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Reviewer: jkl567 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2015 01:54 am Title: Astoria

Where are you new chapter please!!

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Date: May 30, 2015 10:39 am Title: Who The Hell Are You?

Trinity's mom warning her about Maestro? This confuses me a looot

Reviewer: jkl567 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2015 07:06 am Title: Viva España

Imagine (dangerous era) Michael whispering sweet Spanish nothings in your ear while showering with him



Author's Response:

I'd melt tbh! 😍😍😍😍 I love love love that era 😩😩😩 

thanks so much for reading! More to come real soon!

Reviewer: Lovemj4L Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2015 03:21 pm Title: Beware The Ides of Sarah Gale

Wow. That was intense amd very mind blowing🙊

Reviewer: April Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2015 02:41 am Title: Viva España

Love it! I miss the old stories and I came back just for them lol. College is hectic. I now know you pain. Great update though!!! :D



Author's Response:

I miss them too! So much that I'm gonna try my hardest to continue writing so they'll be finished! I know it's been forever but I appreciate you for reading! There's gonna be more to come so I do hope you tune in! 💖

Reviewer: April Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2015 02:41 am Title: Viva España

Love it! I miss the old stories and I came back just for them lol. College is hectic. I now know you pain. Great update though!!! :D

Reviewer: jkl567 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2015 03:57 pm Title: Making Amends

What does (Ominestra, unpindae neo scanoleo dae... Ominestra unpindae neo scanoleo sae...) Meant?

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2015 12:49 am Title: A Surprise

I know this story deals with magic and is fiction but how is Trinity pregnant after one week? I get it they had unprotected sex for a week but most females have to wait weeks to find out if they're pregnant and she just found out a week later. Most women don't even show signs after a week even blood test don't show the HCG hormone that early in pregnancy. I worked in a college clinc for a summer and students came in for pregnancy test almost every day and my job was to test the urine and give the nurse practitioner the results. Usually when this students came in I had to get their patient history before they saw the doctors or nurses and when question about their last menstrual period most would give a date that indicated it was a month or more ago. And if they did the blood test thay would have to wait a week for the results. 

I would really Appreciate if you would get back to me on this chapter



Author's Response:

Trinity's from another world :)

her pregnancy won't even be like that of people from Earth because she's not from earth. Her biology is a little different than ours lol.

Reviewer: Yaroko Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2015 10:15 am Title: Together Again

I dont know how many times i had read this story, all the way up and down the line, but i love it!!!!!! Please, continue, Lenettaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2015 09:51 pm Title: Plans

Um "VW" better back the hell off!! and Clara is dumb as hell too! I wouldn't trust no damn dark force....especially his evil ass! And he's talking about hurting the baby????

 

When Michael was explaining what he was going to do to Trinity in Spain....I was in another world too lmaooo



Author's Response:

I bet lmfao 😭👀 I definitely would be too. And Clara... has issues lmfai. Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2015 04:43 am Title: Origins

heh Maestro is such a mess..I would have let him keep that muffin he licked..and would not have objected to him making another batch either.

Looking forward to your plans don't go quitting on me.



Author's Response:

Definitely won't I miss my readers and my story! 💖💖💖

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2015 01:00 am Title: Origins

Wow that was intense, especially the end! (Can't wait to see Trinity turn green :D)

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2015 10:03 pm Title: Origins

Ooooooo God the drama is stirring

Reviewer: jkl567 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2015 04:15 am Title: Beware The Ides of Sarah Gale

Why does Trinity's mom think maestro is bad when the evil one is his dad

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2015 12:01 am Title: A New Chapter

Awww that was cute. The meeting with Maestro and Marion went better than I expected. And I just knew that Maestro was gonna ask for Trinity' to marry him when he kept staring at her fingers. Glad she said yes even though the answer was obvious a86;a039; Who could resist him?

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