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Reviewer: mjstreetwalkerbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2013 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 56 - Those were the days....

hold thee hell up ............. if she died October 15th, same day/night as Michael's accident then in the present when she's in the shower before the flashback it's October 16th which means she's alive ???

I think to say I'm confused is the understatement ofthe century. I need to understand and the mystery of Michael and Schuy needs to be solved and revealed !!! Can't wait

Reviewer: mjstreetwalkerbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2013 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 55 - Every Face Tells A Story....

I can't take this no more



Author's Response:

Calm Yo Tits Gif photo tumblr_mesnr907gq1qihztbo1_500_zpse2d44488.gif

LOL You'll be alright!

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2013 08:22 am Title: Chapter 54 - The Jealous Husband....

Michael got out that car like a BOSS lol this is officially my new favorite chapter can't wait to see what happens next please update soon.

Author's Response:

LOL!! Yes he did!!

 

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Reviewer: mjstreetwalkerbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2013 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 53 - We found love in a hopeless place....

Good Lord Jeezus if this story ends up like Selena, I'm going to jump on the ferry, go to the top of the Statue of Liberty and jump.

Idk why I'm still reading this because I already know she's dead and I know I'd probably die inside when I read about her death but this mystery needs to be solved.

Please just let this be a dream, or Michael's thoughts while he was sedated from the Pepsi burns. I can't take all this feels



Author's Response:

"Idk why I'm still reading this because I already know she's dead and I know I'd probably die inside when I read about her death" <-----

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Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2013 09:50 am Title: Chapter 53 - We found love in a hopeless place....

Wait is somebody getting jealous? I mean I understand how Michael feels about her and I think it's cute and really sweet how he just wants Schuyler for himself but he got to let her live her life thought. And as for the lealousy part maybe Schuyler needs to remind him of the exact same words he said to her about Tatum. He knows how much she loves him so he shouldn't even feel that way. They really need to talk.

Author's Response:

Yes ma'am. They do. Hopefully is not too late. Thanks hun for the review :)))

Reviewer: mjstreetwalkerbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2013 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 52 - Here Comes The Sun....

WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME ? I can't I legit can't ....... she's cured ? so how the bloodclat she died then? did she even die ? I'm gonna go read over this story and try to figure this shit out. you're toying with my emotions here girl.



Author's Response:

lol!! for the millionth time I'm sorry. You will find out soon what the big secret is. Two more chapters to be exact :))

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2013 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 52 - Here Comes The Sun....

I'm happy to know that she was cured but I also wonder what happen to her also guess I'll have to wait to find out. I love this chapter by the way it made me happy.



Author's Response:

I'm glad it made you happy. You will know what happen soon. Two more chapters to be exact :) Thanks for still reading my story :))

Reviewer: mjstreetwalkerbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2013 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 51 - A Glimpse To The Future...Or Is It?

why, why must you do my feels this ? I can't take it. I'm hurting.



Author's Response:

I keep apologizing to you XD I promise it will get better :)) Thanks for sticking around  <33

Reviewer: skipper Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2013 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 51 - A Glimpse To The Future...Or Is It?

Aww... loved this chapter.So sweet

Author's Response:

Thank you <333 more to come soon :))

Reviewer: vinaya595 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2013 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 51 - A Glimpse To The Future...Or Is It?

oh ho!!!!!! Now, I am more interested than ever. ou have done  the right thing. All I request is to post on a regular basis. <3 <3 <3



Author's Response:

haha I'm glad. You won't regret it (I hope) and I will try. New chapter is now up, sooner than I expected. Thanks for sticking around :))

Reviewer: AppleheadJax Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2013 10:14 am Title: Chapter 51 - A Glimpse To The Future...Or Is It?

I'm dying here :( this is soo sad >.< the part where michael was crying made me shed tears. Yup, im hating this sadness, but I love it too. </3 I wonder what's gonna happen in the end x

Much Love, 

Shiniee xx



Author's Response:

Hi Shiniee. Aww I know is tough right now but a big twist is about to happen and you'll see what it is. Thanks, Drea xoxo

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2013 09:20 am Title: Chapter 51 - A Glimpse To The Future...Or Is It?

Drea your breaking my heart. I can't wait for the happy ending.



Author's Response:

:(( Sorry. But I promise you is worth it....

Reviewer: mjstreetwalkerbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2013 04:48 am Title: Chapter 50 - Someday I Will Understand....

and its chapters like this that make me wonder why you killed her (you're still unforgiven btw) they're perfect for each other



Author's Response:

 (you're still unforgiven btw) <--- Crying Gif photo tumblr_meucl91X4W1qihztbo1_500_zps254fc338.gif

I know they are. But it had to be done. It taught Michael a lot of things. :(((

Reviewer: mjstreetwalkerbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2013 04:30 am Title: Chapter 49 - Michael and Schuyler's Love Song....

