[Report This]Date: May 16, 2013 06:45 am Title: Chapter 25
Yeaahhh!!! love it :)
Author's Response:
^_^ thank you!
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2013 01:56 am Title: Chapter 25
That was a lil hard to take in and to read. But it was well written, as a flash back was a perfect way to write it. The way Michael treated her, the way he reassured her he would be right behind that door was beautiful. For some reason that got to me, it felt loving and real. The way as soon as that door opened he was there holding and protecting her was my favourite part.
Author's Response:
It was hard to write :( I'm glad you think that was the right route to take as far as expressing what happened. I loved how Michael treated her too! I was swooning...he really is her knight in shining armor :') It's sweet to see. Thanks for reviewing and your input! Greatly appreciated :)
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2013 12:41 am Title: Chapter 25
Michael and Janelle playing mommy and daddy are just too cute! My heart was swelling but then it stopped after reading about Janelle's father. That was just sick on all types of levels. I don't even understand how people can do that and then live with themselves after partaking in such activities. Just...no. But then the mood brightened up again when they found out the sex of the baby *_* I just can't with Mike and his sly jokes. He ain't right lol. But thank was a lovely chapter my dear. Update soon. <3
Author's Response:
Arent they the cutesttt? They make awesome parents lol. And welp...Sorry for hault in your heart swelling lol "That was just sick on all types of levels" i told you i felt uncomfortable writing that!! But yeah i dont know how people go through with that either. Like....this shit actually happens and it's disgusting. "But then the mood brightened up again when they found out the sex of the baby *_*" lol you already knewwww welp oh well. Thank you, dear, glad ya enjoyed it. I shall try!
Date: May 15, 2013 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 25
I'm actually glad Helen got the doctor to come along. Janelle needs to start this process now. So by the time the baby gets here, hopefully she will have healed. She needs this!!!! I'm totally on board for the weekly sessions. She can't let the past incidents ruin her present nor her future. She has a good man in her life and about to become a mother to a beautiful baby boy. And she has 2 kids who love her already, prince and Paris. I think it's cute they see her as a mommy. Her and Michael make such a cute family. They both need each other and are really good together. Now we know for sure Blanket is on de way!! Lol.
Author's Response:
Yeah Janelle needs to get all this counseling done with so she can be healed and continue a normal healthy life with her new family. Like Dr. Daniels said, there's no time like the present! "She can't let the past incidents ruin her present nor her future. She has a good man in her life and about to become a mother to a beautiful baby boy. And she has 2 kids who love her already, prince and Paris." preachhhh! And yes Blanket is on his way! haha can't wait for that to happen. thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2013 08:55 am Title: Chapter 24
loooooooooooooooooooooooved it!!!!
Author's Response:
really?? this made me very happy! i'm really glad you loved this chapter :) thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2013 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 22
well damn that was a hot flashback ;) ;)
lmfaooooo I do remember reading somewhere about 15 year old Mike and some prostitutes too and I wouldn't be surprised if it was his brothers that set him up smh
Author's Response:
was it? ;) lmfao!
Yeah i think it was one of his brothers (or a couple of them, idk haha) i can see Jermaine doing something like that though cuz...i mean, it's jermaine lmfao
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2013 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 21
OH MY GAWDDDD Michaelllll is just too damn sexy in that shiny blue outfit I just ak,hfahfjahfakhjahgjhjdjfhff I'm mentally stripping him out of those clothes and having my way with him lmfaoooooo okay I'm done having my Invincible Era slut moment ;)
The signing is literally one of my fav Invincible era moments I love to see Michael interact with the fans, and even the way he be flirting with all the pretty girls smh I see U Mike you ole freak lmaoooo
Oh snap a surprise for Janelle this is going to be awesome :-))
The Picture is PERFECTION ^___^ Shy is the bestest I love her!
Author's Response:
HE REALLY IS LIKE THAT IS MY FAVORITE OUTFIT EVER YOU DONT UNDERSTAND JK YOU DO CUZ YOU JUST SAID THAT LMAO. Girl, i mentally strip him outta that outfit daily lmfao. I got a nice picture of him in it on my wall lol weeelp. Michael was so chill during the signing, it's one of my faves too ^_^ and Rashydia is amazingggggggg
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2013 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 20
*sigh of relief* that was not so bad lol At least Mama K knows about Michael and Janelle's relationship and that they're expecting a child. Joe was being Joe as always lmaooo
Awwwwwwwww I squealed when the baby started kicking lol *claps hands excitedly* A-freakin-dorable *___* :')
Author's Response:
Toniiii ahhhh! lol i got all these notifications for reviews!! haha
Haha nah it wasnt bad at all. Katherine and Joseph knows! Well, Joseph will know once Katherine tells him haha.
Baby is showin' signs of liiife haha thanks for reviewing!
