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Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2014 12:08 am Title: Chapter 24: Promise

Why do I feel like Raine is about to join the military or something? I wonder what this is that she plans on telling everyone on Sunday. On the other hand, Janet and Jake are great friends to her. Their friendship is so cute. And aww at Michael making up for lost time by spending the night clowning around with her. :)



Author's Response:

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girl, can you image what it's like to good around with Michael. I'd give anything to spend a day goofing around with MJ. I imagine that it would be amazing!

Reviewer: TifftayluvsMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2014 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 23: Oxnard

Heyyyyy! Ok so you don't know how happy I got when I saw how much you've been updating lately! Girl, you have been going innnnn on these last chapters! I'm so glad you are updating more frequently on this lovely story :)

Also Michael is getting really freaky deaky aint he? Does he want Raine and I to pass out? Lol I love it!!! Can't wait for more! :) 



Author's Response:

I can't even explain what's gotten in to me these last few chapters. I've just been inspired I guess :) plus, you guys have been waiting long enough haha! I'm so happy you've been enjoying the story! I really get worried that I may leave you all disappointed.

 

I definitely think he wants y'all to pass out! Lol

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2014 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 23: Oxnard

That was sweet of Raine to do something special for him for his birthday. But lawd at Mike lol. Homeboy was hungry...literally! And then Raine had to go and surprise him by saying that she reads too lol. They are something else *Kevin Hart's voice*



Author's Response:

Girl, you haven't seen anything yet!!!!!!

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2014 03:29 pm Title: Introduction

Of the sexiness? I really, really, REALLY hope you're referring to the sexiness! ;)



Author's Response:

That and so much more!!!!

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2014 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 23: Oxnard

Well, damn! I was NOT expecting that to happen. I'm glad things are going well for them, even if they don't get to spend as much time together at the moment. I hope they can keep things a secret until she's of age. <3



Author's Response:

Guuuuurl, this is only the beginning! :)

Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2014 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 23: Oxnard

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue that was sexy OMG I gotta ...umm... take a clod shwer :)):):)) lol!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

OMG! Hahaha I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter

Reviewer: Missbabyblue333 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2014 11:48 am Title: Chapter 22: Completion

Pleaseeeeeee update soon!!!!!



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I will! :)

Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2014 04:12 am Title: Chapter 22: Completion

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!!!!):):):)::)):):)::)::):)):):) LET THE LOVE MAKIN... BEGIN!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Oh girl you know it!

Reviewer: Itshumannature03 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2014 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 22: Completion

Gnaaw, great chapter! Keep it up :)



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Thanks so much!

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2014 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 22: Completion

Aww...they're so cute. Lawd I couldn't have been Raine in that studio session for LIML. I just couldn't. I would've had noodle legs lol. I'm glad that Janet is seeing that her brother is happy with her best friend though. Knowing that Janet approves is all he needs since Janet is a little troll.



Author's Response:

Noodle legs? C'mon na. Lol. Lowkey, I wouldn't have been able to be in that room either. I would've have passed out or something haha! She definitely is a troll...lil nosey ass. 

Reviewer: oblivion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2014 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 22: Completion

woah things heating up between them two :o mcnasties lol and shame on michael for tryin get her to ditch school shame but they cute



Author's Response:

McNasties though!? Hahaha I love it!!!! 

Reviewer: RiahAweSomeNess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2014 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 22: Completion

I spent a lot of time away from this site. That I lost touch with most of the stories I was reading. But, I kept coming across this story. I had this feeling that kept telling me to read it again. So when I finally did It was one of the best decision I made. I'm hooked. I literally stop whatever I'm doing to read. I have like 30 stories saved in my favorites but I do have a top 5. Which are those who I saved as my favorite authors. And you're on that list. I love this story can't wait for the next chapter. I'm too excited..

Author's Response:

OMG! This review made me go crazy! I love getting comments like this. It shows me you guys really are enjoying this story and that I'm doing a good job keeping you all entertained. Thanks so much for reading! And more will definitely be coming soon! :D

With Love,

Dreamer

 

PS. I read this review aloud to my housemates haha.

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2014 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 22: Completion

Aww, this was such a great chapter! I'm so glad Janet realized just how serious their feelings are for each other and is okay with their relationship. Looks like they were getting pretty hot n heavy, too! ;)



Author's Response:

It's great having the approval of your siblings right? Especially when you're dating your siblings friend...although time not sure if I could actually let it slide! Haha. 

 

Hot and heavy isn't enough to describe that. Haha

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2014 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 21: 21 Guns

Should've known that Janet would show her disdain for catching Raine in Michael's room. LaToya is so daggone nosey smh. And aww that's so sad what happened to Raine's dad. I figured that something was going to happen to him because we barely heard anything from him throughout the story. It pulled my heart strings at the burial when it finally kicked in for Raine that he was really gone. Good thing Michael was there to comfort her. She needed that. I see her mom is getting comfortable letting Raine go off with Michael too. And that's a shame how her cousin was trying to talk to ole dude after what had just happened. So disrespectful. And I can see why Raine threw away those numbers. Idk why people who haven't talked to you in ages always feel the need to "step in" when something like that happens knowing good and well that they wouldn't even be there if it hadn't happened (if that makes sense). Anyway, can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

This is a super long review my boring twin. Haha. Okay okay I'm joking. Anywho when has LaToya never been nosey. Haha even in the stories I read on here she is nosey as hell. And yes I know what you mean. I think we've all experienced that with folks being there or popping up under different circumstances. It's just terrible when folks show up for all the wrong reasons. Know what I mean? 

Reviewer: oblivion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2014 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 21: 21 Guns

oh i adore this story! their relationship is so cute and i feel her pain on losing a parent. i love stories i can relate to :) cant wait for next update



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. :)

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