Date: Jan 07, 2013 11:48 pm Title: A New Life Awaits...
I love this sooooo much :3:3:3:3:3
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2012 12:09 am Title: A New Life Awaits...
Temmpppppppppppppy!!
I'm not sure this is....great lol BUT it's done. PHEW!
Lemme know if it needs tweaked! :)
Love,
Leah
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2012 08:25 pm Title: A New Life Awaits...
Wow, ok. This chapter evoked a lot of emotion in me. As you know lol. I'm sorry I was all kdslfjksladjfklsjafdsa. I can completely understand what Michael was feeling though.
ANYWAY! Chris and Jazz...this is comedic genius. Your mind, astounds me with it's brilliance. I can't wait to see them all wigging out at doctor's appointments, ultra sounds...
Fighting in the doctor's office, blurting out inappropriate things lol.
Can totally see where this is headed.
AMAZING!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2012 03:16 am Title: Revealed
TEMPY!!!!!
I just got done with this so I thought i'd post it in your reviews and see whatcha thought :)
I'm working on another option for you two in case your like, EH *shrugs* but don't want to be rude :p
Ok, Banner ONE.
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2012 07:37 am Title: First Impressions
You do stories that are so amazing. I love she met his family now they can get married. anna should also have a baby.
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2012 03:40 pm Title: Revealed
Omg!! I always forgot to review but I am now... this story is soooooo good,
This reminds me of a movie i just saw. The woman had to trick this man to fall in love with her then she would run with all his money but by the end, she realized she really did fall in love him and gave him all his stuff back. Omg you should totally do that lol. Sorry I am so excited lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2012 01:02 am Title: Revealed
AHH!!!!!!!!!!
Then...AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AND THEN.....AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
SO much here...just GAH.
I want to wrap my arms around Josephs neck and shake...poor Anna. But, you know she handled it SO GRACEFULLY. I <3 Anna so much. She's such a doll.
And then Michael....WHEWSH SOMEONE...has been listening to the mammal song.
AND NOW. GRACE?!?!?
OMG! Poor Michael/Anna. This is going to be huge.
BUT I LOVE IT!!!!!!
BRILLIANT JOB TEMP.
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2012 03:28 pm Title: The Dare
YES. THAT WOULD HELP. SKLDJKLSJDKLSJ TEMPY NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2012 03:25 pm Title: First Impressions
OMG SKLDJSKLJSKLDJ FIRST OFF,
I WAS FLOORED.....FLOOOORED
F.L.O.O.R.E.D. When this popped up in recent updates I was like.
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA?
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
O.M.G. *Strawberry faint* YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
SKLJKSLJDS OK. This chapter made me like Chris again...I mean ok I guess he just made some bone head mistakes but what he said to Michael about breaking his neck to protect Jaz, Anna, and Mike really made me emotional I was like......AWWWW OK CHRIS. ITS OFFICIAL. I can put the gun away now :p
SECOND. TEMPY....I SWEAR TO GOD IF SHE IS SICK I AM GOING TO COME UNGLUED.
WHAT IS GOING ON WITH ANNA?!?!!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!? IS IT HER PAST? SOMETHING THAT SHE DID?! WHAT IS IT
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
NO. I do not accept this as a cliffhanger. It has been rejected. I'm going to need you to rewrite thi-....
AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok. Update soon.
Author's Response:
ROFL OMG LEAH! I LOVE YOU AND YOUR REVIEWS> ROFL Would it help if I said Im working on another update as we speak?
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2012 02:30 am Title: This Isn't Goodbye..
Hi,sweetie!
My GOD....!!!!!!!
fdghtrhtdfhfgfdhdfhdgbd !!!!!!!!!
THIS IS BRILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLIANT!
You make me jump UP and DOWN !
Seriously!
DON'T keep me WAITING dear!
no! no! no!
i LOOOOOOOVE IT!
I'M TRULY ADDICTED TO THIS STORY!
ANd I'm NOT lying!
I am SO HAPPY that she'd moved with him! OOOOOO......I think I know what Michael was talking about.....hmmm? If...you know what I mean... (giggles)....
NOOOOWWWW....
You have such GREAT ideas...so brilliant,funny,sweet,romantic....
Is this a dream?
I hope NOT!
MUCH L-O-V-E!
