[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2012 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
Love, love loving this so much!I've been searching for an MJ fic that's based on MJ's "Ghosts"! Please update soon! You're off to such a fantastic start, and I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you darling! I'm so glad you are impressed with my story. Chapter five is already written but it needs a tweak here and there. Once I'm done, I would upload. Thank you so much for the review! Your kind words motivate me to strive for more! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2012 04:52 am Title: Chapter 4
Lisa marie finally make herself known i see. I wonder what she is going to do to her. I read the plot and it lure me in. I enjoyed it so much. I can't wait for the next chilling,thrilling part. Continue. Much Love
Author's Response: Oh darling! I'm so glad you've taken such a liking to my story! I fewred this wouldn't get good reception from the site. Glad it has! Thank you thank you so much for being a reader and especially so for reviewing! It gives me such excitement to find out who belongs to my circle of readers! Thank you so much for the reviews! Of course I would update really really soon. I've already written chapter 5 but it needs a little tweak here and there. Once I'm done with those bits I woukd upload chapter 5. Enjoy your time abaord darling! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2012 04:26 am Title: Chapter 3
It even spook me to read it. It's so intense and thrilling.
Author's Response: Ooh! I see you're a new member on the site! Yes I did check your profile. Well happy tonhave you on board love! And welcome to MJfiction! Hope you enjoy your time here! I sure do! Thank you once again for the review. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2012 03:51 am Title: Chapter 2
Whoa that's was way freaky and creepy to say to least. I wonder if the story is true of him being immortal.
Author's Response: Hee hee hee, is it now? Would you believe it I got chills down my soine writing the 2nd and 3 lrd chapters??? Lol I'm a scaredy cat! Glad you are enjoying this story. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2012 03:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I have an bad feeling that they get hurt or something if they stay or take the stuff. I believe if someone talks an ancient heirloom from an manor or mansion that it come back and haunt them. That's my honest opinion
Author's Response: Really? There's something like that? Interesting! Maybe I should use that concept on another story next time. Thank you thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my story. I'm so glad you've taken a liking to it. Much L.O.V.E. from my ueart to yours!
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2012 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
A perfect Halloween-related story. I really enjoyed it, and I gotta admit there were moments that made me jump out of my skin lol. Update soon!
Author's Response: Aww... were there really? I didn't think this would be scary enough! Lol thanks for the review! I'm so glad you like this story. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2012 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hey Hun ...I just started reading this I was intreaged with it and I must say wow I have read alot of stories that people have done with Michael as his movie ghost ... but to tell u the truth I have never read one like this and its really differant ..I like it alot :)....I wonder what lisa will do to her and what happened to her friends?...I mean how could they just up and leaver her?...I cant wait to see what happens next thanks hun for your wonderful stories :)
Author's Response: Hello again darling!!! I'm so glad that you too have taken a liking to this story. Inwas afraid this wasnt going to be a favorite in the community as much much as my other two stories have. I'm relieved now. Thank you so much for the review. You really motivated me into updating this story soon. Well, the story has just begun and there are a hujdred loose ends to be tied! Wish me luck to do that to the best of my ability! Once again, thank you so much for liking this story. I really needed to know I had another supporter out there. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
Date: Nov 13, 2012 10:00 am Title: Chapter 4
WOW!
Have you noticed almost all my reviews to your stories begin with a "wow" or an "omg"? XD It's just that those words are the first which come to my mind right after I finish reading one of your chapters *-*
Perfectly perfect. You captured so well the whole atmosphere and character's emotions. When Lisa and Michael laughed, in my mind I could really imagine it you know, and it felt creepy... I'm telling you! XD
I also adored how Lisa showed up! "Heaving a sigh in exasperation I turned on my heel.
“Well hello there to you too,” a woman greeted from behind."
Yess!! She's a vampire right? I'm wondering if she's Michael's girl... hmm I don't think so...
Her attitude was credible because even in reality, we can say Lisa had that kind of personality, or at least that's how she presented herself to the world! :)
I'm really curious to see Vivian's reaction when she will meet Michael and the other misterious woman.
The new summery nearly killed me ò_o Now it will be even more difficult than before to wait and see how the story unfolds!!
