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Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 01, 2017 08:44 am Title: Finally Getting It Right

And another one! Lol. You're on a roll girl!🙌�‘�

Hold up! Has Rell lost his damn mind? I mean, I know he and Jan aren't "together' but umm...seeing as though she's pregnant and they being cordial and all, he would sit down somewhere. Ain't this fool on parole too and he's out here dipping it and doing it with strangers? I know Jaceion a certified how, but Rell too? Lord, Mrs. Rena gonna snatch him up before it's over. Lol.

Umm...no the hell Tatiana didn't! Damn, this chick is thirsty as hell...She's using the group Brownstone to stay around MJ, but I'm glad he and Bill already got a plan for her ass...and Alex. Although, I don't think it will be as easy as they think to get rid of her... Now, let's see which one runs to the press first.

Renee and Michael are cute, but who told them you can't have sex while pregnant? Hell, who told them you can't perform oral sex while pregnant? I know both aren't true, so I'm not understanding this...Bewildering, to say the least, because you can do all of the above up until delivery, unless the pregnancy is high risk, which hasn't been hinted at.

I wonder what Jan wants to talk about and why... Hmm...

Thank you! 😆�‘� More tea please �’�🙏🙋�‘��’…

Author's Response:

I think he deserves to celebrate lol Janet is playing games he has needs . Yeah Michael has two women on his hands that he def needs to get rid of, well at least Tatiana. Renee wants to please her man but Michael just doesn't want her too . I'm assuming because he enjoys that alone. However I agree lol sex is harmless in this situation. Thanks again! 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 01, 2017 01:54 am Title: Finally Getting It Right

Oh so now Tatiana wants to be a manager *rolls eyes* but gosh those two love birds are so adorable! That bro of hers needs to chill. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Tatiana is trying to get in where she can fit in. Smh. These ladies just can't let go.  Mike and Renee are too cute you're right 😍! Stay tuned and thanks! 

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2017 09:56 pm Title: All for LOVE

Girl...when I saw that I had TWO updates,I was doing like Eddie Murphy and the Clumps..."Hercules, Hercules!" Lol.Great job!You know I LOVE long chapters! 👍😆👏

Okay, on to the story:I understand Renee's frustration with Alex. Tbh, MJ should've BEEN handled that, but no...he let it ride, so Alex thinks she can do whatever the hell she wants, simply because she's that little girls mother; including disrespecting his home and more importantly, his former wife/now girlfriend.💅👀 I am hopeful that MJ and. Renee can continue to work things out by communicating BC there scene in the kitchen was so cute. MJ is really excited about the baby. I'm waiting on him to attend a doctors appointment now with Renee about the baby...I'm still hoping for twins. Lol.

Now, the only negative thing I gotta bitch about is Renees comment about Melanie being only his daughter.Renée is wrong for that, straight up! When she agreed to give MJ another chance, she had to understand that she has to accept that child as her own. She don't have to like it, and I understand her feelings, but she cannot accept Michael and not his child-they are a packaged deal, full stop. Melanie IS apart of her family and is THEIR child too. Renee just has to swallow this, or there will be problems. Children aren't stupid and Melanie feels something from Renee, hence her behavior at Rena's house.

MJ needs to sit his freaky, horny ass down, talking about can he at least eat her! Lol. All in front of Bill at that! Lol. Now, I'm glad Jan and Rell are acting like adults. I felt so bad for Rell when he went to that job interview knowing that he wouldn't get the job, with that the felon label on him. I almost real life cried when MJ came through, and blessed him with, not only a job, but a guaranteed promotion! Won't he do it!?🙌☝👼👐 Yass MJ and go Rell!

Finally, MJ is about to do something about Alex...

P.S. His ass better be at home when it's time for Renee to deliver.

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2017 03:32 pm Title: Let's Keep The Optimism Shall We?

🙋 girl! I'm glad to see you're back!

Great chapter. Micah's birthday was a hit, until that crazy, obsessed and jealous woman showed up. This girl is really PRESSED BC her plan to trap MJ didn't work-She thought getting pregnant by him would keep him or make him want to be with her and it backfired. The man don't want her!

That's what is driving her crazy. Yes, MJ should fire some of his security, because they let her in. I don't blame Renée either for being mad. I also agree with her telling Tanya to let him deal with his baby mamma. He cheated with her and now he's STUCK with her! I'm still wondering when is he going to take her to court regarding custody and visitation, especially after her threat to take this whole situation public.

Aww..I'm glad that Jan and Rell are at least getting along and being cordial.

P.S. I know Micah and Carley are going with Janet, but what about Melanie?

