Reviews For A Dancing Nature
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Reviewer: MJforALLtime Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2010 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 2

Hahaha, "Can you feel it? Can you feel it? Can you feel it?!" This sounds promising, though if I may make a suggestion: Could the paragrphs be shorter? Big paragraphs make it real easy to get lost in between lines. Though this is a good story hun, keep going!

Reviewer: ljc_loves_mjj Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2010 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 2

great so far! can't wait for chapter 3 :)

Author's Response: really? Omg, your feedback is much appreciated!! :)

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