Date: Nov 16, 2013 09:16 am Title: Chapter 65 - The End!
OMG!!! I'm in tears, I can't believe this story is over! Now all we are left with is crap (lol sorry but is true) thank God Waiting for you and the time traveler are still active cause you are one of the few GOOD writers in this website left, so at least I could continue to read your other stories.
Thank you so much for writing this wonderful story. You made us cry, scream in anger and laugh in happiness. We all fell in love with Schuyler because of you.
I hope you do a sequel. xoxo
well, damn that's mean lol, I won't comment on the other stories but thank you for your sweet compliment and for reading this story and I'll see you on my other stories. I really appreciated all the support. Much love. :) xoxo
Date: Nov 04, 2013 05:39 am Title: Chapter 65 - The End!
YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS !!!!! PRAISE JESUS THANK YOU FADDA IN HEAVEN. A HAPPY ENDING !!
and when you made Schuy slap Tatum, my spirits flipped and started doing the harlem shake.
thank you for not pulling a Shonda Rhimes on me and killing anybody (I have to admit knowing thiswas this last chapter my ass was clapping in anticipation of it.I was hoping you didnt kill her)
and that shout out tho, thank you a.Youre a wonderful writer had me all in my emotions on the trains, had peoplelooking at me all weird and stuff. Please come up with another story soon butfor now I just gonna read the others.
*still harlem shaking*
OHHHH That Patti gif, is like is moving right through me and now I feel *BEE GEES' VOICE*: I FEEL LIKE DANCING!!! I WANNA DANCE THE NIGHT AWAY!
lol, I told you it will all be good but no did you believe me? no, you decided to threat my life! tsk tsk shame on you
Now you know this couldn't end without Schuy slapping Tatum, she's been dying to do that for a long time.
You deserved the shout out, I really did enjoy reading your reviews. THANK YOU for taking the time to read to this story. I hope to see you on my other stories.
Much love!! xoxo
Date: Nov 01, 2013 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 65 - The End!
THANK YOU FOR THIS WONDERFUL STORY .HUGS
(((HUGS))) Thank YOU for taking the time to read it. Without you guys, these stories will still be in my computer somewhere getting old, collecting dust lol Much love! xoxo
Date: Nov 01, 2013 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 65 - The End!
I absolutely adored this story. And it saddens me to see it come to an end. But it was a beautiful love story. And you arean amazing writer. Thx for the great entertaining story. This was really a thriller. Lol
aww I did too but it had to be done. Thank you so much for your sweet compliment and for reading this story. lol, was it really a thriller? I guess I suceeded. Much love!
Date: Nov 01, 2013 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 65 - The End!
Its so sad to see a good story end. :/ Although I wasn't one of the most ACTIVE readers, I defiantly had to say this was one of the few GOOD stories on here. All that's left is a bunch of bullshit. This was a great story and I hope you'll come with another one!!
Aww that's very sweet of you to say. I am currently working on my two other open stories if you want to read them (Waiting for you and The time traveler) until something new of me sparks though that won't be any time soon. But either way I would like to thank you for at least taking the time to read this story. I appreciate the support on my writing. Much love!
Date: Oct 20, 2013 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 64 - It's a nice day for a White Wedding....
The picture of Schuyler on the bed, she looked so beautiful :') It was so sad to read Schuyler break down that way but she has kept that buried inside of her for too long. It was due to come out. I'm glad she was able to release the pain of her past and let it go. Michael is right, there's no more pain or worry in her future. She is going to be ok. The wedding was so beautiful and the gifs were perfection. Love the visuals you give us. Great job, Miss A!!!
Yes, Schuyler is one beautiful woman! Michael is lucky and you are right, those emotions were bound to come out sooner than later. She held on to the pain for far too long. And you are right, no more pain, just happiness ahead. I'm a visual person so I'm happy you enjoy them too. I think they help the story, don't you think? and thanks for the review!! xoxo
Date: Oct 20, 2013 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 63 - I'll do anything for you....
WTF!! I was not expecting this Helena girl to appear out of nowhere especially so close to the ending. She needs to back off. The gif where Schuyler gets slapped,I cringed but then the one where Schuyler slaps Helena back, I was rooting for her lol.
I can't believe you are ending this story, it's my fave and I feel there's still so much you could write about. It doesn't feel like is coming to an end but thank you for writing it. You have created a very entertaining story.
By the way, You need to make Schuyler smack Tatum too. I agree with mjsstreetwalking baby. Tatum needs a good slap, it is way overdue!!
Yes, Helena was a mess but as quickly as she came Schuyler threw her back out. lol I rooted for her too.
Awwww thank you so mych for your sweet compliment and yes, I'm sad that I have to end it but I really need to clear my head and take a rest from writing but don't count me out just yet. You never know I might come back. If I still have the support of ppl like you, chances are that I will write again. :)
LOL, I know everyone wants Tatum to be smacked. You'll see, that is all I will say. Thanks hun for the review. :))
Date: Oct 06, 2013 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 63 - I'll do anything for you....
Damn! Something told me that Schuy had a sister.
I can't believe the story is gonna be over in 2 chapters. It feels like it just started
Really? I didn't even know she had a sister. lol! jk...funny turn of events, huh?
I know. It does feel like the story is just starting but that's how I like it. I like to end it with a bang (no pun intended lol) rather than a boring, predictable conclusion. At least I try not to end it that way anyway.
Thanks for the review. :)
Date: Oct 06, 2013 11:36 am Title: Chapter 63 - I'll do anything for you....
