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Reviewer: jkl567 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2014 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 3

That was hot i would be annoyed at home teasing me like that to if i wsd that girl

Reviewer: Megs Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2013 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 4





No, I'm not capable of reviewing this right now. I'll try tomorrow darling. I'M SORRY!!! LOL


*goes to take  a cold shower*

Author's Response: Mwahahahhahahahahaha that's cute! Mwahahahahaha! Glad you liked it so much! Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2013 11:56 am Title: Chapter 4

Woowwwww!!! That was so HOT, girl!!!! excellent story!!!

Author's Response: Thanks honey! I have more plots i mind for you guys! Hope you'll enjoy! Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2013 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 3

Nice, very descriptive.

Liked it :)

Please continue!

Author's Response: Thanks Natasha! I really appreciate all your reviews! I'm glad to know how much you guys actually enjoy my work. Thank you, thank you, thank you once again. Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: Megs Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2013 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 3

DDDDDDDDDDDD: Holy Mother of God...


This is easily the hottest piece of intimate sequence you've ever wrote, in my humble opinion!!!! It was incredible. Every woman's dream lool


I felt bad when I reached the end of the chapter because I, like the girl in the story, wanted more looooooool


Cerine... you bad girl!!! ;) Thank you again for making us part of such a sweet and lustful dream **

Author's Response: Hee hee hee.... Maggie, Maggie, Maggie.... "every woman's dream"??? I honestly dont know about that! Hee hee hee. But thank you anyways. You know it really feels so good to know that you guys appreciate my work this much! I know I shouldn't have stopped it there but then the chapter would have gotten a bit too long than it should have. Besides, that means you guys have another chapter to enjoy! But sadly it's going to be the last of this story. I'll return with another fantasy. Until then, just hang in there my duckies! Hee hee hee. Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2013 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ooooooooh god, that is sooooooooooo HOT!!!! and so much loVE!

Girl, keep going, girl, don't ever stop that awsome story!!!

Author's Response: Aww.... nellan..... thank you so much..... I really appreciate all that you write for me in reviews! But I'm afraid the next chapter is going to be the last of this story. But I promise you I'd return with another sexy fantasy! ;) Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!

Reviewer: dreamlover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2013 09:59 am Title: Chapter 3


Author's Response: Thank you for the review darling. I'm glad you like this story. Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2013 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

I agree with Megs below me. You have astounding ways of describing surroundings and people.

Also, I love the banner too!

Just wish the girl was in it too so I could see what she looks like.

I think it should be Naomi Cambell :P


Author's Response: Hee hee hee... the girl? That's supposed to be the mystery! And no, it isn't Naomi! The girl has 'olive' skin and dark waves with caramel highlights! I chose Naomi only for the silhoutte of wavy hair! Hee hee hee. These short stories are going to end up in one series! They're the adventures of the same girl. If you have noticed, I still didn't even reveal her name! Mwahahahahahaa... I'll post another short story soon! I think I like this job more than constant updated of TWU, SD and ROMH. Not that I've given up any. Until my asthma and PTSD settles down, I think I'm going to stick to short stories. Hope you'll like them all. Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2013 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 2

Michael left her?

That must've been hard.

I liked this chapter and I hope to see more!

Author's Response: Thanks for the five star review darling! I really appreciate it! You know how much I love my regular reviewers! Chapter 3 would be posted mid next week. Take care until then. Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: Megs Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2013 11:45 am Title: Chapter 2

Waaaaah, I don't have words to describe how much I love your writing. (I know I will end up writing a lot anyway ahaha)


You already know that, it's just that you're so 'professional'... you don't need to put 237829 photos of the place where the story is setted or other details from it to make the readers imagine the scene they're reading. You're better than that, with your words you beautifully describe every little thing and I'm glad to say I can perfectly picture in my head the room, the bed, the bathroom, the atmosphere sorrounding that place with the waves of the sea and the wind... *_* The description of their kiss! Oh God, help me...

This last chapter was so sensual and romantic. I think that is something Michael would have really done, he always claimed to be a romantic person *le sigh*


I don't know what your mind is up to for the next chapters... all I know is that I am going to dieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ç___ç 


Oh and now I understand the reason behind the title "You keep me waiting..." hehehe, Michael knows how to tease her (and us too lol)!


And Cerine, I just love that banner! You're really good at making them, I'm serious. I love those rose petals and I love Michael's picture... very intriguing and sensual. EXOTIC *-* (as you already know, you should take this as a compliment from me :PP)


When will you be posting the other chapter? I can't wait **


See you soon honey, you're amazing as always.

Author's Response: As far as the next chapters are concerned, let me tell you one thing: this is going to be the most graphic content I've ever written. I think I should issue a second disclaimer for that! Mwahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!! Well I don't know about Michael's ideas, romantic, yes, but bubble bath and scented candles are cliches you can't live without in a story, so yeah I thought of including that. Should go for a totally different angle the next time I'm going to write romance short story. Hee hee. And thank you for the compliments on the banner. It took me a lot of time to put it together in a way that would reflect the story content and living up to the standard of the one I created earlier for 'It happened one morning'. Chapter 3 would be uploaded probably by Tuesday next week. Catch you online later to elaborate on 'EXOTIC' :P Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: Hanna_MJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2013 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is just amazing! I love everything about this story, the way you wrote it and described everything so perfectly! Can't wait to read more from you! xxx

Author's Response: Oh you do? Aww shucks girl you got me blushing! Hee hee hee. I'm so happy you guys like this story too. I'll upload the next chapter within the week. Stay tuned! Glad to have you on board! Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: vankes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2013 11:20 am Title: Chapter 1

I really love all your story's!

can't stop reading! 

are you still writing on Three Word, Unspoken.? 


Author's Response: Vankes!!! How are you girl??? Missed your reviews! Aww... thank you so much! You guys are too kind to me! I am writing the next chapter of Three words unspoken now but I've been out of my game lately. So thats why I switched over to short stories in the meantime while I recover my flow. Top that with asthma problems. I promise I'll upload soon. Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2013 09:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Excellent story girl, keep going!!!

Author's Response: Thanks girl! I'll upload the next chapter within the week! Thanks for the review! Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2013 05:41 am Title: Chapter 1

Awe, so cute.

I love everything you write!

Please, pretty please. Become an author so I can read your books and that's coming from me; a person who doesn't like reading that much.

No pressure though. Lol.

Once again, I'm envious of your awesome vocabulary. I seriously don't know how you know all these words off by heart!

I have to look up synonyms to words to be descriptive.

Anyway, don't mind my rant.

I hope your doing well :)





Author's Response: Girl... you are too kind!!! You flatter me!!! I want to publish a book of my own too. But I really dont know what to write about and it takes so much of time which I can't really afford to find. I'm using this site to perfect my art before I consider writing seriously. And I know that over the course of one year my approach tonwriting has changed so much! If I do publish some day, you guys would be the first to know! Thanks for another touching review! You are so wonderful! Much L.O.V.E.

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