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Reviewer: Ellah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2012 12:52 pm Title: Chapter A (5): Time After Time: Emotions & Confessions

I see Michael falling for Carolyn :P but what about carolyn? I hope she likes Mike too...You're writing too well!!! Continue :)



Author's Response:

Hello Ellah... I'm so glad! haha lets wait & see ;) Next chapter will tell a lot about Carolyn <3 Aww Thanks a lot sweet heart :) It really means a lot to me... Much Love, Monisha :P

Reviewer: DreamingOfMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2012 11:34 am Title: Chapter A (5): Time After Time: Emotions & Confessions

Aw MAN!!! Mike is too cute in this chapter.... great update btw! keep it up <3



Author's Response:

Hey Girl... I Missed you!!! Lol! Isnt he? ;) Thanks a lot love.... It reall means a lot to me!!! Much Love, Monisha :P

Reviewer: whatmorecanigive Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2012 11:16 am Title: Chapter A (4): Talks Till Dawn: The New Breath

Wonderful chapter !!! <3 You write very good and special and I think you know A LOT about Michael ^^ like about the thing with " winners and losers " and the stuff about Latoya ( hands washing ^^ )

I look forward to the next chapters, you really catched me !!!

BTW are you still reding my story ? I'd love to hear again from you <3

one quetsion : the photoshoped pic in this chapter, are the clothes Michael's wearing from an original pic or do you mashed his face with another mans clothes ? btw all you photoshoped pictures are great !!!



Author's Response:

Hey Lisa!!! Thanks a lot hun :) LOL! I'm so glad to hear that you liked it girl.... 

Awww.... Thanks a bunch!!! wow, I guess thats great to have you by my side!!! Thank you for your constant love, support and patience Lisa! i really appreciate that! <3

Yeah girl... just the school is so annoying lol! Thats why I havent updated my story for a long time! I'll be free in April :) I'll definitely read your story girl... I really love it! :P 

Yeah girl its Michael, in one of his photoshoots! He looks so handsome isnt he? ;) Here's the pic :) Wow, girl thanks for the comment about Photoshopping <3

 Michael 

Much Love, Monisha :P

Reviewer: I You We Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2012 04:05 am Title: Chapter A (4): Talks Till Dawn: The New Breath

Poor Carolyn

Love your writing style... continue! <3 Rose



Author's Response:

I guess she is, but Michael will be there for her... wont he? lets see ;)

Thanks so damn much Rose... You're so encouraging!!! Love you <3 <3 Much Love, Monisha :P

Reviewer: NancylovesMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2012 04:01 am Title: Chapter A (4): Talks Till Dawn: The New Breath

Nice Chapter go on!!! I like the phone conversation part :)



Author's Response:

NANCY!!! Thanks so much love :) really? I'm so glad you did!!! Thanks again for your support girl... Much Love, Monisha :P

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 14, 2012 02:59 pm Title: Chapter A (4): Talks Till Dawn: The New Breath

Awwhhh. Idk y but I had thus feeling that Carolyn wasn't going to call Michael! I'm glad she did! Happy Valentines Dayy!!

Author's Response:

LOL! May be Carolyn wanted to hear Michael's voice ;) I'm so pleased to hear you're glad love. Thanks a lot for reading & reviewing :) Happy Valentines Day to you too!!! Much Love, Monisha :P

Reviewer: Ellah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 14, 2012 10:33 am Title: Chapter A (4): Talks Till Dawn: The New Breath

Love this story so far, good job :)



Author's Response:

Woohoo A new reader!!! I'm So glad you like it!!! Thanks for your review :))) Much Love, Monisha :P

Reviewer: mrsmjjbarbie Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2012 02:50 pm Title: Chapter A (1): The Beginning

Sure! I'm from Philadelphia.



Author's Response:

Oh, Great!... :) Thanks for answering Donica :D Thank you for reviewing too <3 Much Love :P

Reviewer: whatmorecanigive Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2012 10:00 am Title: Chapter A (3): Its Only the Beginning...

Heiii first of all <3

that was a wonderful chapter and I'm so happy that Carolyn and Michael are now friends

and to your end notes : Dont worry, I'll always review like promised but sometimes it could take 1-2 days after an update because of the time zones. I'm from switzerland you know ;)

And !!!! you have 3 chapters and already nearly 30 reviews !!!! Like I told you this story's gonna be SO SUCESSFULL !!!!! I swear <3

are you still reading my story ? I was so happy to have a new reviewr, thank you agaig for the 4 reviews !! <3 I look forward to get more, I'm curious what you think of my story too :)

<<<<33333 wonderful chapter and I'm soooo happy that it came out like this. And I'm sooo curious *:*



Author's Response:

Hey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lisa.... :) 

Thanks a lot honey bunch... Yes, finally together ;)

LOL! Thats okay girl, I know you're busy too :) Ofcourse, I do and I'm so envious of you girl lol! Switzerland is really beautiful!!! Yeah, Time zones are crazy ^_^

Thank you so much Hunn, It really means alot to me! You guys are keep me going, I never thought this story will be good lol! Now I'm so scared of sucking lol! :P

Yeah girl, I'm reading... I just got my crazy tight schedule and I'm having exams starting from Monday :( Your Welcome Lisa... I'll be completely free in 2 months 'YAY!' As I told you before, your story is really good! And I really adore your Idea :) Keep it up! I'll definitely leave reviews girl :) 

Aww.. Thanks again my PYT! Do you really think this chap is good? Anyway, Thank you for your love, patience & support, love :) I mean it! Hugs and Kisses <3 Much Love :P

Reviewer: mrsmjjbarbie Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 01, 2012 04:16 pm Title: Chapter A (1): The Beginning

When you write, it just reads like you are from another country. Hmm... Guess it's just me!



Author's Response:

Oh really!? lol! But I'm not ^_^... <3 May I know where are you from? Just Asking :) Much Love :P

Reviewer: I You We Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2012 05:37 pm Title: Chapter A (3): Its Only the Beginning...

Interesting, they look cute together btw ;) love the pics, u made them?



Author's Response:

Thank you soooo much Rose :)) I really apreciate it!!! they do, dont they? lol! yes, I made them :) And so glad that you like it Rose... Much Love :P

Reviewer: I You We Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2012 05:31 pm Title: Chapter A (1): The Beginning

I love this chapter and the way you used words... :) 



Author's Response:

wow Rose hunn, Thanks so much again!!! I really appreciate it! Love you... Much Love :P

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2012 03:44 pm Title: Chapter A (3): Its Only the Beginning...

LOL! Mike was screwing up in the beginning. They would just make an adorable couple!! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

;) You're right :) he tried to make a conversation...lol! Thank you so much girl... I really appreciate your constant support! I'll try to update, currently working on 4th chapter <3 I get nervous everytime I update a chapter lol! Much Love :p

Reviewer: IAmOnlyLove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2012 12:56 pm Title: Chapter A (3): Its Only the Beginning...

this story is getting interesting!!

please update :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much girl... I'm so glad you like it :)

I'll try to update ASAP hunn, thanks for your lovely review <3 Much Love :P

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2012 12:54 pm Title: Chapter A (3): Its Only the Beginning...

im so happy they bonded finally they really make a cute couple..and i love her since of humor how she joked about her step mother i was laughing so much at i just couldn't stop laughing that was so funny..i bet that would make michael laugh foreal. lolz please update more when you can:) L.O.V.E.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Falisha :))) I'm so glad that they bonded too ;) LOL! wow really?! I'm so glad that I made you happy hunn <3 Haha I hope so ;) I'll try to update soon hunn... I'm working on 3rd chapter. Much Love :P 

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