Date: Aug 02, 2012 12:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh. My. God. Your writing is SOOOOO BEAUTIFUL I'm totally in love! Love you girl! You are an amazing writer! I can't believe after all these years as a member in this site I never discovered you! You ROCK girlfriend!!! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!!! XOXO
Date: Mar 01, 2011 02:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Awwwwww that was beautiful! I couldn't decide whether to smile or cry so I did both :']
Awww, thanks dear...you're so sweet. When my writing touches people's hearts I feel that it was not just random blurbs written in vain; I feel it was worth it. So thank you so much again for taking the time to read it and leave a review :)
Date: Feb 16, 2011 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh man! im such a baby, this made me cry soo much! D= its really sad, and just remids me of when MJ died, just thinkinng about his children, and how they dont have him anymore, its depressing for me.....
anyway, i thought this was a FAB short story! really great, i loved it so much! i think i can say, although its short, its one of my fav. storys here! thanks for that! =D
Oh Jeesh! Thanks so much! It means so much for me ur appreciation. Thank you so so much again. You made me grin like silly this morning :D
Date: Feb 12, 2011 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Fine my son. You sacrificed yourself for me and all my children here on Earth"
Made him sound a bit like Jesus. Lol, please don't take that offensively, because I really did love the story, it was beautiful and nearly brought me to tears. You have a lot of talent, and it looks like you're putting it to good use, so good job and keep it up! :)
Date: Aug 28, 2010 03:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nice story. But, if I may give a suggestion... In traditional religious views, God is omnipotent, (all-knowing). I think it might be better if you tweaked it a little so that God is aware of her birthday. Because I couldn't help it...it made me laugh a little when God said "What?" Also, having him grant a 'wish' rather than say a prayer, or a 'request' made him sound like a magic Genie a little bit. Please do not take offence. I just want to give you my honest opinion. I know you want this story to be romantic and dramatic...not unintentionally humorous. Otherwise, very good story. :)
Ohhh well, yeah. Don't worry, I am not offended, I am always open to suggestions and comments. Thx for taking the time to read it. Hugs!
Date: Aug 26, 2010 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww, sweet (:
Thx so much for taking the time to read ....hugs!