Reviews For For The Road
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2016 01:36 pm Title: Daddy's Home!

YAY!!! Daddy's home!🙌💋

I know he and the kids are so glad to be home and not plane hopping from place to place, day after day. I giggled at Micah talking about he had to pee.😂Boy...if you don't get your big behind up and go to the bathroom without describing what you need to do! Lol.😷🙅🙏

Aww...Renée is really catching it with this baby huh? MJ4 ain't playing with her at ALL! 👶👶 This baby or babies are going to be hell on wheels!😂👊

Janet and Jerelle are really going through it. Well, that's what lies and secrecy will do to you and your relationship. Jerelle knows she is embarrassed and afraid to tell her family about him and their baby, outside of Katherine and this is making him feel some kind of way. I don't blame him for it.

Now,Michael and Renée are so cute at home. Lol, at Bill on the phone asking MJ if they'll be late BC HE thinks him and Renée may be getting it on. Lol.

Uhoh...It's going to be a problem when Renée goes back to Havenhurst and discovers Melanie there. MJ should have told her about his conversation with Alex about her and Melody while he was getting ready because this is about to be a problem. Especially, since that little girl will tell her momma Renée was there, when asked about her day/time at Havenhurst. Good to see Rebie!

Aww...at Michael's reaction to finding out he's going to be a daddy again...👼👣👨. I died at that bodyguard thinking Renée was a fan and blocking her and Sam access until Bill got involved. Bill taking BIM into an empty room doesn't look good-he's probably fired after this debacle. I like Sam!😆

More please, thank you!👏👍👌👊🙋 Don't keep me hanging girl!😂

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2016 05:08 pm Title: I'm Tripping

Girl...YASS! This chapter was 🔥! I didn't know if I was coming or 🚪🏃lol. 👏👏👍

Ooh...Houston and Jaceion throwing bows 👊👊 about 💸💵? I ain't 👓 this coming, that's for sure. What IS the deal about the money that Ms. Rena knows and exactly how is Jaceion earning his 💸💵? Inquiring minds want to know, especially since his crib 🏠 is almost bare, as Renee describes it.

Yay, Daddy Michael is on his way home to HANDLE it in more ways than one!😆🙌💃👅. 😂 Renée better get her sleep honey because MJ ain't about to play no 🎮 honey!c2;c2;c2;

Hold up, hold up, hold up!📣 Who the fuck is Alex supposed to be to demand anything about Renée, the man's wife you hurt by sleeping with and having a baby for HER husband!? This bish got life all the way fucked up 💯!

Michael didn't check her as hard as he should have and he keeps talking about dealing with Alex regarding Melanie but what the hell exactly is he doing? He ain't mentioned taking her to 🏫?

He also should have talked to Renée first before agreeing to anything with Alex. The fuck she mean, "I won't be disrespected?" Hoe, you don't deserve her respect and the NERVE!😒🙅 I can't wait to see how this little meeting goes. STAT sis!Lol.

GTFOH Trey! Dude is mad jealous and obsessed. Renée needs to tell MJ about his behavior because they're in danger girl! 🚨b🆘 Tremain's acting like the male version of Glenn Close in "Fatal Attraction."🔪🔪🐇🐰 "I will not be ignored Renée!" 😂

Damn, you played me sis! Lol. I was all smiling thinking Renée dream was REALITY then 💥💫! Cracked my face 😭😨😂

More please, tonight if you can! Bring "Daddy" 🏠!😆

Thank you!😙🙋👏👍

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2016 01:08 pm Title: Ha! So much for that

Aww...Janet and Rell. At least they've both accepted this baby. Now, they need to build up their confidence about their relationship and dealing with her family's opinions, which shouldn't matter, at the end of the day. Jan's GROWN and pay's her own bills! Joseph, of all people's opinion shouldn't matter worth a damn, since he is a whore with an outside child. Fuck what he "thinks!"💯

Katherine took it well; however, Jan shouldn't have lied about Rells job BC it will only be a problem, since they will have to build lies on top of lies to maintain it. Not to mention, it will make Katherine not trust him.

Now, Renée and MJ, lol...
4 1/2 weeks huh? That's a "game room baby." 🎮🎱👶 "Sonic,"🐺 to be exact 😂😂
Tonya gives me LIFE! She is a breath of fresh air and voice of reason between MJ and Renée. Now, I wish for her, her own pregnancy and baby, because she would be a great mom.👩🙏

😂 at the doctor assuming they were a lesbian couple👭. Nothing wrong with that, but funny nonetheless. And, I know Renée wasn't asking about sex while pregnant, when she's been pregnant three times and was having sex during each. Girl...🚫. Lol. Daddies coming 🏡🏠 tomorrow and he's about to 🏊 in that 🐹. Stop fronting sis! Lol.

