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Reviewer: dirty-diana Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2015 10:26 am Title: Real World Talk

GURL I LOVE YOU FOR UPDATING THIS. BLESS YOUR SOUL!

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2015 05:03 am Title: Real World Talk

Ummmm, that was hot! Daaaamnnn, I need a change o panties and some ice! Please hurry up with next chapter!

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2015 04:08 am Title: Real World Talk

I can't stop laughing at Trin's friends at the beginning..they're such a mess!! I'm glad you're updating this fic again..I've missed you doing it!! <3

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2015 12:31 am Title: Real World Talk

Yess freaky. But I ain't complaining Lol!! Love the chapter! I can feel the drama coming. And I see trinity was being alil hormonal trying to bicker with maestro Lmaoo that's why he cut her off

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2015 06:53 pm Title: Searching For What Was Lost

I'm glad to see how we're learning more about Maestro's past even though I feel like he's still holding out. I hope that he'll tell Trinity more of his secrets soon. And I'm worried about what's bound to happen to Trinity and Maestro in the future since they both are targets. Which reminds me...when is the Dopplegänger coming back?! I miss him.

The mentioning about the baby being active supernaturally before even exiting the womb was pretty interesting. I can't wait to see how that goes and hopefully Trinity won't freak out once it does start happening. What if Virgil knew all along that this was going to happen and came back to hurt Maestro more by cursing his child like he claimed Maestro had done with Maestro's mother, I think it was, or was it another brother or something? (I can't remember) :O

When Melody was telling Trinity about the protective guards that Maestro had put up and how his guard kind of weakened after meeting Trinity and the part with Trinity thinking about her father's ancestors and the conincidental connection that they had with Maestro's father...I pretty much predicted and had questions for just about everything in that whole convo but you said just what I predicted and answered my questions as I continued reading so good job because I definitely analyzed the shit out of a those parts lol. 

Anyway, the whole idea to try and reconnect Maestro with his family was pretty sweet of Trinity. I can't wait to see how Maestro reacts to meeting his niece. 

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2015 07:13 am Title: A New Chapter

soooo romantic..! love it! *gets dreamy look*

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2015 12:52 am Title: A New Chapter

Awwww gosh, this was such an emotional chapter! Thank you for it!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2015 09:48 pm Title: A New Chapter

One of my favorite chapters yet! He met his great niece and now him and trinity are officially engaged...Beautiful 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2015 10:30 pm Title: In Loving Memory

Look how pretty the garden is! Maestro loves her gift! It really helped with closure. Trinity's hormones swwwww. She's gunna be very very hormonal.

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2015 01:45 pm Title: Searching For What Was Lost

Oh wowwwww! That was really, truly amazing! I just wish you hadn't left us hanging at the end....but who am I to complain? Great work, girl, I loved it!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2015 07:17 am Title: Searching For What Was Lost

Well thanks for researching girl! Omggggg i think maestro is going to like what Trinity and her friends did. like she said it's bittersweet 

Reviewer: Itshumannature03 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2015 05:48 am Title: Searching For What Was Lost

This was an AMAZING chapter! I'm so excited to read about how Maestro will react to it and the family reunion and everything 😍 I love this story so much, definitely my favorite and I admire how you put so much effort into it! Absolutely in love with it! Hope to see another update soon d84;d84;d84;

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2015 07:40 pm Title: A Look Into The Past

This was pretty interesting yet so sad at the same time. Poor Maestro. All he really wanted to do was help and he couldn't even do that right. I can see why he would feel so much guilt because of what happened to his family.

Virgil was delusional though! That man really did lose his mind and the fact that he was lashing out on his children didn't make it any better. I feel so sorry for them. And he was truly evil and petty for a casting a spell on his own son. I wonder what kind of spell or magic he used to fake his death since he's still alive apparently. Unless, he already knew that the villagers were coming all along and was in the process of creating the potion that they had destroyed in which he remade and had taken prior to his execution to come back to life. I'm just thinking out loud. But I can't wait to read what really happened.

And being that Virgil is still alive...I can't help but to wonder if Maestro's siblings are alive as well. Something to think about...hmmm...

As for Trinity, her flashback was quite depressing too. I do respect Tom for trying to comfort her though. It's the least that he could do.

And I'm glad that Trinity was there for Maestro to show him the love and support that he needed as well. 

I really enjoyed this flashback. I hope that there'll be more in the future :)

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2015 06:57 pm Title: An Easy Day

Uh oh! Lenetta writing long chapters? *smirks* I see you! Anyway, this was a cute chapter. I think that it was sweet of Trinity to take Maestro out on the town like that and show him around. He really needed that experience. He was so lost and innocent though lol poor thing. And I don't care what anybody says, Duck Hunt is that game. Bump what Maestro thinks about killing those little suckers. It's fun. 

And oh god, I see Trinity's hormones are starting to kick in for real now. Maestro better get used to that although I know that he'll never get enough of her fiesty/horny side. Aggressive Trinity makes me grin. She done messed up by telling him about him calling her 'Baby' though lol. He is about to abuse the power of that to the fullest. Ole troll.

Maestro and his conversation with Nadine...he's such a charmer. That was nice of him and Trinity to leave her that nice tip though. She deserved it.

And them going to the movies was pretty cute too. I could imagine Maestro laughing uncontrollably from that movie with his goofy self. Anyway, I'm so glad that they both were finally given the chance to actually enjoy each other and be all lovey dovey without having to encounter any drama or unfortunate events (excluding the news about the arcade closing) in the process. Hopefully they'll be able to have more times like this in the future. Lord knows they need it after all the mess that they've been through.

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2015 07:50 am Title: A Look Into The Past

Aww, poor Maestro! But on the other hand it is great that he could see the memories of past with adult eyes and share them with Trinity. It is a huge weight off your shoulder when you can share your past troubles with someone and find understanding and acceptance. Great chapter, please update soon.

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