You'll hear again from me darling! haha! I will refer you Mary's personal opinion too *-*
Love love you <3
Author's Response: Hee hee hee, I actually did come to notice it with time! Girl your reviews always send me high up to cloud number nine! I'm so glad you found this chapter satisfactory. It was one killer scene to write! It took me a great deal of time and energy! Glad it didn't go to waste! Now that say you it sounds spooky and credible, I've come to believe it. Because frankly speaking, I dont have the element of a spook pictured in my head when I write. I just imagine myself watching a movie and how best I would have wanted it to have unfolded preserving the view point of the protagonist that is. The spook comes on to the picture its own right I guess. I dont control it. Thank you for another touching review! I can't wait to read Mary's opinion too! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
Author's Response: Hee hee hee, I actually did come to notice it with time! Girl your reviews always send me high up to cloud number nine! I'm so glad you found this chapter satisfactory. It was one killer scene to write! It took me a great deal of time and energy! Glad it didn't go to waste! Now that say you it sounds spooky and credible, I've come to believe it. Because frankly speaking, I dont have the element of a spook pictured in my head when I write. I just imagine myself watching a movie and how best I would have wanted it to have unfolded preserving the view point of the protagonist that is. The spook comes on to the picture its own right I guess. I dont control it. Thank you for another touching review! I can't wait to read Mary's opinion too! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: Nov 06, 2012 03:37 am Title: Chapter 3
Mooooore cant wait to see what direction the story takes!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review darling! But I'm afraid I still haven't started working on the next chapter because it's been one hectic week! Give me some time and wish me all the luck in the world to get this done! I don't want to disappoint you! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
Date: Nov 05, 2012 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 3
Brilliant!!! Girl I can't wait for her to meet the Master....
and what happened to her friends.... love all these three chapters!!!!
Don't let us wait too long for the next installement...
THANKS !!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review nellan! I still haven't started working on chapter 4. Sorry, but I'm afraid you'll have to wait till next week for a new update. This has been one hectic week. I barely had time to breathe! Too much of travel to keep up with. So just hang in there for a while darling. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
Date: Nov 01, 2012 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
This was SO GOOD. *-*
You're not that much into horror huh? Well, guess what!! You definitely know HOW to write a horror story! Your words captured me.
"I crossed the landing and stood over one of the massive windows, shrugging off the feeling that a reflection of a deranged woman with a body of a rotting corpse would appear in the glass."
Creepy! ò-ò
I love how you described Michael's portrait in the studio. I think he's working something on them. I'm so freakin' curious to know what happened downstairs now ;___; I think I can't get enough of this!
THANK YOU and lots of love to you!! Hope to see ROMH at the top of the updated stories soon *w*
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much Meg! And thank you for the review too! I still haven't started working on chapter 4. Wish me luck with that. I would be busy this weekend so don't really expect much. Sorry about that. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
Date: Oct 28, 2012 07:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh yes, you have all the capacity to consider writing as a serious career for yourself! I'm so glad we helped you! <3 I'll always support you ^^
And omg I'm so excited! I seriously love horror stories... the creepier it is, the better it is for me!! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please, make them longer *-*
Author's Response: Really? You love horror stories? I watch horror movies with my eyes and ears closed and I haven't read a single horror novel. It surprises me that I even chose to write this one. The last time I read a thriller novel - So Cold The River - it scared the living daylights out of me and I had nightmares for weeks! Even watching Vampire Diaries does the same to me! lol I'm a scaredy cat. I'm so glad you've taken a liking to my style of writing. Thank you for being the awesome person you are. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2012 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
You gotta continue this story! I'm so curious about how it's going to turn out. You're so good at writing so that I can easily imagine everything. I just love that. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review darling. I would continue this story. Keep your eyes open for a new update within these couple of days. Chapter 3 is coming soon. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Oct 26, 2012 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG.
OMG.
OMG.
A freakin' HORROR story from YOU!
Is there something else I could ask for?!?!
Gosh this sounds amazing!!!! It IS amazing! Your writing, the whole story....! I'm so curious to know what you're up to!!! PLEASE, PLEASE continue it! You should because that' so interesting and I'm sure you can come up with an awesome story just like SD... I'm wondering if the main female character will fall for Michael??? <3
Blessing my dear! And please, continue as soon as you can! I'll be here waiting <3
Author's Response: And hello there beautiful! Hee hee hee your words make me smile! I would continue with this story! Thanks to girls like you my parents are letting me consider writing as a serious career! I owe you guys so much. And like duh, Vivian is going to fall for Michael! But the person from whom the first step comes would be different! This is goig to be a really creepy story. I scare myself writing t
Author's Response: And hello there beautiful! Hee hee hee your words make me smile! I would continue with this story! Thanks to girls like you my parents are letting me consider writing as a serious career! I owe you guys so much. And like duh, Vivian is going to fall for Michael! But the person from whom the first step comes would be different! This is goig to be a really creepy story. I scare myself writing it!!! Lol thanks for the review! Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2012 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please continue. I'm really interested to see how this story goes.
Author's Response: Ooooh, so it's affirmative. I'd be uploading chapter 2! Thanks for the review. Much L.O.V.E.