Tatum wtf girl ....... was michael's dick that good you still bitter bout not getting it in ? why would you try to sabotage the man's happiness ? That man ain't want you. Get over it.
Helena. Helena. Helena. get a job. make your own gaddamn money and don't try to mooch off of your half sister.
MissA1485 ........ I really feel you and Shonda Rhimes share the same DNA. Please Please PLEASE. don't let any irreversible damage be done to Michael or Schuy or Ryne. My heart ain't gonna be able to take it. (Plus I'm gonna hunt you down and hurt you)
PLease girl. I love this chapter.
P.S. you shoulda made Schuy slap the thirst outta Tatum too though
Funny that you should mention that about Tatum 'cause let me tell you that I wrote Tatum and Schuy *record scratch* and that is what went down. LOL! I'm just kidding but I'll just say that this is not the end of Tatum. You'll see.
*sigh* Helena is just another gold digger, trying to get a glimpse of the better life. Schuy let her have it though.
Here you go again threatening my life.
Me and Shonda Rimes sharing DNA? Well, I could believe that.
I will just say you will see. Maybe I am Shonda Rimes. *wink*
Date: Oct 01, 2013 11:28 am Title: Chapter 62 - For All Time....
This was the sweetest chapter of them all. So sad you are ending this. Can't wait for more!
I know. It kills me to end the story but I've been so busy. I'm glad you enjoyed this. More to come and new chapter is up now. :) Thanks for the review.
Date: Sep 21, 2013 11:12 am Title: Chapter 62 - For All Time....
Awww this was so sweet I almost cried I mean I literally had tears in my eyes while reading this. Great chapter. :)
hi honey. Awww...I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)))
Date: Sep 19, 2013 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 62 - For All Time....
That was the sweetest chapter I had ever read!
haha yes, cliffhanger but Schuyler's answer is not the surprise for the next chapter...that is all I will say. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)))
Date: Aug 31, 2013 11:34 am Title: Chapter 61 - Whispering Words of Wisdom, Let It Be...
This whole story was a mind game. i thought they were dead then they weren't but I loved it. Worderfully written. I'm curious to know how you are going to end it.
Thank you, it really was. It was so hard to write it with out spoiling it. You will see soon. Thanks for reading, your compliment and for reviewing. :))
Date: Aug 14, 2013 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 61 - Whispering Words of Wisdom, Let It Be...
This is one of my favorite chapters that was so cute Ryne helping his daddy I love watching michael as a father he's an incredible Dad. So sad this is coming to an end maybe whenevee you decide to write again we can get a part 2 to this like the captivating stranger that would be awesome.
Mine too. I am so happy and relieved that the truth is finally out. lol It was hard to write and keep it inside without letting you guys know about it but sad that this story is nearly coming to an end. Me too. I love MJ clips as a dad. He was an amazing dad.
"So sad this is coming to an end maybe whenevee you decide to write again we can get a part 2 to this like the captivating stranger that would be awesome." <--- You never know *wink* ;) Never say Never because I truly love these characters but I definitely need a writing break. Thank you so much though for your loyal reviews and for reading the story. :)
Date: Aug 13, 2013 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 61 - Whispering Words of Wisdom, Let It Be...
I'm so happy with this update. I cried when Ryne was helping Michael
Yay!! I'm glad. I told you things will get better. Ryne is such a good boy. He loves his daddy very much. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: Jul 20, 2013 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 59 - A New Beginning....
I love you again ............ let me go drown in my happy feels. This chapter is like sunshine and daisies and naked Michael on a cold day. I love you again.
that being said, you better not pull a Shonda Rhimes and f*** up my entire life with the ending. I'll be mad and I'll hunt you down ............ (I'm watching you)
You love me again?
*Sings* Oh Happy days!!!
I told y'all things will get better but y'all didn't listen.
"that being said, you better not pull a Shonda Rhimes and f*** up my entire life with the ending. I'll be mad and I'll hunt you down ............ (I'm watching you)" <<----But damn, why you gotta be like that?! I haven't done anything....
Date: Jul 20, 2013 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 58 - Jermaine's Interference
Uhhhh I missed my chance to hear you respond to my cursing you out for playing with my feels. ENTEEWAYS .... Jermaine wtf ??? He's like sooooooo out of timin, bringing up that whole thing. Who cares if she wrote letters, she didn't send them and wasn't like a crazed stalker fan like summa them BJ's. Shonda Rhimes, girl, the ending of this story better be happy (yes I'm threatening you)
Date: Jun 23, 2013 10:55 am Title: Chapter 58 - Jermaine's Interference
Wow stuff steady coming out about shuy. I really don't see any wrong in what she did and what jermaine is trying to make her out to be is just crazy. So what if she was a fan and just wanted to meet him that don't make her a bad person.
Right! Exactly! Everyone loves Michael's music but the Jacksons have dealt with so many crazies that Jermaine does not know what to think atm and Schuyler has never given them a chance to get to know her. However, you are right it does not give Jermaine the right to treat Schuyler like that. No matter what, she loves Michael. Thanks for the review hun. More to come xoxo
Date: Jun 03, 2013 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 57 - In the arms of an angel....
Girl I don't think anyone saw this coming. I don't even remember what I thought would happen lol so this whole story was not what we thought. (Mind blown)
Total mind blown, huh? lol I had y'all have been fooled but don't worry, at the end it will all be alright :) thanks for the review hun xoxo
Date: Jun 02, 2013 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 57 - In the arms of an angel....
Omg....I am so confused. Is Michael dead? And if he is, it is just so sad. I can't even give a "proper" review. I am just speechless
awww you will find out soon. More to come. Don't worry, everything will be alright :)