Date: Jan 20, 2016 08:28 am Title: Chapter 18: I'll Be There
You have written such a n elaborate story so far, so why don' t you keep on updating? Please keep up the excellent work. It is so much fun to read as it is so skillfully written. The characters are so real. It is a shame if you don' t go on. Please, please, please a thousand times keep on writing and finish the story.
Date: May 26, 2015 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 39: Green Eyed Monsters
Neat so far. :) I like it, and I hope that La Toya will be able to come up with a plan to help Michael out, and that Jack will get the punishment he deserves for what he said about Olivia and Michael, too. :)
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)