[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2012 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 21
Aww she is pregnant. They can raise it and get through everything together.
Author's Response: I agree they can.
Author's Response: I agree they can.
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2012 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 20
Water parks and theme parks are fun :D i been to six flaggs and boardwalk that have an beach behind it. I went canoeing it was so much fun. I bet nyla is going to have fun.
Author's Response: Ooohh I love sixflags 2 & disney world :D I haven't been on the canoeing but I been on the boardwalk with the beach behind it. That's cool! & yeah mike & nyla will have loads of fun. &thanks!
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2012 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 19
That's an beautiful they had and i know their relationship will last an lifetime. I love how relationships show love and understanding instead based off sex. They are an beautiful couple.
Author's Response: I agree they are a beautiful couple <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2012 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 18
Her mother is so too much. She almost like my mother except she don't criticize what i wear or go out with but she call me names like bitch,fat slob,retarted like my dad and a fuck up and always compares me to . The only ones that call me an slut and whore, is my sister and my dad. I used to it except the retarted part, it still hurts me. Im sensitive like nyla and Michael. Excuse my language. Wonderful great chapter. Much Love. :)
Author's Response: Aww I'm very sorry 2 hear that :/ but I hope there treating u better now...& yeah nyla doesn't deserve that kind of treatmeant me. &thanks so much 4 enjoying! :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2012 03:20 am Title: Chapter 17
Haha she sure did shock michael. I giggled when thinking what his expression would be. Lol he loves her outfits.
Author's Response: Lmao! Ikr he was shocked & nyla stepped her game up :D
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2012 02:51 am Title: Chapter 16
Nyla is pretty. Man Vanessa williams fits her mom personality good. I got an mental picture of michael in my head in his shorts and blue beater. I thought he is sexy. Hott damn lol Janet and her family are nice to her, im glad.
Author's Response: Yes she is pretty & yeah Vanessa Wiliama was perfect choice 4 this 2. Hahaha yes that sounds hot on mikey too & yeah his family is cool with her. &thanks!
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2012 01:39 am Title: Chapter 15
Yay she spending the night with michael and she can have her freedom. :D
Author's Response: Yaaay! XD!
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2012 01:11 am Title: Chapter 14
Honestly u know what i think. Ur an good writer. I don't mind ur errors. The characters have so much chemistry. Ur good with their emotions when u write it. I admired ur stories. Nyla and michael is an good couple. At least im honest. U improve soon, just take ur time. I use to write for fun now writing is my passion. Anyways great chapter dear. Much Love and God bless :)
Author's Response: Yes same 4 me & writing became my passion 2 :) I love it! Much love & God bless you too girly! <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2012 12:23 am Title: Chapter 13
It's ok girl. I make errors on my stories and im using my phone too. Nyla just like me, i get scared,nervous and insecure around me. Sometimes i feel like someone always looking and laughing at me.
Author's Response: Aww thanks 4 understanding :) all my stories r from my phone and maybe some tib bites r from the computer tho. Wow u share the same things incommen with her to? That's good u can relate to her. I understand..it's not a good feeling but it's just 2 ignore ppl I try that a lot myself. &thanks 4 all these reviews I reaaly appreciate that u enjoy this. :D
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2012 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 12
Aww. That's an beautiful moment til evil mom ruined it. I love the beautiful moment between Michael and Nyla when they said they loved each other
Author's Response: Ikr her mom always runs her mouth & has 2 rain on everybodys parades. Yes they are just so cute together now. &thanks :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2012 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 11
Michael ex is getting on my nerves. Don't she get anything through her thick skull? Damn she is an jealous bitch o.o lol
Author's Response: She is just stupid and indenial to. Michael dnt want her ass anymore. He's happy with Nyla now. But she just jealous. She never get michael back lolz
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2012 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 10
Aww Michael and Nyla are happy. Im in pain and it take an while for me to review. I hope u don't mind.
Author's Response: Aww it's ok girl take your time I understand.
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2012 04:43 am Title: Chapter 9
Aww he such an sweet gentleman and kind man. I love at how he treats nyla well.
Author's Response: He is such a gentleman & nyla deserves it to.
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2012 04:30 am Title: Chapter 8
Me and my son love spongebob. Hes an huge fan of him and hes 4 years old. My son loves michael jackson, cause he kisses his picture. I was like awww he adores him. I could of swore he said michael jackson. Cute huh? :D i can't wait til there date. :)
Author's Response: Awww that's sweet yes I love spongebob to. Aww I bet he is so cute to. :) that's great your teaching him about MJ <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2012 04:15 am Title: Chapter 7
Aww michael and nyla are cute together. :D
Author's Response: yes they cute! :)