Date: Aug 17, 2016 01:09 pm Title: His house
I was a little iffy at the first reading it because you arranged it in the first chapter but now reading more into the story. I have to say you're doing a decent job so far! I cracked up when Janet found out what he used in her shampoo oh mj such a prankster smh. I'll pop up more and spread my comment sparkles on your story. Also if your interested in a banner I'll love to do one for you if you want.
Lol thank you i love a good critique. I want to make this story as good as possible. I'm gettinng better along the way i think. Adding more detail chapeter by chapter. The next story im going to write is going to be top notch lol. I hold this story dear to me though. If you have any more critiquing you can tell me. I love them. and thank you! I love reading reviews on how people view the story.
Date: Aug 17, 2016 10:50 am Title: His house
I'm glad Tiffany and Michael are friends now. Hopefully, they can be more soon. I don't think Michael should be upset that Tiffany made him hide from John. She was only trying to protect him. I think she needs to tell Michael who John's father is. I wonder what Tiffany's dad has been doing this while time. Amazing chapter!!! Please continue soon!!!
I will continue soon! I love reading your comments! <3
Date: Aug 10, 2016 11:44 am Title: The Drive-In
Tiffany needs to stop that mess. What kind of person does that? And having a friend who's father is the grand wizard for the KKK? Screw that. I'm glad she said they were just friends. Daisy seems annoying as hell. Lmao I can't believe Michael pissed in Janet's soap! That's hilarious! I need someone to think about me the way Michael does Tiffany. I really hope Tiffany isn't a complete bitch to him, though. He's too sweet for that. I know Michael won't give up on her. This is amazing! Please continue soon!!!
Haha.. Thank you soo much! Tiffany is stupid ahaha lmao
Date: Jun 22, 2012 01:45 pm Title: Milk
I like this story so far its really intresting. I just hope Tiffany doest treat Michael bad when she meets him. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response: This isnt going to be a girl meets boy, boy meets girl type lovey dpvey story but im sure you will love it
Date: Jun 22, 2012 06:20 am Title: Milk
MAGNIFICENT! PLEASE KEEP GOING!
Author's Response: Thank you i will :)