Nice long update and I'm loving it!
More tea please!

Author's Response:

haha hey girl!! How you been? still holding on i see :)

 

Thanks, yeah Alex is starting to actually annoy MJ finally lol. As far as court we'll see...It could be soon since hes finally getting fed up with her BS. Renee is def so over the thought of her and her being pregnant with these moodswings chile ain't making it any better. Yeah Mel is going with them too, she was just the only one that didnt go to sleep.

more coming hun 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2016 06:47 am Title: Family First

I've started this story from the beginning a few days ago and I'm glad I did! Great story!!! Waiting for the next chapter :))))



Author's Response:

awww thanks so much ! its coming soon!! I'm almost done with it! 

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2016 02:45 am Title: Family First

P.S. I love the new banner and images!👍🙌👏🙋

Author's Response:

Thanks GIRLLLL! I tried to keep it cute lol . You are such a loyal reader I appreciate that.

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2016 10:44 am Title: Family First

Hey girl!! I am so glad to see you back! It had been so long, I had started to think you'd given up on the story altogether. Thank goodness you haven't.Please, keep the updates coming!

OK, on to the story: Aww...Micah is 8 now. He's getting up there. Next, it will be Carlie and Melanie. Renee has been doing well in regards to Melanie being around and the kids have accepted her, and that's a good thing-because they are siblings at the end of the day, whether they liked it or not. Just great to see that they didn't let their fathers hurtful actions against their mom make them hate Melanie.

Now, that crazy mother of hers is another story altogether! That chick is crazy and determined to cause problems for not on Michael's relationship with Melanie, but her siblings and especially Renee. She thought she had done something special by spitting out Melanie for MJ-thinking that she would be the "baby" but her face is cracked, since her plans didn't turn out like she thought.

LOL. I would love to know Nana and Rena's reaction to the news. Lord, Janet and Jerrell STILL tripping. They both need to sit down somewhere!

I'm glad Renee let MJ know what the DEAL is now, and that she ain't having it with him whoring around or having anymore children, although I think they may be in for a twin surprise. MJ may get his wish after all!

Thanks and more TEA please!
:)

Reviewer: CharlottaYSmith Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2016 08:25 pm Title: I Can't Win

Despite all other emotional problems I am having right now, this chapter left me a bit tearful though I've never ever been in that kind of situation personally. I know that my mother has dealt with that plenty of times including the emotional abuse she endured during their marriage when I was very young. I also know how it feels to be unappreciated though I wish that someone at least cared a bit that they've made me cry.

I really did like the opening chapter for this so far yet I found some errors. There happens to be a switch of point of views. You began with first-person but went to third-person and back to first. I suggest that you can change it to first person because it looks like that was the intended point of view narrative for the story. Thank you for sharing this. I shall I read more.



Author's Response:

Im truly sorry that - that has happened to your mother, and I'm definitely sorry about what happened to you! Girl there's definitely some careless people in this world but we all will eventually find the right one for us :) . I also want to thank you for critiquing me in such a positive way. I appreciate it deeply. <3

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2016 05:24 pm Title: Noo I Wasn't Readyyy

Hey girl! Yay!!

Just in case you don't know this, but your CHAPTERS 64-65 are blank. Just in case someone else is trying to read those.

Reviewer: gottobethere2016 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2016 08:48 pm Title: You Want My Love And You Can't Deny It

Love this!!!!

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2016 06:06 pm Title: Noo I Wasn't Readyyy

Good, Mrs. Katherine and LaToya knows, now time for the rest of the family, although Houston kinda blurted it out. But hell, they were going to find out sooner or later. Now, how is Ms. Rena and Nana gonna take this. Lol.

Thank goodness Tell and Houston got out. It's still messed up how he was arrested anyway. There has to be more to the story...they searched his car and didn't find anything and he had no warrants... So, what exactly was he arrested for?

Aww...Micah is about to turn 8! Renee better stop that crying because she's about to have her hands full. Lol. I wonder how Ms. Rena and Nana feel about seeing and having Melanie around?

Thanks girl!🙋 MORE ☕🍵 please!

Author's Response:

You know it's coming sis!

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2016 09:10 am Title: Ain't This Some Sh-

Girl...Damn, that sex scene was FIRE!!!Michael is right though. After he done put it DOWN like that TWICE, Renee need to cook that man a home cooked meal! Hell, I would have given him a trophy for his "Good Work."

I hope Michael can help Jarrell at least make some money in the beginning to help provide for his upcoming child and Janet. Yes, she doesn't need his money, but let him do what a REAL man should do-provide for his family. That's party of the reason now that they're broken up-Both have misplaced pride and Janet can't see that he feels like less than a man having her provide for him and everything else.

