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Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2015 09:30 pm Title: Part 3

You know what they say "never know what you have or what someone means to a person until they're gone," but I'm glad he finally owned up to it and got that 1000 chance to make it right. 

Great story 

Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2015 09:25 pm Title: Part 2.

This is one little live triangle 🔺 I see, but you know that saying "Can't have your cake and eat it too "

Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2015 09:20 pm Title: Part 1.

Wow. That's really something. I can understand Tam's feelings though. 

*Ps:* if I was friends with Michael Jackson, (like Tam said) I know he doesn't mean to, but he'd make me feel some type of way.

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2012 08:45 pm Title: Part 1.

i like your story andi understand what u mean i dont get many reviews either but i still keep writing because it's fun. and u can checkout my stories if you want..and keep it up:)



Author's Response: I'm the exact same way! :] & sure i'll check em out.

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2012 06:14 pm Title: Part 1.

WTF?! Mike why did you leave. I can tell that he loves her. Urrgghh lol

Author's Response: bhahaha :")

Reviewer: mrsmjjbarbie Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2012 05:32 pm Title: Part 3

This was good. Things aren't really spaced out in this chapter, which confuses me because the other two were. Sure you should make more stories! Make 'em interesting 'cause I wanna read more. To catch more attention, try making a banner or post pictures of the title and/or characters.

                         <3 Mrs. Maraj-Jackson



Author's Response: Thank you so much hun! I definitely will make them interesting. And thanks for the advice :]

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