Date: Mar 06, 2012 10:58 am Title: Chapter 17: The Big Mistake
NO! I can't believe The Blue gangstas would do that!
Sure, they are Blue gangstas... BUT STILL!
Thank you so much for this chapter, I can't wait for the next one.
This story is awesome :)
Lots of love, Elvira
Author's Response:
Thank you very much :) Next chapter will be coming very soon.
Date: Feb 29, 2012 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 17: The Big Mistake
Yup, yup. Knew Richard would do something perverted and sick like that. DAMN RICHARD! Fucking asshole!!!
lol! "Michael is bigger than you!"
So true, so true...
Author's Response:
Lol nice review. Sorry i haven't continue for such a while. I will update chapter 18 tonight.
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2012 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 16: One Big Step to One Big Mistake
:) YAY! You updated! I was like all depressed for awhile because there wasn't an update. But now it's all good!
O.M.J! Richard is a sneaky son of a bitch! I don't know what he's up to, but OOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHH MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNN he's up to sometihng evi. I'm not sure what it is. At all. My thought were that he's either going to kill her or fuck her. Maybe kidnap her... I'm not sure. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
yeah. Sorry I haven't updated in a while, I've been having trouble lately. I'll be updating plenty now and thanks for your happiness. ^_^ You'll know what he's doing by the next chapter ;)
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2012 09:30 am Title: Chapter 15: Phase 3: Richard's House
I think Richard is planning on setting Sam up, so Mike will think she' s cheating. Mike will be so hurt he will go back to being a blue gangsta. He might fuck Nia too just to hurt Sam. I hope i' m wrong.
Im kind of mad at Sam, why did she not tell mike about Richard.
She's pregnant right?
Author's Response:
Yes she is. everything is happening all so fgast for her that she's kind of scared. You'll get more of it later today :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2012 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 12: Richard?
Don't do it... Hell naw it's just gonna turn Mike back to a cold hearted persona then he would hate all woman's and Elbe evil again.. And I won't have my chance lol jk about that last part.. But really don't... Or if you do let Mike know.
Author's Response:
You'll just have to wait and see what she'll do. Maybe she will maybe she won't. :)
Date: Jan 29, 2012 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 12: Richard?
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. The next one should be coming soon :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2012 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 11: Sweet Love
Ohhhhhhhhhh my Good God! They they they they waaaaaaa. They did it XD Aaaaand they said I Love you!! Gosh this was amazing *happy dance* lol
Author's Response:
Its true. :) And they both feel so fine about it too. Not a thing is telling them this is wrong.
Date: Jan 23, 2012 08:34 am Title: Chapter 10: I Know She Cares
Samantha is awesome for doing that :D I really like this story!
Please continue <3
Author's Response:
I agree. I'll update as soon as i can
Date: Jan 22, 2012 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1: Misery
OMG, I just heard Blue Gangsta today, I fell in love with it and immediately put it on my iPod. I can't believe I've missed out on this song for so many years!
Author's Response:
I know right!? It's a great song I instantly feel in love with! That's why I had to make a story based on it. It's going to be the next MJ song in my IPod once I get money on my card, but still. :)
Date: Jan 21, 2012 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 9: A Changed Man
B.t.w I LOVE your drawing!
Date: Jan 21, 2012 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 9: A Changed Man
I really like this story :D It's unique and interesting! Mike being a gangsta and stuff. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Ill try to update again today. And thanks for liking my drawing :)
Date: Jan 20, 2012 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 8/Part 2: Caught Up In The Moment
Poor Mike! That is embarrassing
Lol he fucked her panties.
Author's Response:
It is pretty embarrasing for a man. But u could tell he couldnt control himself. Lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2012 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 8/Part 2: Caught Up In The Moment
Awww, it was kinda sexy lol for a moment there I thought he was gonna finish the job for him or something xP
Author's Response:
Lol. No. Samantha is still pretty unsure about how Michael feels about her but she's are starting to get skeptic of him.
Date: Jan 18, 2012 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 8/Part 1: Caught Up In The Moment
continue!
Author's Response:
I will :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2012 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 8/Part 1: Caught Up In The Moment
Omg yay finally they are mo ing forward sooo cute!!! I'm loving Michael!
Author's Response:
That's a bit true, but yeah. Lol.