Reviews For Swim Good
Reviewer: Father Anderson0627 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2012 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: Jan 10, 2012 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Srry for the no spacing thing...I Did this on my ipod so that explains it. I do most of my storys on my ipod..... thanks for telling me. God bless! ;)
Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed 
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Date: Jan 10, 2012 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2012 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Like mrsmjjbarbie said; work on splitting it into paragraphs/ spacing to make it easier to read, other than that this was beautiful!!:)
Reviewer: mrsmjjbarbie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2012 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: srry, i really need to work on my grammar >.< . Oh and thanks, god bless :)
Date: Jan 06, 2012 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Save for a few spelling mistakes and no spacing, this is really good. I enjoy listening to that song by Frank Ocean sometimes.
Author's Response: srry, i really need to work on my grammar >.< . Oh and thanks, god bless :)