Date: Jan 01, 2013 07:29 pm Title: It happened one morning.
wow! you really are a good writer! only wish u would have continued. :( You made my day! lol!
Author's Response: Thank you darling. I promise I would publish more short stories along these lines. So heads up for new uploads from TheJollyRoger. Hee hee hee. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Jan 01, 2013 06:00 pm Title: It happened one morning.
ooooohhh,I'm loving this already! Keep it coming!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review darling. I'm so happy you enjoyed reading this. But I'm afraid this is already complete. But I promise you I would post more short stories on the site. And I'll try my best to stay true to the standards of this one. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Jan 01, 2013 04:27 pm Title: It happened one morning.
Wow. This was a really great short story. It was filled with so much passion and romance. And who knew that chocolate sauce can be so romantic lol. Keep up the good work. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response: Thank you darling. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much because it took me a lot of effort to get this done. I guess I should write more short stories. Thanks for the review. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Jan 01, 2013 06:14 am Title: It happened one morning.
The amount of reviews on this story with one chapter proves how much of an awesome writer you are!
Never doubt it :)
Author's Response: Aww... honey... you are too kind! Guess I do have the makings for a short story writer too then? Hee hee hee. I might want to explore my horizons more with this approach then. You are an angel Natasha! Much L.O.V.E.
PS You have published some interesting challenges up on the site. Can't make up my mind on what to write for!
Date: Jan 01, 2013 06:02 am Title: It happened one morning.
Aaaaaaand here I am my dear Cerine!!! Do you really want to hear what I have to say about your story? I think you already know... I'm afraid I'm becoming ripetitive.
I enjoyed this SO MUCH. One of the reasons is because it has passed a long time since I las read something this good... since you last uploaded one of your stories LOL :')
It's just me or it seems like you're improving your writing, if that's even possible???
I loved the description you made of Michael. And I see you even put it on the summary... good job, because it was AWESOME. I could totally picture him on my mind like that.
Ang girl I love how you always remain true to yourself and Michael's character. Yeah I know it can be interesting or tempting to read about him having a different personality but honestly... I prefer the real Michael. The real Michael is SO MUCH better than any thief, criminal, psycho or I don't know what else around.
"I gave him an impish grin. “Do I have to answer that?” I asked risking the consequences."
LOOOOOL This part was hilarious! I don't know why but it seems like something you would totally say to him :PPPP
The hot part was... HOT! *-* ghghgh amazing job as always.
Cerine... thank you so much for this present!!! Again, I wish you the best from this 2013. I love you! <3
Author's Response: Oh Maggie, every time I see such a lengthy and beautiful review from you, you get me all tied up on how best I could possibly reply to you! You've always been so kind and supportive and helpful for me. Words aren't enough to tell you how thankful I am for the role you played in bringing up my confidence as a writer. And most importantly, bringing up the audience for Three words unspoken. Yeah, I agree with you one hundred per cent on that, Michael is better as he really was. But whenever I start writing a "hot" scene, I keep wondering, being the shy and childish creature he was, could he have managed a moment like that. Of course Lisa Marie's press statement stands for support, but still, I find it hard to picture him 'that way'. Yeah I don't know. Whenever I picture him inside my head, the conversations he has with the lead female comes to me almost effortlessly. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. All of you. Thank you so much for another beautiful review. Sending out much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours as always! Mwaaaaaah.............. <3
Date: Jan 01, 2013 05:07 am Title: It happened one morning.
Oh my GOD!! I was not prepared for this dtory! I'm sweating hahah I love everything about this! It's so beautifully written. You are one helluva writer! ;) hope to see more soon! xxx
Author's Response: Aww... thank you, thank you so much darling. I gave it the best I could and I'm so happy to see so many have liked it already within 24 hours of publishing it! I'm flattered! Thanks for the review! Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Dec 31, 2012 03:53 pm Title: It happened one morning.
You write so beautifully !I love it.
I love all your stories though, so nothing has changed.
Can't wait for updates.
And I'm glad you're back!
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm glad I'm back on the site as well. Hope to write more and more. I'm so happy you enjoyed the work I finally managed to put together so painstakingly. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Dec 31, 2012 11:16 am Title: It happened one morning.
That was..... oh my God.
LOVED IT! Man, I really miss your writing, I loved that, that was great, hot too. I honestly wasnt expecting that. I felt constant butterflies the whole time as well, that was amazing. :')
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you so much! It's nice to hear from you after so long Daizy! I missed you too! I was going through a rough patch in life and my creativity was like zapped out of me. Guess I'm back for business now. This year, I'm going to focus on short stories some more. Hope you'll like what I publish. Much L.O.V.E.