Date: May 11, 2013 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 24
The chapter was good to me girl! Cute, sexy, funny, with a lil dramatic flair too. Janelle is gonna kick Michael's ass when she finds out he's still taking medication. I mean he's referring her to see a specialist about her problems but I bet he won't see one about his own. Smh. That is one fight I don't wanna see cuz I know she's gonna be pissed about him lying to her. Anyway, I hope Janelle gets better with her issues too. She needs to be able to sleep in the same bed with Michael. That'll both do them some good I think. And lol at rob! That's so cute. I can totally see Michael crackin up about that. Funny. Anyway, hopefully things get better once they get back to Cali.
Author's Response:
Ah really? I'm so happy to hear that lol I was actually embarassed to upload this chapter, i thought it was that bad. Janelle isn't gonna take any shiiit. I really want them to sleep in the same bed, never mind what THEY want lmao. Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2013 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 24
Fillers are good, nothing wrong with that. Enjoyed reading it. I was literally laughing at the bodyguard playing dress up, hilarious! Also, hoping Michael tells Janelle the truth about his meds soon, she's gonna figure it out eventually. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
I'm really glad you enjoyed it because I was struggling with this one. Rob had to do what he had to haha Gotta keep MJ's princess happy, no matter what it takes ^_^ Michael might tell Janelle what's going on with him, but then again he might not :/ Hmm it's a mystery lol. Thanks so much for your review! I really appreciate them :)
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2013 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 24
Now Alyssa...
Don't make me hurt you. This chapter was great! I was cutting up with the Rob scene. He's a great employee. Mike and Janelle are some freaks tsk tsk. Seems like Mike's mind was still in the gutter from the night before. As for the performance, I wonder how Janelle's reaction is going to be once she sees it. And *squeals* for them about to find out the sex of the baby. Hopefully Janelle will be able to get some professional help for her psychological issues too. But seriously, this chapter was great so stop whining before I kick your behind. I love ya <3
Author's Response:
You're just sayin all that cuz you're my wife *ugly cry* Michael and Janelle got it in and they gonna continue that ishhhh. Lol Rob is awesome. Hmm Janelle will have some feelings toward the performance. AND I DON'T AGREE STOP BEING NICE YA BUTT. I love you ..this reply sucked cuz I hate this chapter bYyYye lmao *hugs and kisses*
Date: May 01, 2013 12:22 am Title: Chapter 23
OMG I actually thought her dad was there!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2013 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 19
Alright I'm backkkkkkk!!! *Moonwalks and spins* lmaooo
Yessssss at Janelle, Mike and the kids spending family time making pancakes together that was beyond adorable :')
akfhahgahguahrguayheiaueihrfihfkjkff MICHAEL JACKSON FAVORITED MJFICTION lmaooooo and the fact that he reads She Got It ^____^ I fanigirled!! I bet his naughty self really did read fanfics tho lol
Ahhhh shit stuff is about to get real now that Mike's parents showed up -____-
Good Luck Janelle and MJ
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2013 08:02 am Title: Chapter 23
Yeahh!!!!!!!!! loved it :)
Author's Response:
Great to hear it! Glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: Apr 29, 2013 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 23
Damn Janelle.. She needs to go to a therapist STAT! Everything was so beautiful. They made love. Way better than any sex they've ever had. They're finally in love and it's beautiful. But Janelle's issues are in the way of it fully being free and beautiful. I'm glad she didn't hurt my Michael. He's so sweet and understanding. She needs to do all that she can to get rid of those demons. Love does conquer all but she needs just a little bit extra. As long as Michael keeps loving her and surrounding her with it, and she sees a therapist, she will overcome this and fully be able to enjoy being in love with her man.
Author's Response:
Yeah Janelle is struggling with her past big time now. She found a trigger and now she has to overcome it with professional help. You're right by saying that their relaltionship can't fully be free and beautiful due to this new psychological state Janelle's in. Only time will tell when Janelle gets over this hump. Michael's in too deep with Janelle to ever just leave now. He can't help but continue to love her, and seeing her hurt makes him want to help her even more.
Love hearing your thoughts!
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2013 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 23
Awww...that was just too cute how Mike took had them relive their memories but in a more passionate way. At first, I thought that Mike was gonna be mad when she told him about the bet but he didn't. And they got it innnn tsk tsk. *fist pump* That was some good lovin' right there! lol I just...umhm. That's all I can say.
And noooo at Janelle's memories of her father invading her mind. :/ Just when I thought that everything was ok. That's sad, man. Now Mike can't even enjoy holding her in his arms at night the way that he wants too because of it. Poor thing.
I hope that Helen will be able to help. And can't wait to find out the sex of the baby even though I already know tsk tsk. Anyway, I LOVED the chapter Baby Boo Bear! Don't wait too long to update.