Date: Jan 14, 2012 08:55 pm Title: This Isn't Goodbye..
*claps* bravo, tempy! I loved it so much. Pleeeeeeeeeease update.
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2012 08:55 pm Title: This Isn't Goodbye..
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:D Your so gonna kill me. BUT SERIOUSLY UPDATE
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2012 08:52 pm Title: This Isn't Goodbye..
FIRST OFF.......
SKDJSLJSLD You mentioned me! :D
Second of all,
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW JAZZ. She needs happy moments....HAPPY MOMENTS. Cause I am like, *SOB SOB SOB* JAAZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
AGH.
This moment with her and Anna...tender, poignant...beautiful. I LOVE IT. It's so...something that would happen between two close friends in a situation like this.
You can FEEL how much they mean to each other in this scene.
------------------------NOW-------------------------------------------
WHAT THE DEVIL IS GOING ON?!?!?!!
CALIFORNIA SUNSHINE TEMPY....I MUST KNOW!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2012 02:57 am Title: New Beginnings
Moto Moto.
........So nice you say it twice.
OKAY SO. I've just written another chapter lol and during the whole damn thing I was obsessing over Jazz and Chris and seeing as how you are actually, you know...SANE and went to bed....
...I'm leaving another review.
WHAT EXACTLY ARE CHRIS AND JAZ DOING AT THE END OF THIS CHAPTER?!?!?!!?
IT'S DRIVING ME INSANE. I mean, I KNOW that the last time Anna peeked in they were doing the nasty but....seriously? Are they that lkdfjdlaskfjasld crazy rofl that they fight, Jazz nearly kills Jazz, and now all of a sudden they are FINE?!
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA?
JAZZ! You better have gotten one hell of an apology because let me tell you....
Chris has been on my hit list ever since last chapter.
AND CHRIS KLSJDKLSJDKLSJDLS You have issues. Talking to your girl like that and expecting her to put out...in the middle of a grungy nasty hallway.
I mean, EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
That's just sick, and wrong children.
SICK
AND
WRONG.
Secondly, I just thought of this. Excuse the fact it's way out of order but you know how my brain works by now.
OK, SO.
THEY AREN'T GETTING MARRIED....even though I nearly had a happyism when I saw the picture of the engagement ring in your chapters notes...but she's living with him at Neverland?!
COME ON WOMAN! I WANT A DAMN WEDDING.
ROFL can you imagine? Jazz helping her plan a wedding.
................BAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHHAAHAHAAHAH
Love. It. Anna's gonna have a ministroke.
OK i'm done now, i'm offically crashing and going to bed.
Well probably. As soon as I listen to Stranger in Moscow again.
....AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAND possibly Dirty Diana.
DIRTY DIAAAAANNNNNNNAAAAAAAAAAAAAa No
DIRTY DIAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNAAAAAAAAAA NO
..Ok Diana is offically a go.
BUT AFTER THOSE TWO SONGS...AND MAYBE THE SAD MICHAEL VIDEO AGAIN IM DONE. SLEEP WILL OFFICALLY BE MY FRIEND. :P
Sorry for the crazy review but...i'm sleep deprived.
lololol
Leah
Author's Response:
OMG LEAH I love you! The longest review I've ever had ad trust me, it just made my day reading this! ROFL OMG
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2012 08:29 pm Title: New Beginnings
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Okay. Seriously You about gave me a heart attack in the last chapter with Anna and Michael breaking up and now they are all together and happy and well adjusted and...
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
I am screaming like a little girl. Or a psychotic, overobsessive freak but you know...let's go with option one.
LOVE this chapter how Anna is like ROFL so freaked out she showers outside...and then Michael and Chris walk up.
I mean seriously, how many times is Chris going to see Anna? LOLOLOLOL
AND you know...Anna and Jazz just have that perfect friendistry....they are so funny and cute together.
I about died so many times in the first part of this chapter I am not even going to try and comment on each one because it would be six thousand words long and you'd be all like DAMN Leah...chill out.
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK *Breathes threw teeth to calm down.*
AMAZING, BRILLIANT. So in love with this story it's almost damn ridiculous. I have to like, pinch myself when i'm doing reading to remind myself it isn't real....it's just a story.
SLJ:LSJDSKL LOVE IT TEMPY.