Thank goodness Renée came to her senses about working with that 🐍 Trey. 👏 Now, Lord, why Jaceion and Houston throwing 👊👊? Renée pregnant, so Tonya and her bodyguard need to break it up.

More please, thank you!😆👍👏👏

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2016 07:02 pm Title: More About Nothing

Yass!!! Ruh roh.🐶🐕 I knew Trey showing his black ass up would cause a problem. The no good so and so.🐀 Hmmpf!

Janet and Jerelle are too funny to me. What the hell kind of cake icing was she trying to make that had the chef thinking it was cheese sauce!? Lol. Jan, stay out of the kitchen girl!🚫🚨 lol. I loved the way that he comforted her though, BC she acting up too BC she's pregnant. Now, when will they tell Katherine? Most mothers can tell, so it'll be interesting if Katherine claims she's been dreaming of 🐟.

Lol. My grandma was just like this, and she was always spot on that somebody was pregnant when she dreamed of 🐟. May be an old southern thing, but I can attest to its accuracy. 🚪😂🙉👊

Also, Michael gotta find out sooner or later and he can either act an ass or just go with it. However, with everything that he's done, being sanctimonious wouldn't be in his best interest.

Damn, their argument was LIT, but I can understand both points of view, but I agree with MJ on this. Hell, Renee wouldn't have it at ALL if Michael stared working with Lena, Tatiana orAlex because of the histories there. She don't need Trey's money that bad on this deal to not let it go.

They're both stubborn as hell and went from 🅾to 💯 quick. They're going to have to compromise on this in some way that's palatable for both.

More please, thank you!👍👏👌😆👑

Reviewer: ddkotf58 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2016 09:53 am Title: I Can't Win

I just started reading and I'm disappointed in Michael already. Bravo!

Author's Response:

Aww thanks for giving me a chance! And yeah he'll be disappointing you a lot more but it gets better! Promise 👍🏾. Hope you like it.

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2016 03:41 pm Title: Strictly Business

Girl...shut the front door! This chapter was LIT! b32;🔥

Alex was screwing Jacieon and bounced for the father of her son then bounced on Michael? Hush yo' mouth!! 👀👀😂 I can't! JT should've went ahead and turned Tonya loose because that hoe was BOLD...💯

Michael really fucked up messing with her. I don't blame Renee saying that MJ better check her. He better Point blank.

I died and resurrected 😱👻 when that fool Tremaine appeared. The fuck!? No mam, I ain't having it! Lol.

Why is he stalking Renee? He's also obsessed with Michael. Renee better watch him and tell MJ BC I get the feeling he will leak the pregnancy to the press and claim HE'S the father, just to get under MJ's skin and hurt them.

The bastard.

More please, thanks!👍👏👏👌

Here, take my firstborn cause you done scalped 💆💆 and split my wig at the same damn time!

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2016 04:52 pm Title: Concerned much?

Aww...lol. They kill me! I love Tonya and thinks she needs her own story. Better yet, I'm hoping this story turns into a trilogy and whatever you would call the 4th installation. Lol.💯🎋👏

Micah is about to get handled if he keeps up with the attitude because it's clear MJ ain't having it.👏

Renee is right; Michael gonna crazy when he gets this news and unfortunately, Alex will probably try to ruin it by going public and claiming he doesn't take care of Melanie. Can we get Tonya to kick her ass since Renee is pregnant right now and can't do it?🙌😂

Ooh...and I haven't forgotten about Janet and Jerrell. Look at him! Acting like a daddy already. Lol👶

Thanks! More please 👍👏💐🎋🌹💧💧

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2016 11:25 am Title: Boom!

@AlwaysloveMikey, awww thanks! I'm glad you enjoy my reviews as much as I enjoy your story. In fact, I wait with baited breath and anticipation for every update, checking daily. Lol 🎋🎋💯

Now, girl...I KNEW it! 👣👶Mike gonna go crazy over this! Lol. Now, the news will really be 🔥 if she ends up expecting...👶👶 TWINS!! Boy, Mike would really strut his ass around like a proud 🐓 then.💃Lol.

Baby...Momma Rena gonna blow her shit with this here, lol since she already over there spazzing over Rell and Jan. Lawd, lol. She gonna have TWO new Jackson grandbabies born within less than a week or so or a little less than a month apart.😂 It's getting hot in hurr...😅

I love JT and Tonya now that we get to hear him speak himself. He loves Tonya and vice versa and I'm hoping that Friday results in them expecting now to round out the TRINITY, lol. THREE cousins expecting babies within a 1-2 month span. YASS...

