Date: Aug 09, 2019 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
I try to leave a review for every story I read.
I liked the dialogue in the beginning. I think that you wrote Michael realistically, and being Michael's "go fer" seems like fun! It's certainly has an interesting job description.
(Lol, just kidding.) You did a good job on this, badgraciebabies! :D
Date: Jun 04, 2015 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good short story!!
Date: Apr 18, 2015 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I luv it! I luv this soo much keep it going!
Date: Sep 19, 2014 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh hot dam!!! That was hot , steamy and delicious.. Well written.... So descriptive made my mouth water. Bad era Michael was sexy...
Author's Response:
Makes me happy to make other MJ fans happy, glad you liked my little fantasy! ;)
Date: Aug 31, 2014 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
hot
Author's Response:
Aww shucks, thank you! :)
Date: Jul 09, 2013 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
:-))))) :-D:-D Well now you've got me all excited for the next piece of heaven that you writeXDXD I can't wait Ms.Amazing! :-)))
Date: Jul 09, 2013 08:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Seriously , this story is perfect. The wording, the detail, the way you potrayed Michael, everything was flawless!!! I look forward to more greatness from you hun! :-)))))
Author's Response:
Omg thank you! I really want to write something longer it's just having the time, but the lovely summer weather is warming my blood so maybe I'll get started soon...
Date: Jul 08, 2013 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
The greatest one shot story I've ever read on this site. Perfection!!!
Author's Response:
Wow thank you! That is high praise indeed - I keep saying this but I must motivate myself to add to this story and flesh it out some more. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)
Date: Jul 02, 2013 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
I imagined myself as the woman Michael make love to.I took a cold shower after reading this lol.
Author's Response:
It makes me smile when people read and like my little fantasy cheers! :)
Date: May 12, 2013 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was so beautiful
You are a good writer
Excellent imagnation
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, so nice to get feedback. Glad you liked it hun! :)
Date: Jan 07, 2013 11:35 am Title: Chapter 1
so sexy
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I really must get around to writing some more.
Date: Aug 11, 2010 10:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, that was REALLY intense.. :)
Date: Jun 27, 2010 01:39 am Title: Chapter 1
This REALLY was good... I couldn't stop reading!! And I LOVED Michael in this era, so wooow, I wanted to be this girl sooo damn bad!! Great job, hunn!! :D
Date: May 23, 2010 11:04 am Title: Chapter 1
hey, this is great!!! i loved it. ;)
Author's Response:
Oh cheers babe XXX it's my first one-I'm new to this writing thing. It's brilliant therapy :)