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Date: Nov 24, 2013 12:21 am Title: The Songs

What a great chapter :D it was so cute, I kept going "awwwww" lmfao! They're adorable.  And I adore Chris tucker. He's always been hilarious in my eyes. He's so goofy, it's funny <3

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Date: Nov 24, 2013 12:12 am Title: Inducting The Hall Of Fame

They're not even married yet and they still have these arguments lmfao. Lord help them. Lord hell them both lol. And you didn't offend me :) I swear there are a lot of things Michelle says about MJ's life that I 100% agree on. Especially the part about him wasting money. He seemed to do that a LOT. You would think someone who's so humble would be careful with his money lmfao

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Date: Nov 24, 2013 12:00 am Title: The Sleepovers

I agree with this entire thing

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Date: Nov 23, 2013 11:58 pm Title: The Arvizo's

Ugh, the arvizos -___-........... Anywho, apart from them, this chapter was good :) it feels like a filler lol. And lol at MJ showing off his intellectual skills 

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Date: Nov 23, 2013 11:51 pm Title: A New Proposal

I swear I reviewed for this chapter... I must've forgotten lol. But anyway yaaaaas I'm happy she said yes :) I thought she wouldn't lol. We'll see if this can last though. This couple has been THROUGH it lmfao

Reviewer: Lenetta16 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2013 03:11 am Title: My Plan

Awwwww he really did miss her :,). Lol I'm sure she felt bad about going off on him. When she said that MJ wouldn't let his kids out of his sight, she was right lmfao. I knew he would never enroll them in that school lmfao. Lol and it always seems easier to get 2 mothers into a room, but not 2 fathers lmfao.

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Date: Oct 18, 2013 02:27 am Title: Return of The Ex

There was so many points during this chapter where I was like "well, he does have a point/well she does have a point" lmfao. At least when they argue now, it's not as bad as their arguments during the 80s lol. So it's good to see that they're not handling arguments so recklessly and so immature as the other times.

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Date: Oct 18, 2013 02:13 am Title: The School Issue

LMFAO!!!!!!!!! This chapter was hilarious! Lmfao omg as soon as MJ was like "well hey, maybe I should call up all my exes" looooool I knew that he was pressed. I love argument chapters for some reason looooool. This was great but watch them get back together eventually. They are so damn messy.

Reviewer: Lenetta16 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2013 01:58 am Title: The Birthdays

This was a nice chapter :) there wasn't any drama going on and everyone was happy. Just a nice, easy-going chapter. But I'm sure it will be drama soon enough lol

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Date: Sep 17, 2013 11:11 pm Title: Michael: His Version

I'm BAAAAAAACCCCKKKK! I can't wait to see this from Michael's point of view!

Author's Response:

Glad to have you! Hope you have been enjoying it! Part Three coming in 1-2 weeks. I've been writing it and re-writing it like crazy! I'm like Michael "never totally satisified!" lol.

Reviewer: Lenetta16 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2013 01:39 am Title: Bella's Birthday

*starts crying real thug tears* I'm glad he finally decided to celebrate :,) I still hate the chapter of when she died...



Author's Response: Yeah. I hated writing that chapter. Especially having to kill her off so soon. I just honestly couldn't think of one thing that could pull them apart but that.

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Date: Sep 08, 2013 01:30 am Title: PART FOUR

Lol looks like the 15 date plan didn't work out too well lmfao

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Date: Sep 08, 2013 01:22 am Title: The Conversation

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww how cuuuuute ^__^ I'm glad they got all that out lmfao

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Date: Sep 08, 2013 12:56 am Title: Katherine's Phone Call

And we're back to this again lmfao. She can never REALLY let go of Michael. And he can't let her go either. They need to fave the fact that they love each other and are soul mates lol

Reviewer: Lenetta16 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2013 05:42 am Title: Time To Move On

Ah so we're at this stage again. I can't say I'm surprised lmfao

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