I wonder why Katherine and Rebbie showed up at Neverland...Lawd, Alex reaction is just what I expected, Lol. That heifer is SHOCKED and APPALLED honey!Michael FINALLY put her in her damn place and told her what her REAL problem is-He don't want her. She thought she had scored the ultimate victory and upper hand on Renee by having Melanie be his youngest child, but the joke is now on her...That chick was choking like she had caught an hairball. Lol.

Lord, these men can't keep their dicks in their pants. Houston back cheating on Cheyenne again and got the nerve to be mad that she got her somebody else too? Boy, BYE. Why is Rell being arrested? I thought his release was complete, unless he has some warrants or has not completed some conditions of his release...

You right sis, "Ain't this some shit..."

Thank you! More please! :)

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2016 05:58 pm Title: It Will All Come Together

🙋🙋 girl!!! I thought you had given up on me! Lol. Thank you for this update, because honey...the TEA is real and the shit is flying😥😂

Ms. Rena ain't having NONE of Jan and Rel mess. I mean none! Lol. She was so upset she put EVERYBODY ass out including the grandkids! Lawd😂. Jan and Rel both tripping. Neither one can blame each other because they both need to grow up and glow up-two grown ass people worried about what their parents gonna say about them being together... Y'all parents ain't sleeping with y'all.💯👊

Renee know she ain't right. Lol. She nearly swallowed her tongue at this Rel and Jan mess. Lol. I'm glad MJ didn't try to act a fool after finding out about his sister and brother in-law because that would have made for some awkward family relations, not to mention his own home ain't that sound again yet. He knows he's still in the 🐶🏠 and better crawl SLOW.

Now, the interaction between Melanie and Renee was awkward, but to be expected. They don't really know each other and haven't spent a lot of time together, so it's not surprising. Eventually, things will become less awkward. I think for the little girl too, it's her momma's trifling ass probably talking negative about Renee, around and to that little girl. She gonna die when she hear Renee pregnant, with her jealous ass.

I'm glad though, that MJ stepped in and saved the day with Renee and Melanie. It's his JOB. Now girl, that sex scene made me b32;🔥. I got thirsty and everything and had to pause and get my wine cooler🍹. Now,you know you wrong for leaving me hanging on this scene! I know you gonna bring it and let us know how Renee about to even this score, 👅 and ALL. Yass...girl!

Now, who calling Ms. Rena at that time of night and when exactly does Renee and MJ plan on letting everyone else know about their 👶, although I suspect 👶👶👣👣 because of how sick she's being. That baby(ies) already bad as hell! Lol.

Thanks again girl and I look forward to your updates.😆🙌👏

Author's Response:

Girl nooo! Haha never . I'm glad you're still here holding on ! Loyalty c4;🏽 yas

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2016 09:52 am Title: 2nd To None

Girl...it's been almost two months with no update! Girl, you better have about four updates ready! Lol.

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2016 06:19 pm Title: 2nd To None

🙋 girl!! I know exactly what you mean. I'm working and now I've started graduate school, so my plate is literally running over! I now have to carve out about 2 hours a day to myself.😩😧

OK, now on to the story. Lol. Girl, I knew him making that agreement with that hoe Alex was going to come back to bite him. Renée had every right to be mad. He's always making concessions for Alex and not putting her in her place legally and personal wise. Also, Melanie will return home and tell that Renée was there.

Hoeness, runs in the family. Jermaine nasty ass sounding proud of having a mistress, and it's none other than that hoe Lena. 😫 She REALLY want to be in the family I see. Desperate ass...

Uhoh, Tonya done got the "D!" Now, she needs to be pregnant.👣👶 Michael is going to catch hell with Renée and her pregnancy mood swings...Think positive thoughts Michael!😂😂

Who was teaching Micah how to box? Trey? 💪👀. Miss Rena is a trip! Busted up in that door like, "ain't nobody gonna be fucking up in here but me!"😂💅

Now, Renée need to go ahead and tell them she pregnant. Ain't no need of hiding it, especially since Jerrell about to drop Janet pregnancy news on MJ. This might get ugly, especially if he tells him he's walked out on Jan, all while she's pregnant...👀👂💆Renee and MJ need to stay out of that so it won't put a strain on their own relationship, which is still rocky.

Rena ain't playing! Lol. Let him know off top that she's still watching him. Lol. I bet she pointed her fingers at her eyes then at Michael.👉👉👀

Now, next up is the drama from Alex, once again. I want that 🐓 needs to have several💺💺.

Thanks!👏👍🙋

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