[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2013 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Kevin's backkkkkk
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2013 10:54 am Title: Chapter 9 - Did we make a mistake?
I LOVED this chapter, this one is "probably" I mean FOR SURE!!! my favourite!!!!
Oh my god...OH MY GOOODDD!!!
I love everything you wrote about his chest ( remember the list yesterday XD top 3 things XD ) Like she plays with his little chest hair CAN I PLEASE SCREAAAMM THIS IS FREAKING HAAAAAAAAWWWTTT, the his nipples, DONT EVEN GET ME STARTED GIRL !!!! and when she slept against his chest o.O o.O LOOOOOOVE
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this so MUUUUUCH
ARGH!!!
oh god ok I calm down now :)
I loved this chapter
very much
VERRRRRRRRRYYY MUCH
- sincerly, somebody that is addicted to Michael Jacksons chest
seriously
Author's Response: Oh god sis! XD You just made me day honestly :) This way a chapter I was really happy with myself and I am so glad you love it too. I know the three top things XD But yeah this chapter was hot if I do say so myself even though I am a bit embarassed still with it XD Thanks so much sis for reading it, it means a lot to me. LOVE YOU, AND HAPPY VALANTINES DAY!!!!!! <3
Author's Response: Oh god sis! XD You just made me day honestly :) This way a chapter I was really happy with myself and I am so glad you love it too. I know the three top things XD But yeah this chapter was hot if I do say so myself even though I am a bit embarassed still with it XD Thanks so much sis for reading it, it means a lot to me. LOVE YOU, AND HAPPY VALANTINES DAY!!!!!! <3
Date: Feb 11, 2013 11:54 am Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome to New York
no no no no no it was great!!! hahaha you're really good at them
Author's Response: Oh ok XD Thank you so much!!! You are to kind. I'm glad you think so because I don't XD But thank you again :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2013 05:49 am Title: Chapter 8 - First time
LOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!
Girl you're so good at writing sex scenes !!! Not even kidding !!!
I love how gentle Michael was and still so YUUUMM and OOOHHH MYYY GOSH
JUST AAAH
JUST LOVE IT <3 <3 <3
Loved the atmosphere and everything was so nice :O
I WANNA BE HER!!! Loved this sis! <3
Author's Response: Really? Aww i'm so glad :) I can see Michael being the gentle and passionate kind in bed. Oh thank you so much that means so much to me truly. Yes the rain and dark is good for so good lovin XD Me too I wish that was me so bad!!!!!! I love you to honey bunch, thanks for reading and reviewing, luv you more <3
Date: Feb 10, 2013 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 8 - First time
OH GAWWWWDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD I need a shower...phew.
I'm done.
NO MISTAKES :(((((
Author's Response: Haha is that good or bad? Sorry I'm having a blonde day today XD I'm sorry if you didn't like it though because I'm really bad at sex scenes. But thank you for reading and reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2013 05:15 am Title: Chapter 7 - Date time!
I loved this chapter!
So cute how amazed Michael was when he saw her, and I loved how u portraied Veronice, she really reminds me of someone ;)
That was so cute Sarah helped her, they are amazing friends, also reminds me of someone XD
Michael seemed just super gentleman and so adorable how shy he was. Veronica did the right think when she told him he didnt have to be all shy, that was so cute!
Whoh guuurl now they're going in her room, this is exciting, I can't wait for you to update sweetheart!
Good work
Author's Response: Aww sis i'm so happy you do! Oh really who does Veronica and Sarah remind you of? XD They are amazing friends, it reminds me of someone I know too ;P He does super shy and a gentleman but lets see what the night brings? Who knows what might happen??? XD I know Veronica is super I just love her. Oh yes going up to her place, well you'll have to read the next updadte to find out XD Thanks a bunch sis <3
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2013 12:08 am Title: Chapter 7 - Date time!
Wooohooo! Are you thinking what I'm thinking??? Yeah, I hope they put those condoms to good use, wink!
Author's Response: Haha girl you can't imagine what I have planned. XD You never know, they just might or.....they might not XD You'll have to see. Thanks ;)
Date: Feb 09, 2013 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Date time!
I love this story :)
Update soon pleeeeease?!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much, you truly made me day :) I hope to try and update sometime today. Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2013 07:32 am Title: Chapter 6 - Its a date
Good afternon sister
May I tell you that I am completely in love with this story ?!?!?
I love how shy Michael is when he talks to Veronica its just SO CUTE o.O
I love how crazy Sarah is, totally how Sarah would ask in real life I'd say XD
I can't wait for the date, I bet Michael will be the most amazing gentleman EVER YUUUUMMM. And then also a shy gentleman oh my gosh, U got me hooked up to this story gurl
Love ya youre the best <3
Author's Response: Afternoon to you to honey bunch! Aww your so sweet i'm glad your enjoying it *blushes* a billion times* Yes Michael is so shy and cute, I think he really likes her don't you? I know that Sarah girl is crazy! She makes me smile everytime I read her. Oh me either! Now being a gentleman, hmmmm, will have to see? ;) Who knows the what might happen? You never know XD Your the best sis! Love you more *blows kisses*
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2013 06:20 am Title: Chapter 6 - Its a date
I knew she wouldn't be mad. I'd be flattered if Michael Jackson went to that much trouble to track me down! ;p
Author's Response: Thank you ;)
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2013 06:20 am Title: Chapter 6 - Its a date
I knew she wouldn't be mad. I'd be flattered if Michael Jackson went to that much trouble to track me down! ;p
Author's Response: I know me too! I would probably be so shocked and faint XD haha Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2013 12:22 am Title: Chapter 6 - Its a date
Wow, that was really, really good! Please hurry up with next part!
Author's Response: Oh i'm so happy your enjoying this story! I will so try this weekend to do another part. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2013 12:19 am Title: Chapter 5 - Are you excited to see me?
I do hope she is happy, poor Mike, he's worked to a sweat over her, he deserves a chance!
Author's Response: Me too! I know he must really like her to go all this way for her. :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2013 12:04 am Title: Chapter 4 - I got her info
I wonder what happens next...
Author's Response: You'll see my dear you'll see....... XD
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2013 12:01 am Title: Chapter 3 - Just call her!
Hmm, spying on the girl...if she's the right nature, she'll love the detail. If not....problems ahead!
Author's Response: I wonder? Who knows girls are so funny about that stuff. But will see