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Reviewer: dshanice Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 7

Damn! Cindy a crazy bitch yo. The way she was with that Craig guy like she had something with him or somethin! And she wanna be nasty with Michael.. His ass is crazy af though!



Author's Response: LMAO!!! She is crazy in her own way and stubborn to you'll see why soon why she's so stubborn like that. Lol ikr she wants Craig while he's taken & then treat's crazy ass Michael like crap. Oh Michael will teach her a thing or two about being rude 4sure. XD &thanks!

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 7

Gosh Michael is a creep, though Cindy was so cruel to him!

Still, it doesnt mean he has a reason to drug her like that.

When I read about his apartment I was like

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The pay seems SWEET for a pizza delivery guy lmao XD I want the job. :P

Oh Gosh, I wonder if Cindy will get away! Girl this is too gooood omg, IDK why but creepy MJ in the Thriller era does something to me! If I was Cindy, I wouldnt fight him lmao

I hope there's more soon. :3

Much LOVE , <33



Author's Response: Yes she is pretty harish towards him no doubt & i think a few ppl dnt like her attitude. I guess he really finds it creepy 4 a delivery guy to come after her like that. & yeah Mike had no choice but to shut her up. Which he still shouldn't have done that either it's like the more she pushes him the more he will get crazier & MUCH scary! & you'll see why he lives good once he has a possible civilized conversation with her then a lot of stuff will unfold of of why Ciny is the way she is & why Michael is the way he is though that was already told in during the 2nd chapter but gotta knw what caused him to be that way to so so much stuff & venting on one another will possibly happen during this whole crazy story. Lol btw with cindy you never know she is bold & will try to get away until she can't no more! XD LOL & thanks girly <3 ^_^

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 6

Bruno Mars though

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He's so sexy and talented and cute and omg. Tbh he's the only reason I listen to todays music lmao. :P

 

But omg it was kinda sweet how supportive Michael was like that to Cynthia, however she shoulda known it would have went down like that if Craig had a girlfriend!

 

Michael's never going to give up, is he? Lmao I can't wait to read the next chapter. XD

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 5

Hahaha one minute Michael's like "the fuck is this Craig guy she's talking about"

then he's like "Craigs party here I come!" lmao

 

He won't stop till he gets her. I can't wait to read the next chapteeer. xD

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 7

I laughed so hard when Michael acted he did not know what was happening. He planned everything and make sure she would be stuck in the valley. HAHAHA! What a creep
I know Michael is weird but does she have to be that harsh. At least she lets Michael knows there is no way between them but there must be an much nicer way to say it. She should get by know that the more she pushes him away, the more he continue

Just when I was wondering when he would make a real move....

He drugged her! And he kidnaped her?!

This is getting JUICY. I know Cindy will try to run and I can't wait for it



Author's Response: Yeah Michael being Michael LOOL he plays the part good & he isn't doing such a bad job & i agree Cindy should be nicer about it reguardless that he is crazy or not the guy has feelings to but soon you'll see how he'll handle her. ;) he got his ways. XD &thanks!

Reviewer: Southern_cutie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2013 05:25 am Title: Chapter 6

gia is a bitch and I guess you have  to respect Craig for standing up to Cindy!!!!!

Reviewer: Southern_cutie Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2013 05:25 am Title: Chapter 6

gia is a bitch and I guess you have  to respect Craig for standing up to Cindy!!!!!



Author's Response: Yeah Gia is out there like that Lol & yeah craig did his part & gotta respect him 4 that even tho what he did was pretty mean but he had 2 get his point across some way to. I dnt think he was intentionally trying to hurt her he just was in a relationship & he won't let some girl wreck that 4 him. & thanks!

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2013 05:15 am Title: Chapter 6

wow love this part Craig is a pig but i hope michael will be with Cindy i know his dangerous and weird but he will love her to the end

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2013 05:14 am Title: Chapter 6

wow love this part Craig is a pig but i hope michael will be with Cundy i know his dangerous and weird but he will love her to the end



Author's Response: I agree with everything you said it's true craig proved that he didn't want her & Michael be weird & crazy but he would be a better loved to her. & thanks!

Reviewer: Blueprint Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2013 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 6

Aww poor Cindy is hurt over sexy Craig :/ he was messed up for that though. She should of known better that he already has a girl. WTF is wrong with girl's on wanting already taken men? That shit is so annoying. I think Cindy should try out Michael's whacked out ass just to see if he will treat her good i was starting to feel sorry for Michael Cindy was being so mean to him. Even the mentally challenged one's has hearts to.

Author's Response: Yeah he was a bit messed up 4 that but u also gotta understand his point of view to. He just wants her to respect his relationship. & yeah will see what happens between these two soon it may get really crazy but stay tuned! & thanks!

Reviewer: Cali_Santana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2013 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 6

Bruno Mars is such a cutie!! But what he did to Cindy was fucked up on the real side...Now i thought my story portrayed Michael as a weirdo but damn you take the cake for this one Michael is too much



Author's Response: Ikr Bruno is sooo cute! & yeah he did make her feel stupid around his gf that's true & that just ticked cindy off she liked him & was hoping to chill as friends but he turned it down & especially when his gf came he changed real quick but at the sametime cindy has to respect his relationship cause he wanted her that bad he would of been with her already. LOOOL i thought the michael u portray in yours was as equally crazy as mines?! 0.0 well this one was in a mentel insitution so I see what u mean. Lol & your story is awesome! I gotta catch up & thanks 4 reading,reviwing & rating!

Reviewer: Rate Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2013 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 6

Lmao Michael finds his self trying to show some T.L.C. towards Cynthia. I wish he'd do a better job then that. Cause she isn't quite convinced by this sick man. O_o to bad he will catch up with her.

I hope his mind don't snap if she turns him down again if so then he will probably do something really crazy to her i bet.

Continue and GO GO GO!

Author's Response: Oh indeed he will be catching up with her since he totaled her car up. LOL & hey may a few tricks up his sleeves maybe better one's ;) You'll see & thaks!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2013 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 6

Cindy is a fucking bitch. I'm glad Craig and his girl went off on her. She thought she could take her punk ass in there and act like it's all good with him KNOWING he has somebody. And Michael is trying to be cool with her and she's being a complete bitch to him. I'm glad he slit her tires. I hope that bitch gets stranded and begs for his help with her funky ass. 



Author's Response: Ikr she can't have her cake & eat it all cause she is Cynthia. & she was being a bitch towards him if she dnt stop she's gonna really push him to far. & wait til you see the next chapter ;) it's gonna get crazy & u may hate cindy more Lool & thanks 4 your review!

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2013 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 6

Like usual, Michael is a psycho and I can't wait for him to make a REAL move on Cynthia!
I think Cynthia is wrong; even though she had a HUGE crush on Craig, he is engaged to a girl so although Gia is fucking jealous and crazy, she has the right to act like this because Craig is hers! It's not about being whipped, it's respect.

Cynthia; one thing


Oh my, Michael rubbing her back while she was crying wasn't cute, but creepy as hell LMAO! And he kissed her! Well, we can't deny Michael has some cojones to do that haha!

Cynthia better run for her life!

Humm, sexy ass Bruno Mars



Author's Response: Oh yeah 4 michael making a real move is right up under our nose ;) xD it's abouta get cray soon! Lool & ikr she should think wisely instead of trying to get with someone that's already taken -___- & she has the nerves to get upset about it. Oh but she won't be going craig 4 to long once Michael is finished with ;) you'll see. & heck yeah bruno is soo cute! & i like these gif's lol & thanks!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2013 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 6

More!

 



Author's Response: More is coming & thanks!

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