Now, let's see how Janet handles her dad about Rell and their baby. She's a grown woman and knows he feels inadequate, so I'm hoping she stands up for him and helps build his confidence.

Fire Frank STAT, before MJ4 comes out looking like him. Lol.

Melanie: since Alex refuses to allow MJ to speak to her, I wonder why he hasn't, if that's correct, contacted his lawyer about her denying him visitation? I'm sure he has some recourse and he needs to get on it BC that heifer is raising the stakes.

Thanks! More please.🙌👏👏👍

Reviewer: syl Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2016 07:16 am Title: Boom!

Knew she was pregnant 😌

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 27, 2016 08:39 pm Title: Boom!

Lol that was funny as hell

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 27, 2016 04:38 pm Title: Girlfriend

YASS!!👏👏 I'm a fan of long chapters, so thank you and keep em' coming! Shows that you put effort and are interested in your story. 👍

Girl...these sex scenes are 🔥🔥🔥! These two cumming so hard and long they fuckin up some comma's around here! Lol.b32;

I love Bill and Tonya, lol. They keep it REAL with Michael and Renée, even if they don't like it.

Now, Michael and Renée need to stop playing! They don't want to get pregnant? Aah... Too late for all that for real. She been pregnant, IMO. Just waiting on her to stop this denial. Even Michael has noticed how she's unconsciously protecting her stomach all of a sudden. I mean, he's impregnated her twice already and they ain't never used protection. Might I add, Renée acting like she don't know about birth control...girl, d62;🚥. Lol.

I'm glad Michael checked his son like he did BC left unchecked he'll begin to challenge both of them.

Amy is so cute...and I died at Renée and Frank mess and... Renée trying it too hard talking about "his other how's." Lol. She was fronting hard girl...she wanted Mike to claim her after she was playing hard to get. Lol. Knowing she kept avoiding MJ giving her that official title even though he was making it CLEAR with his actions.

Thanks! Keep it coming!💐🌹💃👌👊

Author's Response:

Girl I truly love your reviews! I literally look forward to them but any who! Renee has been stunting for a while now but Michael is gonna get her right, just watch lol, and Bill and Tonya are probably the ones that keep these two going. I love writing for them but I'm glad that you stay reading! I appreciate it.

Reviewer: LadyT55 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 27, 2016 09:43 am Title: The Surprise Guest Has Arrived!

Things are heating up! Love the story.

Author's Response:

Thank you! Hope you continue to love it d84;a039;

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2016 03:42 pm Title: The Lady In My Life

Girl...it was fire! Lol. Mike tore that thang up baby! Renée might not be able to feel them legs...😂👊

Lol at Tonia and Bill listening. Were MJ and Renée THAT loud or were Tonya and Bill sitting their with shot glasses against the wall listening? Lol.

Boy, I can only imagine what happens either tonight or the next evening when they both (Renée and MJ) have to face them knowing know they're going to torment then to death. Lol.

Damn, from the way they were going at it, I'm sure the bed must have been banging against that wall rhythmically.

Thanks! 👍👏

Reviewer: Bearcat96 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2016 07:54 am Title: The Lady In My Life

This is my first time ever reviewing a story. I love this chapter!!!! I really want to see how Renee is going to interact with Michael's other child.

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2016 06:17 am Title: Could You See Yourself With Me Again?

Don't see how Michael can get full custody of Melanie unless Alex is somehow neglecting her or not providing for her needs. Just because he doesn't want to deal with Alex and Alex is an obnoxious #$%@ doesn't mean a judge is going to agree to taking a child away from it's mother. Now, he may have to bring it to court to force Alex to allow him to spend a reasonable amount of time with Melanie, instead of withholding time to blackmail him for child support that he doesn't owe. He already pays for his little girl and certainly doesn't owe her mother anything extra.

Alex needs a reality check and to be kept in line. She also needs to stop trying to force her daughter into the mix when MJ is trying to repair his family. It's like she is not satisfied with the amount of damage she already caused and has to try to make more. She is cancerous. She doesn't seem to realize that her actions, creating a child out of infidelity and blackmail, are what have led to that child not being part of a healthy family. And unfortunately Melanie is always going to be on "the outside" due to her mother.

This shit right here, this is why I could never be Renee. After everything he already put her through she now has to deal with this bullshit too? Wouldn't be me.....you can love someone as much as you want, but if it's too stressful and painful to be with them love can't always fix it

You must login (register) to review.