 2015 11:38 am Title: Chapter 4: Powerplay
Uhhh snap! Hot damn!
Date: Mar 30, 2015 11:30 am Title: Chapter 3: It's On (Like Donkey Kong)
She's bold, I like that. I think Michael had a thing for bold women. All those women: Diana Ross, Elizabeth Taylor, Tatum, Lisa... they were all pretty straight forward. I've always thougth that Michael liked powerful women, that he was in awe of them.
Date: Mar 30, 2015 11:08 am Title: Chapter 2: Sex and Despair
Oh wow haha. A bit slutty, but what the hell. I wonder what Michael's view on sex is. Just a physical act or something emotional. It would be funny to see how Olivia thinks once she truly fall for someone.
Date: Mar 30, 2015 10:04 am Title: Chapter 1: The Yogurt Wars
Loved it. "Only in your wildest dreams", haha. definitely my favorite line.
Date: Mar 30, 2015 09:57 am Title: Prologue
I don't know why I've never given this story a chance. But now, FINALLY, I am ready to start on something new. Yay. I can't wait to get started :).
Date: Jan 01, 2015 09:23 am Title: Chapter 39: Green Eyed Monsters
Love this story, pleeeease update, can´t wait for the drama.
I read whole story in one day, Olive and Michael are cute together and I love your humour, you are a great writer.
Date: Sep 03, 2014 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 39: Green Eyed Monsters
This is so amazing! Read your story so far in just two days! Seems more like one. You're such a great writer and Olivia was a perfect match for Michael! They're so cute together, can't wait to see more!
Date: Sep 03, 2014 10:39 pm Title: Prologue
This story is AMAZING! I can't wait for the drama...
Date: Sep 03, 2014 11:45 am Title: Chapter 39: Green Eyed Monsters
Just finished all the chapters you've posted. I love your story line. The suspence you leave at the end of most chapters keeps me coming back to read the story. I hope you continue to post new chapters.
Date: Sep 03, 2014 09:32 am Title: Chapter 39: Green Eyed Monsters
Oh my god. You dont know how happy I was to see that you updated. Latoya is trippin and she giving me a bad vibe but I hope im wrong. And lmao at all of staring at Michael's crotch ! Adele is something else and Lisa better stay the fuck back! I aint too worried tho cuz Liv can hold her own but still. Really tho? Masturbating to the thought of Michael? Not only is that nasty but its desperate. Laaawwd smh. But im ready for more!
Date: Sep 02, 2014 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 39: Green Eyed Monsters
Damn, those girls were quiet when Michael came into the room haha. Hell I don't blame them, I'd do the same damn thing. Also, I have a feeling something is gonna happen between Lisa and Liv. I don't know what, but somethings gonna happen. And lord, don't get me started on LaToya.
Just so you know, I am still a fan of your writing and will always read and review. Even if I am the only one :) Update soon, hun! <3
Date: Sep 02, 2014 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 38: The Eye Of The Hurricane
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omg.
THAT WAS GREAT. I can't wait to read more!!! :D
Date: Sep 02, 2014 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 9: I've Got A Crush On You
OMG I so love this story. The humour is amazing! You have great talent. It is so refreshing to have your humour added to the storyline.
Date: Jun 16, 2014 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 38: The Eye Of The Hurricane
My new favorite couple! Drama drama drama but I love it and I can deal with it. I'm just glad to read this story when it left off on a happy moment. That whole Julius situation is CRAZY. Cray cray! This is getting added to my favorites and I'm so happy I'm caught up. I love it. Update soon!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. I love all of your stories. I've posted a new update, my writer's block has finally left. I'm going to try and update sooner next time.
Let me know your thoughts on the new chapter!
Date: Jun 16, 2014 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 13: Till Death Do Us Part
HA! LMFAO! The end of this chapter was excellent.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you liked it. Thought I would throw in something a bit different. At the very least it will give Mike and Olivia something to talk about for a long time.....