Date: Sep 22, 2011 10:50 am Title: Chapter 4
Okay I'm going to be very blunt. I think this stroy is okay. But you need to go back and fix all your mistakes. Check your spelling. And you need to fix all the punctuation, use periods, commas, etc. And try to use more detail. All these mistakes can be a little distracting to some readers like me. But nice try, the plot to the stroy is good.
This is my opinion, you don't have to what I wrote.
Date: Jul 18, 2011 12:53 am Title: Chapter 30
not let brooke in!
Date: Jul 18, 2011 12:40 am Title: Chapter 27
GENESIS!!!
Date: Jul 18, 2011 12:06 am Title: Chapter 19
i hope Johnny isn't trying any alterior motives on Jessie.
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2011 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 13
i like the plot and everything about this story but your grammatical and spelling mistakes, to say the least, really make me want to stop reading. somethings are so obviously spelled wrong or used incorrectly. i don't understand your obliviousness towards it though. but like i said, i'll continue reading because, and only, i like the storyline.
Date: Jun 22, 2011 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 42
I hope everything is alright, I will miss your updates!
I hope the baby will be okay, and Michael will get there soon, Jesica needs him!
Date: Jun 09, 2011 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 41
awh im glad michael finally realized his mistake and that he love his child and backwoods.
Date: Jun 04, 2011 07:56 am Title: Chapter 1
hey, i like this story....:)
Author's Response:
Thanks....it means alot
Date: Apr 01, 2011 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 29
im loving this story everytime i read it . this is my 5th time reading part 1 and part 2 , you did great ! keep it up ^ :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much
Date: Mar 04, 2011 01:06 am Title: Chapter 38
Mane mikes an asshole. Ehh I hope he get his ass kicked or something.
Date: Mar 02, 2011 06:24 am Title: Chapter 1
What you could do is Michael's tours are going good and he doesn't want to stop touring for the birth of the baby. So he calls Jessie and suggests getting an abortion. Jessie gets mad and they have a fight. Then you can go from there!
Author's Response:
I like that idea thank you very much
Date: Feb 07, 2011 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 33
Or you can do that :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the idea though it was very nice
Date: Feb 06, 2011 12:59 pm Title: JUST A NOTE
Mmm Maybe make Jessie like Johnny and break up with Michael with him just like he did with Tatiana and you know Michael doesnt find out and Jessie is cheating on him and when he finds out.. the I dont know you can take off from there :) its just a suggestion if you want or twist it :)
Author's Response:
lol I was going to do that but I wanted janet to have some one to help her with Emma so I went with Johnny for that.
Date: Feb 06, 2011 02:06 am Title: JUST A NOTE
Do it, but dont be too harsh..
Author's Response:
okay thanks for the review
Date: Feb 05, 2011 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 25
lol i love when you said dont hate me on the chapter endnotes lol that was too funny, it kinda remided me of something they would say on icarly lol
Author's Response:
lol I love Icarly
Date: Feb 05, 2011 06:41 pm Title: JUST A NOTE
I think u shud go wit it!!
Author's Response:
thanks for the review
Date: Jan 31, 2011 01:56 am Title: Chapter 1
TELL HER AZZ TO GET OUT!! LOL I CAN'T DEAL WITH CHEATING! IT HURTS MY POOR HEART! Haha love it!
Author's Response:
thanks for the review
Date: Jan 31, 2011 12:47 am Title: Chapter 30
God I hope he doesn't do anything messed up like cheat. Great job.
Date: Jan 31, 2011 12:39 am Title: Chapter 30
God I hope he doesn't do anything messed up like cheat. Great job.
Date: Jan 29, 2011 12:24 am Title: Chapter 29
I think its super cute Johnny is a good man. Im happy. I love your story and it was a great update.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2011 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 27
I really like Genesis.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
thanks for the review I have an idea for the name
Date: Jan 25, 2011 06:25 am Title: Chapter 1
You should definetly do Genesis for a girl! It's a really cute name!!! :D
Author's Response:
thanks for the review I have an idea for the name
Date: Jan 24, 2011 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 27
rebekah goes better with jackson
Author's Response:
thanks for the review
Date: Jan 22, 2011 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 25
I hope she is pregnant. Update soon
Author's Response:
no problem at all
Date: Jan 16, 2011 01:31 am Title: Chapter 23
Goddamn jessie! smh that was close
Author's Response:
thanks for the review