Date: Oct 18, 2015 05:23 pm Title: Introduction
Wow! California has terrain that looks like everywhere else in the world!
Date: May 27, 2014 03:59 pm Title: No Room For Doubt
This story is so good! I can't wait for the sequel!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!!
Date: May 27, 2014 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 25: Collateral
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
I kind of hoped he would come back home ealier and meet her at the airport just like in the movies :'(((
Author's Response:
These gifs!!!!! OMG! I love them!
Date: May 27, 2014 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 24: Promise
Omg, she is going to tell him on Sunday? Girllll.... She should have told him earlier.
I have the feeling it's going to break his heart
Date: May 27, 2014 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 23: Oxnard
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Date: May 27, 2014 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 22: Completion
YYYYAAASSS MICHAEL! SERENADE HER! YYYAASS!
LMAO! They got caught! Michael really lived every single of words of that song lool!
They are some adorable freaks haha! He can't get enough of her, how cute :) But I'm glad she didn't ditch class for him tho. I love them
Date: May 27, 2014 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 21: 21 Guns
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO
I had the feeling something would happen to her father :'((
Raine's cousins Melissa was on some hoe shit! Hitting on some man when her crying Raine's dather deeath... SMH
Date: May 27, 2014 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 20: The Morning After
Awwww, that was cute... and sexy. I bet it won't take long before it goes further. I hope she'll be in the studio when he records The Lady In My Life lol! They are adorable together
Now, Janet caught her, I hope she can make up a lie. IDK if Janet is cool with her brother dating her best friend!
Date: May 27, 2014 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 18: Venice (Part I)
FINALLY !!!
Date: May 27, 2014 10:36 am Title: Chapter 6: The Looney
FINALLY!
I thought the day would never come lol
"I love you, Michael. I love you so much! I'll do anything for you! I'll even give to to you. I'll give it to you good." LOOOOOOOOOL
Date: May 27, 2014 10:13 am Title: Chapter 4: Jake
AND I STILL CANT BELIEVE HER MOTHER PUNCHED HER. What the hell?
And Raine doesn't really not know who Michael is? Poor girl must have been living under a rock
The Jackson 5/Jacksons weren't local... right?
Can't wait for Jake to tell her about Janet and Michael lol
Date: May 27, 2014 09:32 am Title: Chapter 3: The Encounter
LOOOOOOOOOOOL! If I were 13, alone, in a parl and a 21 yo man was talking to me, I would have done the same!
She still doesn't know it's Michael?! GIRL
Date: May 27, 2014 09:23 am Title: Chapter 2: We Don't Need You
Jealous of her own daughter ?!!
The fact that the father said he would write tells me he is not coming back anytime soon... I hope I'm wrong
Date: May 27, 2014 09:09 am Title: Chapter 1: Rapper's Delight
I already love it! I was wondering if Michael was famous in the story but then I read about the fans at the gate with the posters. But what surprises me is that she didn't recognize Janet lol? Girl
Now, what's the deal with the mother?
Date: May 16, 2014 07:54 pm Title: Introduction
Aww it's over BUT there's a sequel, yessss! Im so proud of Raine for choosing to enlist even though it meant leaving Michael and the people she loves most. Being a military brat myself, I can relate to why she felt she needed to do that.
This was such a cute story...I could just eat it up. Ok, now I'm going to read, No Room for Doubt.
Oh and they were so cute exploring each others bodies like that...whew...damn, she lucky.
Author's Response:
Awesome! I'm soooooo happy that you enjoyed the story. Haha. It really means a lot because I'm soooo self conscious about my writing. Any who, it's cool that you were living that lifestyle too! Believe it or not, I was going to enlist but was talked out of it by family members. Sometimes I wonder what life would be like if I actually did go. :)