Author's Response:
^_^ Michael being all sentimental and shiiiit. Yeah I was gonna make him be mad originally but then I was like 'ya know what? He needs to suck it up and stop being a little pansy ass.' So he got a sense of humor lol they finally did the doooo ayeeeee. I was gonna wait longer but I figured this would be a nice time to sex it up. Janelle...smh. Those triggers come at you at the strangest times. Sad stuff, man....Oh at you knowing the sex...meanwhile I'm pretty sure 100% of the readers know too lmao gawd. And did youuuu? *cries* love ya, honey bunches of oats! and I wont...just gotta get through finals next week then we'll be good to go with regular updates. *shimmies*
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2013 02:01 am Title: Chapter 22
Love it. Love it. Love it. Can't wait to see what they do back at the club. This chapter was amazing and well put together.
This sex scene did NOT suck at all. It was truly amazing, you did not lose your touch hahaha
[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2013 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 22
Yeaaaaaaah more flashbacks please!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Oooh another flashback request. I might do another one soon!
Date: Apr 18, 2013 02:19 am Title: Chapter 22
Great HOT one, girl!!!!!!!!!!
Please come back soon, for another flash back, maybe ..?
Author's Response:
wooooo! lol!
I might put in some more flashbacks later on in the fic! I didnt think this one would go over well lol!
thanks for your review!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2013 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 22
Yas at you finally updating. I was so done at Chris and Mike's interaction throughout the entire chapter. Chris is a mess. Done at Mike's flashback of his 15 year old self being locked in the room too. loooool He would be the one asking someone to put "them" back in. I can't. And oop! Janelle actually got a good deal by thinking that she had an ugly guy when she ended up with a sex god lol. And the sex scene...chilllleeeee *flails* I can't even. Anyway, this was a lovely chapter. Can't wait for morrrreee. I love ya Baby Boo Bear <3
Author's Response:
Ma'am it was only like 2 weeks psh. Lmfao you know you love Chris and Mike together dont even lie. Chris' voice was in my head like the whole time i was writing that whole mess of a chapter. The prostitute story had me dyyyyyinggggg. Like you won't even believe. He was such a goody two-shoes smh. "Janelle actually got a good deal by thinking she had an ugly guy when she ended up with a sex god lol." done at you calling MJ a sex god lmfaooo but he is so welp. i would've loooved to have been Janelle at that moment lol. The sex scene wasn't anything special lol i was slackin' but i'll make up for it hopefully meh.
Graciasssss. More shall come...especially when escuela ends. Love you more, my little....i need to come up with something for you *sigh* lmfao
Date: Apr 17, 2013 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 22
Loved it! Update again pls love this story
Author's Response:
Yay! I'll try to! Glad you love it :)
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: Apr 17, 2013 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 22
Lemme just say I died at Chris Tucker!!! Lmaoooo that man is hilarious!!! I love his and Michael's friendship. They were so damn cute and he was a real friend to him. And no worries girl! The sex scene was bomb, hell the whole chapter was bomb. I love all the detail and you capture Michael wonderfully. The things he says and everything. So funny how his and Janelle's relationship started. They went from sex to love. Lol. And ugh at all the LMP talk. Lol you know I can't stand that Elvis face ho. Lmao at Mike sayin it's a tie. Chile please! Janelle looks a million times better than Lisa ever has. That ungrateful trollop was never deserving of Mike and his seed and I'm so glad she didn't get it. I'm glad he has Janelle in his life now and their baby is going to be gorgeous. Now I hope Janelle finally gets some. Lol the girl has been suffering.
Author's Response:
lmao Chris is the maaaan! Chris and Mike are awesome together.
Lol well i'm glad you think so! I capture him wonderfully? yaaaas that's great to hear :)
lmfao i actually thought of you when i was writing some of the LMP stuff XD (i actually like her though loool but i'll try to calm it down with the LMP talk lmfao)
Janelle when get some sooner than you thiiink! She has been suffering and she needs some release lol
Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2013 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 21
Please update!!!!! love it :)
Author's Response:
I'll update soon! Thank you so much :)
Glad you love it!
Date: Mar 24, 2013 12:08 am Title: Chapter 21
Can you please post more this is good
Author's Response:
I will post more, yes :) Thank you for your review! ^_^
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2013 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 21
I always love when writers do the album signing as part of their story, its always just so interesting to read. Excited to find out why he took her back there, there's no telling what he's got up his sleeve. Amazing chapter, can't wait for the next!
Author's Response:
I do too! I couldnt NOT include the signing ^__^ plus it's one of my favorite MJ events so it was a must to write about.
Hmmm you shall see verrrry soon why he took her back there to reminisce on the past ;)
Thank you! I really appreciate all your reviews :)