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Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2016 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

Great job!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2016 04:56 pm Title: Prologue

I enjoy reading , and re-reading your story! Please write more stories.

Reviewer: Kristina_LikesMjD2 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2014 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

~This Is Amazing 😍👌👏🙌d84;a039;😋

Reviewer: BrooklynMarie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2012 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 10

Damn, 

Reviewer: BritBrat Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2012 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 10

Aww man...that's a tough pill to swallow. I think Mike should've definitely been there to comfort her through this. I just hope she doesn't do anything she regrets :-/

Reviewer: BritBrat Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2012 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 10

Aww man...that's a tough pill to swallow. I think Mike should've definitely been there to comfort her through this. I just hope she doesn't do anything she regrets :-/

Reviewer: BrooklynMarie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2012 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 9

AMAZING! I frickin squealed when I saw the update. Didn't dissapoint!

Reviewer: ZigZag Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2012 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 9

OMG !! Welcome back. Ive missed this story so much!! And sorry to hear about school, but take your time. Don't rush! We'll still be here!

Loved this update. So glad she's taking Michael's advice. Good girl. I hope she gets the closure that she needs

Reviewer: BritBrat Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2012 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 9

Omg they are so cute together! Don't ever leave us hangin like that again :P

Reviewer: BrooklynMarie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2012 10:16 am Title: Prologue

This story is so wonderful and all of the characters seem so real and relatable. I hope you are still writing it because it's truly incredible. This is one of the best fantasies I've ever read, no lie. 

Reviewer: ZigZag Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2012 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 8

Update please?

Reviewer: MJ_Desire Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2012 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 8

Lmao I loved the part when he said "Down boy! Joseph and mother conceiving me, yeah that did it." haha

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2012 11:06 am Title: Chapter 8

I should have known that Mike was going to find out regardless. Its good that she let down her guard and asked for help. She knew good and well that she couldn't do it alone. Moving on, I think that they both should stop being so stubborn. Mike needs to settle his differences with Ash and Alex needs to talk to her daddy.

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2012 10:41 am Title: Chapter 7

Dang Mike done messed up with his best friend. Hopefully Prince was telling the truth about how he felt. Mike just needs to go ahead and apologize to Ashley and quit being so stubborn. As for Syd, if I were Alex I would whip her behind. She shouldn't have gone on that date with Rick. I knew that that was a set up from the start. If I were her, I would have swallowed my pride and told Michael. But then again, I can understand why she didn't do it. She better get on her knees and PRAY!

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2012 10:17 am Title: Chapter 6

I'm glad it was Sam and not Alex who walked in on what happened. I still feel like Sydney might try to get him back and make Alex mad. That was a slick move that Mike pulled at the Alex's job. I just knew that Mike was going to follow Prince's request anyway. And I knew that Prince was going to propose. He finally told Ash that he loved her. Still skeptical about that though being as he was hitting her -_- I know Mike wasn't happy about that. The Beautiful Ones is my all time favorite song by Prince! I fangirled way too hard over that when I saw that you used it lol.

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