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Reviewer: Magnolia Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2015 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1: intro

Hey, I like where your story is going! A bit of small grammar mistakes but everything sounds good! I will keep on reading :)

Reviewer: Magnolia Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2015 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1: intro

Hey, I like where your story is going! A bit of small grammar mistakes but everything sounds good! I will keep on reading :)

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2012 01:32 am Title: Chapter 1: intro

P.S, might want to change the title. It's Love Inside A Hateful Exterior, not love insides a hateful exterior. I don't mean to come off as condecending or anything but.. yeah, just sayin' so :P

BTW, update soon girl :D

 

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2012 01:29 am Title: not a chapter

I think this is a good idea but you need to skim over and check your chapter: grammar and spelling, otherwise you lose the reader because they don't understand your reading. The layout and format is also an important key since you want the paragraphs and sentences nice and organised. Trust me, I know how you feel. Not getting reviews just plain sucks. Overtime, you get better, if you keep writing. I mean, I've been here 5 months but I could still use improvement. Lol.

or just review one of my stories, lol.

 

 



Author's Response: Thank you!!!!! Im very grateful for the advice. Im very happy that you reviewed. Thanks again. Love Aashlei

Reviewer: MarissaShanece Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2012 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1: intro

This story is good, you should update soon



Author's Response: I will girl itll be up tomorow morning!!! It will be your christmas present:) MERRY CHRISTMAS MARISSA GIRL!!!!!!!!

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