Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2013 12:49 am Title: || Chapter 1: Baseball Game ||

Dani and Michael meet! *fangirl squeals* Even though they didnt work out in the first one I still ship them. ;)

 

Gosh I wasnt expecting that, I'll eagerly be waiting for the next chapter. Great job pyts! :3 , <33

Author's Response:

Haha! Omg... they're getting shipped!! :D Haha! Dream come true right there :P

Thank you! It wouldn't be what it is without the help of Carolina!! :D <3

--YANAgirl07

Reviewer: Annie Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2013 08:30 pm Title: || Prologue: Moving On To A New Life.. ||

A SEQUEL?! I'm so freaking excited!!

But let's talk about Dani's situation. I do think she loves Theo but it isn't love, LOVE. She feels like she owes him, because he saved her from her horrible parents (God, I couldn't stand them) and from Michael, and that's why she stays with him. And he gave her a child! Indeed, she has a nice little life but something is missing; PASSION!

Even if her life was a mess when she was involved with Michael, she at least had something to tell. Now it's just routine. And he has a drinking problem...

I'm not saying I want Michael and Danielle back because it doesn't matter what Michael said, as long as he doesn't show us that he changed, for me he is still a douchebag. And there is Theo. We are not in Theo's head and we don't know how he feels about Danielle. But I do think he loves her more than she loves him. He liked her back then when she was miserable. So, he won't be easy for him to let her go and for Michael?!

And that "as friends" BS

 

No one believes you! I bet Danielle agreed to sit next to you during the game because she expects some passion, the thrill... Hell, something!

Now the questions are; as friends? For how long? And Theo? And Isabella?

 

I'm so E.X.C.I.T.E.D. update soon please ;)

Author's Response:

Omg! I lmao-ed at the Simon Cowell gif!!! xD haha!

Interesting thoughts, I have to admit what you say makes a whole lot of sense, but is it the facts? O.o We'll see what happens between Theo and Danielle, who or if their love for each other will shift, how Michael will continue to get tied up into all of it, and where Isabella will be thrown into the mix...

Hopefully we'll update soon, this one took a LONG time and that's my fault for that one! :/ Oopsie!

--YANAgirl07

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2013 03:07 pm Title: || Prologue: Moving On To A New Life.. ||

You don't know how happy I was seeing there's a sequel!

Who knows, maybe this time it'll lead to a proper relationship between Michael and Dani...? Or maybe not haha. I've learnt to expect the unexpected. 

Great start! Its a shame to read about Theo's addiction :S I'm glad she has a beautiful daughter though, and she's away from her appalling parents lol

I can't wait for more. XD

 , <33

Author's Response:

Haha! Seeing the review you left on Porcelain I've got a bit of an idea ;)

Possibly... ;)

Thanks for the review! <3

--YANAgirl07

Reviewer: Dri Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2013 09:46 pm Title: || Prologue: Moving On To A New Life.. ||

“God isn't about making good things happen to you, or bad things happen to you. He's all about you making choices--exercising the gift of free will. God wants you to have good things and a good life, but He won't gift wrap them for you. You have to choose the actions that lead you to that life.” By Jim Butcher


Free will,Dani...



Well...Well ...Look what we have here!

Dani did what was appropriate to do ... She married a man who was apparently perfect. But life has shown her that nothing is perfect.
Our lives are made of what we choose. Dani chose this life but she's not happy.I was wondering if the love she feels for her husband is not enough to hold his alcoholism and everything.

And that's where Michael comes...



I'm very happy for the sequel of Porcelain. It's a very well written story and now in partnership with Carolina this story will be even better.


Congratulations,girls!Great job!

Thank you!

Author's Response:

Haha indeed that's where Michael comes in... ;)

You must be happy! You might just get the happy ending you wanted with Porcelain ;)

I'm so excited to do this with Carolina! She's amazing and she has really good stories and good writing techniques! She's great! :D

Thank us? For writing the story? Haha! No, thank you for supporting it! :D

--YANAgirl07

Reviewer: Southern_cutie Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2013 06:19 pm Title: || Prologue: Moving On To A New Life.. ||

well well well!!! I've been waiting for this for a long time now!! and I'm glad y'all finally did it!!!!! 

Author's Response:

Haha! We would have posted sooner but we've both been busy lately :P

Glad you're excited for it!! :D Thanks for the support!

--YANAgirl07