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Reviewer: yourburgersarethebest Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2019 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

I try to leave a review for every story I read.

I liked the dialogue in the beginning. I think that you wrote Michael realistically, and being Michael's "go fer" seems like fun! It's certainly has an interesting job description.

(Lol, just kidding.) You did a good job on this, badgraciebabies! :D

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2016 02:12 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2015 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good short story!!

Reviewer: mjlifemate58 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2015 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

I luv it! I luv this soo much keep it going! 

Reviewer: Coco Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2014 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

oh hot dam!!! That was hot , steamy and delicious.. Well written.... So descriptive made my mouth water.   Bad era Michael was sexy...



Author's Response:

Makes me happy to make other MJ fans happy, glad you liked my little fantasy! ;)

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2014 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

hot

Author's Response:

Aww shucks, thank you! :)

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2013 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

:-))))) :-D:-D Well now you've got me all excited for the next piece of heaven that you writeXDXD I can't wait Ms.Amazing! :-))) 

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2013 08:50 am Title: Chapter 1

Seriously , this story is perfect. The wording, the detail, the way you potrayed Michael, everything was flawless!!! I look forward to more greatness from you hun! :-)))))



Author's Response:

Omg thank you! I really want to write something longer it's just having the time, but the lovely summer weather is warming my blood so maybe I'll get started soon...

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2013 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

The greatest one shot story I've ever read on this site. Perfection!!!



Author's Response:

Wow thank you! That is high praise indeed - I keep saying this but I must motivate myself to add to this story and flesh it out some more. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)

Reviewer: TatianaJackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2013 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

I imagined myself as the woman Michael make love to.I took a cold shower after reading this lol.



Author's Response:

It makes me smile when people read and like my little fantasy cheers! :)

Reviewer: lolitabunny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2013 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

It was so beautiful
You are a good writer
Excellent imagnation

Author's Response:

Thank you very much, so nice to get feedback. Glad you liked it hun! :)

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2013 11:35 am Title: Chapter 1

so sexy



Author's Response:

Thank you :) I really must get around to writing some more.

Reviewer: KekeDraperJackson Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2010 10:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, that was REALLY intense.. :)

Reviewer: 1987_1991 Anonymous starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2010 01:39 am Title: Chapter 1

This REALLY was good... I couldn't stop reading!! And I LOVED Michael in this era, so wooow, I wanted to be this girl sooo damn bad!! Great job, hunn!! :D

Reviewer: MichaelsGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2010 11:04 am Title: Chapter 1

hey, this is great!!! i loved it. ;)

Author's Response:

Oh cheers babe XXX it's my first one-I'm new to this writing thing. It's brilliant therapy :)

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