I still dont like you for killing her but this chapter was too sweet for words.Slowly preparing myself for when you write about her death.



Author's Response:

I'm Sorry Gif photo tumblr_m28rqz87BV1qihztbo1_500_zps0445dbdd.gif

Forgive me!! I do not wish to write that scene but it must be done. Thank you for still reading the story though. I appreciate it. xoxo

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2013 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 50 - Someday I Will Understand....

Michael iis such a sweetheart. I'm still sadden that Schuy passed away and that the story is going to end soon but hopefully they'll be together again at the end.

Author's Response:

it will be a bittersweet ending, I promise :)) thanks for supporting this tiny story :)) means a lot to me xoxo

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2013 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 1 - A Thriller Night (Part 1)....

hahahahaha love it!!! BTW, nice pic at the end, it made me go aaaawww!! ^_^



Author's Response:

haha thank you <333

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2013 10:17 am Title: Chapter 49 - Michael and Schuyler's Love Song....

This chapter was so sweet, can't wait for more. :)

Author's Response:

Aww thanks hun. I thought so too. I'll try to get more soon xoxo

Reviewer: mjstreetwalkerbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2013 09:06 am Title: Chapter 48 - Price Of Fame (Part 2)....

But you didnt have to kil her !!!!!  :'(  life now has no meaning :'(  I hope the ending makes me much happier than I am now



Author's Response:

awww I'm so sorry. I know is sad but you'll see why this had to happen. At least Michael had love for the little while she was in his life and Schuyler learned the real reason of living. Think about it, if she was healthy and due to live for a long time, would they have taken their love for granted? maybe so. It would have been a different lives for them and maybe Schuyler and MJ would have never been. I promise you a happy ending. Thx hun xoxo

Reviewer: mjstreetwalkerbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2013 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Schuyler's Diary....

I  can now understand her a bit with this chapter. She truly loves Michael otherwise she would have never pushed him away so many times. Please dont kill her ...... my feels cannot handle it



Author's Response:

She really does :)))

"Please dont kill her ...... my feels cannot handle it" <--- Oops :((( Sorry

Reviewer: mjstreetwalkerbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2013 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 11 - On My Way To You....

uh uh Michael was wrong for that .....saying I love you while she was in the car. I felt her pain even though you never wrote it in. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Hmmm....he was being cautious. And Yes, Schuyler did feel some kind of pain. She loved him from the beginning even if she chose to hide it from everyone. Thx hun xoxo

Reviewer: mjstreetwalkerbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2013 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 9 - No More Secrets (Part 2)....

this chapter was not okay.  :'( got tears coming out my eyes and my emotions  and feels are all out the window with this one. It was touching how Joe "console " Michael but still showed his true self when he said that she was not for him.I like seeing Mama Kat as the peacemaker and soft hearted but strong woman in fiction as she is in real life. I'm absolutely hooked !!!!



Author's Response:

Awww geez I'm gonna be apologizing to you a lot, I guess. Haha. I'm sorry. Is tough. I know Michael was in pain but Schuyler was trying to save him from an even bigger pain that he will endure later. Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story. xoxo

Reviewer: HumanNature24 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2013 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 48 - Price Of Fame (Part 2)....

As I hate to admit it, I knew she was gonna die. Kind of like a feeling so I prepared myself for when I read that part. I feel sorry for Michael and especially that poor, little innocent baby. 



Author's Response:

At least you were prepared for this moment. Others weren't. But now is only happy memories, you'll see. *sigh* MJ and Ryne. Is tough, is gonna be worse to read that moment. So I'll try to make it short as possible. Thx hun xoxo

Reviewer: vinaya595 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2013 08:17 am Title: Chapter 48 - Price Of Fame (Part 2)....

not really. All this time I kept in mind that Schuy wasnt alive. (oops) Personally, I really get disappointd wth sad endings. I love this one so please dont let it have a sad ending. Let it be a beautiful happy ending!



Author's Response:

At least you prepared yourself for this moment. I don't like sad endings either. I promise you the ending will be happy. Thx hun xoxo

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2013 04:54 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Thriller Night (Part 1)....

- Congradulations -


Happy 200th Review!


 



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! xoxo

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2013 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 48 - Price Of Fame (Part 2)....

oh darn, I still had the hope she was alive but somehow I felt this was going to happen. Looking forward to read part two.

Author's Response:

Aww I'm sorry. But now is all good memories to come :) thx hun xoxo

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