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Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2013 03:43 am Title: Don't Judge of my Composure

AWWWW i'm so happy they are back gosh love it



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^_^ thank you!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2013 02:02 am Title: Don't Judge of my Composure

Lol well damn!!!!! Guess Mike felt he had somethin to prove huh? Wanted to show her that he's still her man and he don't want nobody else hittin that. Mm hmm.. I see you Mike. He's still a damn troll though. Lol I hope she gets him back. They need to gon head and get back together. They're not fooling anybody at this point but themselves. 



Author's Response:

Michael showed her that he was the man and then some lol. Patrice knew that she wanted it anyway. And you're right, they aren't fooling anybody now and they know it.

Reviewer: Lenetta16 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2013 01:27 am Title: Don't Judge of my Composure

judbfhjdbjhdvhgvsgvs hooooooooolyyyyyyyyyyyyyy jesuuuuuuuuuuuus!!! man lmao lemme say that first of all, during the seduction part my reponses were:

nope

go away

stop

bye

get out

NOPE

lmao! but aghsgghsgdgfdnvdv that dhdjb scene tho like hdbfg shdvs fgvdgfs hfbs hfvssuf udbd shbdyv

agahagahag like you already know about my dangerous era mike feels so like.. fhbdyhd

like do you understand what dangerous era mike does to me lmaooooooooooooooooooo ugh! such a brilliant chapter! gewdt job!



Author's Response:

looooool Lenetta...the gif though! I can't with you. You know good and well that you would have given in if Mike was talking all smooth and what not. tsk tsk. I'm glad that you enjoyed it and thank you girl! 

Reviewer: Dangerous21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2013 05:45 am Title: I Can't Take It 'Cause I'm Lonely

They have some serious communication issues, lol. At least they seem to be working towards fixing them though. Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

They do lol. But they're finding their way. I'll be updating soon ^_^

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2013 08:09 am Title: I Can't Take It 'Cause I'm Lonely

omg they are crazy but cyte at the sme time



Author's Response:

They are! lol Glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2013 04:38 am Title: I Can't Take It 'Cause I'm Lonely

Awwww, gurl I love this. Imma need u to update more 4 us, haha. Job very well done!

Author's Response:

Thank youuuuuuu. And I'll try!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2013 11:00 pm Title: I Can't Take It 'Cause I'm Lonely

Michael is such a little punk troll! Smh be better forgive Patrice and leave the past alone or leave her alone altogether. He can't say he forgives her but keeps throwing that in her face. Smh he gets on my nerves. Lol. I can tell these two are gonna give me a headache. I do like that Patrice is feisty though. She's strong and I can tell from how she is, she won't take no shit off him. I like that. She's not the type to be fallin all over him and whatnot. Good! Anyway, Michael better start actin right. I wanna see them gettin along and repairing their relationship. He still loves her and wants to be with her. 



Author's Response:

Lol he is. He's playing games smh. Patrice isn't weak though. She knows how Michael is and she knows how to play along with his little games too. *winks* But Mike loves her so you'll find out what happens between them eventually.

Reviewer: Lenetta16 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2013 10:55 pm Title: I Can't Take It 'Cause I'm Lonely

Aruuveygawcjysxhys lord I love the arguing tbqh looool. His ole sexy self, he knew he wasn't about to try and play me like dat doe lmfao. omg I can't wait til the next chapter!!! This is gettin sooooo gewdt!



Author's Response:

Lol of course you would! Mike was trying to be hard smh. He knew that he couldn't resist lol. But I'm gonna try to update really soon. And thank you girl!

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2013 10:27 pm Title: I Can't Take It 'Cause I'm Lonely

They are hilarious. XD Michael scaring her a là Thriller. Too funny. I see they are getting back on track little by little. I see them running back into each other's arms slowly but surely.



Author's Response:

Lol Mike is a goof ball. You're right. He and Patrice gradually finding their way back. Let's just hope it'll stay that way.

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2013 08:33 am Title: It Doesn't Seem to Matter

aaww i knew it everything will be ok



Author's Response:

we'll see *winks*

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2013 01:34 am Title: It Doesn't Seem to Matter

I'm liking this! Chile Patrice is a fool. She handled that all wrong with that cheating accusation. If I even suspect my man is cheating, I'm calling his ass out right then and there. All she had to do was confront him or ask him right after she seen the chick leaving the room! Smh they could be happily married and with a baby or two right now. Furthermore, Michael got a smart lil mouf. He most def woulda got a drink thrown in his face and my hand slappin his cheek too. Lol smh. And what he mean IF he was gon cheat it woulda been with.. No negro. You know better. You wasn't gon cheat and if she gets back with yo ass, you know better too. Michael better not play with me. Ain't no cheatin of any kind around these parts. I have a feeling they'll eventually end up together though. He's clearly not over her at all. 



Author's Response:

^_^ Patrice just messed everything up lol. She wanted to see if he would confess and then she still made a big mistake for not asking smh. Mike is a shady ole thang lol.

"And what he mean IF he was gon cheat it woulda been with.. No negro. You know better. You wasn't gon cheat and if she gets back with yo ass, you know better too."<-- looool. Mike is something else.

It's pretty evident that Mike isn't over her especially since the breakup only happened a year ago. But you'll find out what happens with them in time. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)

Reviewer: Lenetta16 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2013 06:02 pm Title: It Doesn't Seem to Matter

oh god gavngdhchcshcgs . Let me start off by saying that you got my reactions to everything exactly on point. in fact, right before the part where I threw the rest of his drink on him, I was over here like "psh, I'll throw that drink on you AND your equipment!" LMAO! this is getting so good I just sjgvdghvag vd ag vdh a dgsh dh  a I can dig it. and I figured he didn't really cheat on her (me) LMAO! I knew something was up with that. but yoooooooo, damn this fic is good! I love it! I was reacting to this entire thing too! sexy asshole for the win! lol <33



Author's Response:

lol I know you too well, Lenkiki! I'm not even surprised that you were over there reacting this out loool! You would! And I'm glad that you're enjoying it. And noooo MJ didn't do it. He knew better tsk tsk. More is on the way <3

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2013 03:43 pm Title: It Doesn't Seem to Matter

*Facepalm* She broke up with him for nothing?! Got damn! What a horrible mistake. I hope they do get back together.



Author's Response:

Basically smh. That was a VERY horrible mistake lol. "I hope they do get back together."<--hmmmm...maybe they will...maybe they won't.

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2013 03:16 pm Title: It Doesn't Seem to Matter

Update soon!

Author's Response:

I will!

Reviewer: Cali_Santana Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2013 06:54 pm Title: She Promised Me Forever

i loveeeeeee this story



Author's Response:

I'm glad you love it! Thank you for reading and reviewing ^_^

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